[Campaign] Story of the High Elves

[Binsu]

Wow, another project from you. Here are my feedback about this project of yours.

To start off, it looks really promising like your Tides of War but at its current state, it has lots of typos to be honest. Even in your first post that is noticeable like you misspell Screenshot into Screenhot and there are some mistake also in your dialogs if you are to look at your Screenshots. You should definitely fix them or maybe ask help from your grammar fixer or whatever name you call those who corrects spelling or grammar mistakes. The story also looks unclear due to the repetitive words there which makes it confusing like how you describe those Elves that flee and those elves that flee that didn't flee.... and whatsoever. This specific statemnt bugs me out really due to how unclear it is.

Overall, it is a good project but still need some work from you so good luck and reps to you!

 

[Forsaken]

so, how's it going?
good luck with the project....this is one of my favorite races in Warcraft universe

This is really stoped, cause i'm focus in Tides of War, and i have plans for continues this, but it will be hard.

Wow, another project from you. Here are my feedback about this project of yours.

To start off, it looks really promising like your Tides of War but at its current state, it has lots of typos to be honest. Even in your first post that is noticeable like you misspell Screenshot into Screenhot and there are some mistake also in your dialogs if you are to look at your Screenshots. You should definitely fix them or maybe ask help from your grammar fixer or whatever name you call those who corrects spelling or grammar mistakes. The story also looks unclear due to the repetitive words there which makes it confusing like how you describe those Elves that flee and those elves that flee that didn't flee.... and whatsoever. This specific statemnt bugs me out really due to how unclear it is.

Overall, it is a good project but still need some work from you so good luck and reps to you!

Thanks, yeah ! i know about the grammar xD

 

[Chaosy]

hey! how have I missed this. nice looking thread!

 

[Heinvers]

Great ideas you have Forsaken! Overall it looks promising! Too bad that Sylvanas will only make cameo appearances
Anyway great job

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

If you are too busy to keep this project running i can help maintaining it or executing your ideas.

 

[Forsaken]

hey! how have I missed this. nice looking thread!

Great ideas you have Forsaken! Overall it looks promising! Too bad that Sylvanas will only make cameo appearances
Anyway great job

If you are too busy to keep this project running i can help maintaining it or executing your ideas.

Thanks, if you are interisting, you could continues the campaign. Cause i really don't know if i will.

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

Pm me all the staff of the campaign.Anyone willing to follow me is welcome

 

[Forsaken]

Well, good news for everyone !
I have send the campaign for Theoden of KoMe,and he will continues the campaign, i will just help him with ideias, and this thread, and like he said "Anyone willing to follow me is welcome" i agree, if someone want join, tell us, by the thread or pm.

 

[Razosh]

The best of luck to you Theoden.

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

thanks mate

 

[Heinvers]

So you will continue Forsaken's ideas? It could be interesting!

 

[Chaosy]

So you will continue Forsaken's ideas? It could be interesting!

yeah that's the big question when a project change owner. How much will change from the original idea

 

[Forsaken]

yeah that's the big question when a project change owner. How much will change from the original idea

i have asked this for him now, after he tell me i will updated the page xD

 

[Heinvers]

Update

Update regarding Story of the High Elves!
I posted two new screenshots.

Reveal

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

Here's what is new

Prelude

All that will change is that it will be a little bit playable rather than a simple cinematic


Chapter One

Our hero , whos name i still cant remeber but i will , has taken both the king and the queen north of silvermoon to evade the scourge.He has to keep them alive until reinforcements from Lordaeron arrive.

Chapter Two

"hero name" , whom i havent desided yet , has arrived north of Heartglen village in Lordaeron.His quest:to find the Silver Hand and ask for help.

Thats all for now.Suggestions and comments are welcome.
And Heinvers will post a couple of scrren shots from the new maps.
Forsaken will also contribute since he started it but the main work will be done by me and Heinvers.

