Storytelling RP: Avataria #2

[Amargaard]

Amar, why do I feel like if the two of us won't write a thing, there will be nothing written?

Don't forget Clock, but yeah, it is the sad truth - most of the players are gone :l

I thought you were on a fast from that stuff, lost control?

Nah I'm only smoking in the weekends now :b

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If I updated [208] and added a longer story to it, with more characters etc., would one of you guys then promise to make [209]?

Oh, and the list of characters's current situation on the wiki is complete!

 

[Kanadaj]

I can promise, if its up to this, then I'M willing to finish the story with just the 2 of us xD

 

[clockwork2]

Hrrm, ok then.

 

[Amargaard]

It's done, [208] has been updated!

 

[Kanadaj]

Hrrm, ok then.

Don't take me wrong, I did't mean you shouldn't play, I meant that even IF you don't, I will keep playing Avataria :3

 

[clockwork2]

I meant am smoking on weekends. But ooook...

 

[Kanadaj]

Umm... Someone should write something... ^^

 

[Amargaard]

My new school's pretty tough when it comes to homework / decreasing my spare-time, and this thing is pretty dead, but if I find the time, I'll write the next post

 

[clockwork2]

Well, I posted some stuff, I really hope this RP ain't dead...

btw, just edited the Wiki, I added more knowledge to my own chars background. And added more depth to the knowledge of Fel energy, it mainly stems from overall knowledge that evil magic can be....addictive.....

 

[Arcisal]

Dead as good mate.

 

[Kanadaj]

Not really

 

[Ironside]

Personally, I kind of lost ideas on what more to do.

 

[Amargaard]

btw, just edited the Wiki, I added more knowledge to my own chars background. And added more depth to the knowledge of Fel energy, it mainly stems from overall knowledge that evil magic can be....addictive.....

Even though it is pretty logical that evil magic can be addictive, it hasn't been stated anywhere in any of the posts - thus it is not considered official Avataria lore, and shouldn't be in the wiki

Dead as good mate.

Yeah, it's no secret that it's a hard time for the RP, but I wouldn't call it dead. The only solution is making progress in the important parts of the storyline, as I said earlier.
Perhaps we could make another list of events that should be implemented in the story?

Like:

(A quick summary of what could be the story's possible ending)
*Dracor, Aaron and Vayne reaches Hillcrose Top, and defeats Asorath.
*Talban, with the help of the desert people, gathers his split up troops in the Arachi desert, and finally reaches the Arena, where they defeat Lillith.
*With the rebels controlling some of the key positions in the Wasteland of Evil, Dracor's Hillcrose Top-forces combined with Talban's Arena-forces decides to make the final siege on the Citadel of Evil.
*Meanwhile Zynn, who appears to have taken control of Greatwood forest attacks the Rebel Main Camp, and Am'ar's forces have to defend it.
*The defense and the attack both go well, and the rebels are victorious.
THE END

Personally, I kind of lost ideas on what more to do.

You could always use someone else's characters, if you want a break from your own
But again, I think you should try to get Regex back into the main plot, by combining his plot with the main plot somehow

 

[Ironside]

The very thing of Regex getting revived kind of troubled me, I didn't have and still don't have any plans/ideas for him.

 

[clockwork2]

what happened to Taera?

 

[Arcisal]

IMO, too many characters now. Maybe I'll find away to get rid of a few.

Besides, how many of us are as active on the Hive compared to a month ago? Definitely not me.

 

[Ironside]

I'm as active as I was actually.

 

[clockwork2]

Hey hey hey, no knocking off chars without permission.

 

[Amargaard]

The very thing of Regex getting revived kind of troubled me, I didn't have and still don't have any plans/ideas for him.

I'll think of something..

what happened to Taera?

I'm pretty sure she's the guardian of Excalibur, a soul chosen to follow and guide the wielder of the weapon, which is Kareena

IMO, too many characters now. Maybe I'll find away to get rid of a few.

Besides, how many of us are as active on the Hive compared to a month ago? Definitely not me.

True, way too many, and I'd be glad if you did that
Me neither, but I'll still hang around

Hey hey hey, no knocking off chars without permission.

Since when did you need permission to kill chars?

