[Campaign] Shards of the Alliance

[DD Mikasa]

Sad news .Looking foward to you'r dwarf camping .

 

[Cherrymage]

Very interesting but, sigh......too late!

 

[StoPCampinGn00b]

Thread re-opened by request!

 

[DD Mikasa]

Does that mean Theoden is back to this project?

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

Hell yeah im back.But there is a small problem and that is that I will have to restart all over again cause I lost the campaign file including 5 chapters and 2 interludes .....

No worries I will restart it and as I type half of Prelude is completed.

I'm back boys and girls but I won't make such a speedy progress case I have to go to work too

 

[DD Mikasa]

Take your time.Bout god dam time this project was revived.I am so pumped right now :')

 

[Forsaken]

Nice! Good to see this back!

 

[kakuzu]

OMG ! Theoden is back . Best of luck mate !

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

Update!
Prelude is completed and uploaded for beta testing.Chapte One is in devlopmen now and nearly half the terrain is done.Enjoy the prelue guys an give me feedback when you complete it.

 

[kakuzu]

Great news Theoden ! Keep it up man

 

[Tuwnew]

The archer haven't arrow... lol
I dislike the voices. Maybe, archer voice replaced by the basic footman's voice ?
Spearman with Captain voice ?

But it's a very good prelude I can't wait the first real mission :3

 

[Forsaken]

It seems nice!

Just some advices:
- Jeor model is too small, and his spells pretty much do not fits him. You could have a target damage spell, keep the shockwave, replace bash for critical strike, and his ultra, maybe something based in Roar.
- The position of the icons must be fix, and please change the spell icons' of Steven and add a hero glow for him.

Can't wait to see more! Good luck!

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

The archer haven't arrow... lol
I dislike the voices. Maybe, archer voice replaced by the basic footman's voice ?
Spearman with Captain voice ?

But it's a very good prelude I can't wait the first real mission :3

I will fix that and I will change some voices

It seems nice!
Just some advices:
- Jeor model is too small, and his spells pretty much do not fits him. You could have a target damage spell, keep the shockwave, replace bash for critical strike, and his ultra, maybe something based in Roar.
- The position of the icons must be fix, and please change the spell icons' of Steven and add a hero glow for him.

I will make Jeor larger and I will change is spells
I don't know how to add hero glow but I will try

 

[DD Mikasa]

Okay I am a lil bit late but here it goes.

Terrain was really well made featuring a variety of used models including some red leaves i had not seen before.

HOWEVER
I found a few minor bugs realated to unites and Heros.

Here it goes.Hero spell incons seemed to be bugged out.They are not placed on their inital location.

http://prntscr.com/8nlopy
http://prntscr.com/8nlp9n
http://prntscr.com/8nlpmn

There were some mistakes on the hero ability tooltips as well.
http://prntscr.com/8nlq1i
http://prntscr.com/8nlqea

A few suggestion related to hero's ability icons usage.

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...8507/?prev=search=Poision%20arrow&d=list&r=20 Much more fitting for a poison arrow
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/.../?prev=search=Haill%20of%20arrows&d=list&r=20 another good fitting icon for the Arrow Bombard ability
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...rike-258054/?prev=search=Headshot&d=list&r=20 A icon for critical ability of the archer
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/icons-541/btnbash-57684/?prev=search=Bash&d=list&r=20 Slightly tweaked Bash Icone better than the original


A suggestion related to hero ability kits.I feel like the mass teleport ultimate spell on the Archer hero is reather strange and unfitting.He is defined as a scout not mage.I'd say its better to change it.Let's say a "Stun Arrow" ability that deals massive dmg and stuns a target for X duration could be more in line with the Hero.

Also the map has alot of unused spaces and shows lack of neutral creeps.You can add a few murloc creeps at the lake and a couple sasquachs or wolfs on the unused space on the west area.

As for bugs.The archer units does not have arrow projectiles(or it is invisible).

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

Okay I am a lil bit late but here it goes.

Terrain was really well made featuring a variety of used models including some red leaves i had not seen before.

HOWEVER
I found a few minor bugs realated to unites and Heros.

Here it goes.Hero spell incons seemed to be bugged out.They are not placed on their inital location.

http://prntscr.com/8nlopy
http://prntscr.com/8nlp9n
http://prntscr.com/8nlpmn

There were some mistakes on the hero ability tooltips as well.
http://prntscr.com/8nlq1i
http://prntscr.com/8nlqea

A few suggestion related to hero's ability icons usage.

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...8507/?prev=search=Poision%20arrow&d=list&r=20 Much more fitting for a poison arrow
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/.../?prev=search=Haill%20of%20arrows&d=list&r=20 another good fitting icon for the Arrow Bombard ability
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...rike-258054/?prev=search=Headshot&d=list&r=20 A icon for critical ability of the archer
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/icons-541/btnbash-57684/?prev=search=Bash&d=list&r=20 Slightly tweaked Bash Icone better than the original


A suggestion related to hero ability kits.I feel like the mass teleport ultimate spell on the Archer hero is reather strange and unfitting.He is defined as a scout not mage.I'd say its better to change it.Let's say a "Stun Arrow" ability that deals massive dmg and stuns a target for X duration could be more in line with the Hero.

Also the map has alot of unused spaces and shows lack of neutral creeps.You can add a few murloc creeps at the lake and a couple sasquachs or wolfs on the unused space on the west area.

As for bugs.The archer units does not have arrow projectiles(or it is invisible).

All the previous said are already changed and fixed.As for the neutral creeps sure I could add some

 

[Shar Dundred]

Oh nice, it's alive again.

Good luck, mate!

I don't know how to add hero glow but I will try

Don't worry, mate, the Dundredian has arrived to share one of his secrets with you.
Click

Just copy the ability and import the model aaaaand done.
Give every hero lacking an own glow the ability and you should be perfectly fine.

 

[DD Mikasa]

Oh nice, it's alive again.
Click

AAAAAANNNNNDDDD the link does to work(At least for me)

 

[Shar Dundred]

AAAAAANNNNNDDDD the link does to work(At least for me)

Think you clicked at the wrong point.
Also, that is not for you.

 

[kakuzu]

I cant see whats behind the “click“ too. Top secret ?

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

Thanks shar i will work on it fast

 

[Morris]

looks like this project is dead!

 

[Chaosy]

Not a good choice to bump a thread if it is supposed to be dead then, right?

 

[KJmaster208]

still waiting for the full campagin yet.

 

[Morris]

Theoden, are you still working on this campaign?

 

[Phsycrestheconquerer]

Nice idea. The screenshots look very promising. Can't wait to test this.

same here