The main idea and story will remain the same.All i will add is a "side" story of a Paladin of the Silver Hand who will march north to save the remaining elfs.

 

[Heinvers]

Update

Just posted a 3rd screenshot!

Reveal

 

[Ujimasa Hojo]

I just read the plot. Just some clarifications. Is the Northeron you're referring here what is currently known as the Twilight Highlands in WoW?

 

[Footman16]

I also had this question but to clarify Northeron is purely fictional.

 

[Heinvers]

I just read the plot. Just some clarifications. Is the Northeron you're referring here what is currently known as the Twilight Highlands in WoW?

No, he's referring to a northern region of Lordaeron.

and the other who flee don't flee landed in Lordaeron' forgotten lands... Northeron, after journey in the Land they discorved a mistycal foutain, the heal then from the addict of magical, and named the Foutain as Twilight Fountain.

You know the closed WoW zone above the Plaguelands named "Northeron"

 

[Footman16]

You know the closed WoW zone above the Plaguelands named "Northeron"

I asked Forsaken he's not referring to there. Like I said, purely fictional place.

 

[Ujimasa Hojo]

If he is indeed referring to the closed zone above the Plaguelands, then perhaps he can give it a new name. According to a tweet or something, Northeron was retconned into the original Twilight Highlands.

 

[Footman16]

I asked Forsaken he's not referring to there. Like I said, purely fictional place.

I hope that answers anything you have to say about the location.

 

[Heinvers]

If he is indeed referring to the closed zone above the Plaguelands, then perhaps he can give it a new name.

Any suggestions?

 

[Ujimasa Hojo]

Even if it's a fictional place, where is it? What is the Mystical Fountain? Did it belong to the Highborne, Trolls, or maybe even the Titans? Name depends on who owned the land before the discovery.

 

[Footman16]

Any suggestions?

Northron, Northerdaeron, Lordoth, Northlor, Even Norther Lordaeron, North Lordaeron, The land of Never Fun.

I guess it's all up to Forsaken and Theoden of KoMe.

 

[Heinvers]

I guess it's all up to Forsaken and Theoden of KoMe.

Yes, but i'll be one of the guys that imagines it.

Lordoth, Northlor

Good names, but still funny

 

[Forsaken]

Wow, i see this a long time ago, and they don't know what should be, and they think that was Northern Lordaeron, and the campaign will be in Northern Lordaeron. And yes, the Twilight Fountain it was created by Slayer14.

I know that the quality is bad, but will be something like this the map:

 

[Heinvers]

Wait! I know that map
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I have a larger one

I knew it was the region north of the Plaguelans

And yes, the Twilight Fountain it was created by Slayer14.

Soo he created the fountain. Interesting! I could create an image from this to make myself an idea about this fountain

 

[I_am_Death]

@hein your is broken
@forsaken hmm, WoW map huh?

 

[ImperialShadow]

tooo much Wow Stuff,why dont you create a custom lore instead following the old one?

 

[Heinvers]

Update

I've uploaded a new screenshot for this!

Reveal

Only a brief cameo appearance of Sylvanas Windrunner!

 

[Forsaken]

@forsaken hmm, WoW map huh?

It is Heinvers who is doing the terrain xD

tooo much Wow Stuff,why dont you create a custom lore instead following the old one?

For now, i don't know many thing about the story that theden are doing, but we will remain the same fates of the old one, Dalos, the Twilight Foutain ...
The region, we dont know what have in that aerea, so we will create.

EDIT--

See this: Team for Story of the High Elves !

 

[Yousef]

Long time i didn't see this, Forsaken, good that you still remember this, btw i think that you accepted me as a beta tester here before, why i am not at the beta testers ?

 

[Heinvers]

Recruitment

Folks! It appears that we need some new recruits for the triggers and for some ideas for this project!
If you are willing to help check this link: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/project-recruitment-256/team-story-high-elves-246125/