 

[clockwork2]

No no, I thought that was Claira, lemme check.... Also waaaaa???
EDIT: I just checked, yea guess I did curse Razet. And oops, gonna have to change a few things...
So where is Claira?

 

[Amargaard]

Claira is some female elf you once rescued from the jail of the evil citadel, but I have no idea what happened to her. Taera is, as I just said, the guardian of Excalibur, which you made up at the time Kareena got possession of the weapon

Nothing has ever been wrong with killing chars - since I started the RP, one of the totally unchanged rules have been like this:

*Every character in the story are equally important. My characters necessarily doesn't have to be the most important ones, and everyone may use other player's characters in any way. That means they are allowed to kill them too, but do not use that to your advantage against your most hated fellow player, simply because you disrespect him. Keep in mind, we all are contributors to writing a great story - and that he can do the same to you.

 

[Arcisal]

No hard feelings eh?

 

[clockwork2]

Don't kill Aaron, he's like a fictional son to me, same goes to Alaina. Fictional Daughter, well ya can, it's just really saddening to have some chars die T.T

Unless they deserved it... And I guess Claira could be considered dead, or lost really, like the Aarons.

 

[Ironside]

Thing is, it's time this ends so we can begin a third sequel. We can all agree that we don't have much left to do here except for removing the remains one way or another.

 

[Kanadaj]

Iron, we still have to finish the plot with a big bang, and we are preparing it :3 But I'd also say, that from now on, noone should create new characters. I hope all of us agree at that.

 

[Ironside]

I don't know, to me it seems that it's over when the king dies.

 

[Amargaard]

No hard feelings eh?

Nope, I'm a lover of peace, and my RP should not be a place for hard feelings ^^

Don't kill Aaron, he's like a fictional son to me, same goes to Alaina. Fictional Daughter, well ya can, it's just really saddening to have some chars die T.T

Unless they deserved it... And I guess Claira could be considered dead, or lost really, like the Aarons.

It is saddening when characters die, but otherwise, it wouldn't be an exciting story you know. It's not gonna end like "And they all lived happily ever after" :b
We haven't heard of Claira in a loooong time, and nobody knows where she is, so I really wouldn't mind if she remained out of the story. The Aarons are gone?

Thing is, it's time this ends so we can begin a third sequel. We can all agree that we don't have much left to do here except for removing the remains one way or another.

We are heading for the end, true, but a lot can still happen on the way
And I say it once again, the only way to get faster to the end, is to stick to the main plot, and making progress there, instead of making hundreds of new sub plots

Iron, we still have to finish the plot with a big bang, and we are preparing it :3 But I'd also say, that from now on, noone should create new characters. I hope all of us agree at that.

The plot should truly end with a big bang (which will probably be the fight with the King). I'm against the creation of new characters as well, except if they are useful to the main plot

 

[clockwork2]

The Aarons ended up in a realm of Darkness, I put em there because I wasn't using em, and they'd have to be together to be unified. So I put em in a realm o darkness.
And yea, Claira is pretty much MIA(Missing In Action).

 

[Kanadaj]

Hey guys, just to boost the mood a bit, here is a WIP I will most likely redraw it once more, then put it into the environment which is important as well (Somehow I can't rotate the image, so you better rotate your screens )

WIP Image

EDIT: I hope its visible now

 

[Arcisal]

Wings look disproportional to the body. Make them bigger.

You could add an underbelly or a few spines sticking out just to make it look nicer.

But nice job anyways.

 

[Kanadaj]

Wings look disproportional to the body. Make them bigger.

You could add an underbelly or a few spines sticking out just to make it look nicer.

But nice job anyways.

Well as I've said, its a WIP, I'm still struggling with locating the wings the body is unfinished ^^

 

[Arcisal]

Anybody home?

 

[Ironside]

Yes.

 

[clockwork2]

Yea, I'm gonna be offline for 22 days, really sorry guys, heh. just wanted ya to know.

 

[Amargaard]

To be honest, I don't think you are gonna miss anything, but have fun while offline

 

[-Peper-]

Just went back here, I was without any internet connection.

 

[sanofa]

"I've been inactive for quite a while now, and I probably won't be able to come back here because of personal reasons, so I've left my account everything to do with it to my close friend, code6435. I'm very sorry to have not comeback earlier to tell you myself, but you probably won't be seeing me, or rather only I've only left. Until we will possibly meet again, see you.

-sanofa"

And ends the message he wants to tell to everybody here.

I'll introduce myself again.

My name is code6435, or just code is fine, and I will continue playing this RP until it ends. I may sometimes, or every so often, have grammatical errors, so I wish you would help me correct those. My last thing to say is, Nice to meet you all, and hope you all will bear with me.

 

[-Peper-]

I've seen you on the hive, but I can't remember when. Btw welcome and let's finish it till the end
EDIT: Oh actually I've seen you before on RPB.

 

[Amargaard]

You are very welcome Code/Sanofa, and about grammatical errors - I didn't notice any in [213], actually it seems you are a very talented writer

 

[sanofa]

I'm not very good when it comes to writing, but I have strong reading abilities.
I'm trying my best to improve my (Godforsaken below A marks.) English language.

If I broke any rules at all, please don't hesitate to tell me to correct them. I have utterly major flaws in my life so I hope I don't fail this as well.

EDIT :
I've heard you're making a Warcraft 3 map with this Role-Play as the base idea.
As I'm the same level as sanofa when it comes to editing, I won't help much with the triggers and whatnot. But if it was up to writing details and skill descriptions, I might be able to help.

 

[Amargaard]

Everything's fine in [213] - though I think I recall Vayne flying over the Wall of Horror and the rebel base camp, but I'm not sure at all. And since I wanted the characters to be together anyway to easier continue the main plot, it's completely fine

The maps are paused at the moment. We might resume our optional projects if this RP gets as lively as it was back when we first talked of creating them

 

[Kanadaj]

Yay! I've actually finished my English exam brought forward from May :3

Sooo let's see... Vayne is back, with new powers, having fought with his darkness, and now exhausted... Nice, I'll tweak the story (and the timeline) a little tonight, and possibly bring the final battle closer.

 

[Amargaard]

Two posts this day, it satisfies my soul to finally see some action in here again
Remember that next post, [215], begins chapter XLIV / chapter 44

Oh and Kanadaj, remember that there are several Aarons - Original Aaron, Yellow Aaron and Blue Aaron (Which has Aaron's powers and personality split evenly between them), but great post!

Recently, I've been working on the wiki, which is nearing in on 200 pages. You are very welcome to join me. I'm also working on a huge post, which hopefully will make a notable progress in the main plot - just to let you guys know, I'm still alive

 

[Kanadaj]

Tbh I'll keep the right to edit my post as reading back I see writing in the night took it's toll... Or at least I'll keep it until the next post by someone else...

 

[Amargaard]

As long as it's the last post, you can change as much as you want. If editing any of your older posts, I'd like to be notified of the changes

 

[Kanadaj]

Edited my post, a bit after sanofa wrote, and added Clarox storyline

 

[Amargaard]

So Clarox is no more, but he surely had an awesome death
Yay, Am'ar is gaining respect from the rebels! ^^

 

[Kanadaj]

Heh, Am'ar deserves it :3 And anyway, he'll be a character of A#3, so it's important to be well-known
I've thought I should remove the demon since he only made things more complicated.

As things are, I've started to prepare for the final battle - forwarded the position of Zynn so he is already a "big player", and started the strategical locationing of him. It's up to us whether he joins the battle and on which side if yes - if it's up to me, I'd twist his diplomacy a bit, but the details will be a secret until the time comes
Moved Dracor, Aaron (I guess he is the original) and the riders back to the camp, so as many characters are there as possible. We should finish the side stories soon too - Rex, Talban, Regex and Kargath... I think as of now we should concentrate on these if we want to finish :/

 

[sanofa]

Yes, I would like to end this quickly and quickly start the new one.

 

[Kanadaj]

Hmm I'm in doubt... I love Dracor's character, but in so many scenarios I could write he dies, and he is quite overpowered right now... So I don't know whether to kill him or preserve him for A#3... It's a difficult decision -.- Maybe if I do that... That could do, and would fit all problems... *thinking*