General
-You may want to give every character a artifact item,sort of how you did in the second book
-Make all rescuable units in the campaign cost no food,because they can really screw up your food cap.You did it for elites in chapter 4 what stops you from doing it for everyone else!
chapter 1
-Nothing that i can think of maybe make on hard difficulty another ally to appear once you destroy the yellow base,but it is unnecessary.
chapter 2
-I know you may have indended it to be this way to separate the AI and the player,but the map is big and the road is long with nothing on it.Add a more few orcs,creep camps,an outpost or something like that to not make it so monotone.
chapter3
-There is no need to make any change to this chapter in my opinion
chapter4
-The retreat option makes this chapter way too short.Add some kind of mini-boss battle before you reach the circle of power that gives a small reward.
-the ironfist Ai has a very strange behavior in this map.When they destroy a certain part of the demons base some stand there,others retreat and come back a few seconds later,some do nothing at all and the worst of all some retreat and never come back.I don't know if you can fix it,but it's annoying.
chapter5
-Make all allies be worth it to actually call.Only Gardon is viable,because he has heavy units that you need,the other allies offer nothing.
chapter 6
-make the door that unleashes the 1 million demons upon you be unbreakable.Seriously!

chapter 7
-Nothing in particular,maybe add more ship types,but it's not needed.
chapter8
-the first option with Gardon and Raszar is very well done,the second with Genethas and Aaron,eh,it's ok,but nothing special
chapter 9
-Maybe you can make the reinforcement waves you get cost no food,since this chapter is hard,they screw up your food cap pretty hard and you don't get them constantly,only 2 times.
chapter10
-there is no need to make any chages to this chapter
chapter11
-Someone already mentioned this,but a lot of the enemy units and yours get stuck.Use the script blizzard made for the TFT orc campaign on chapter 3(the last one),it takes all units you and your enemy have and just sends them to there deaths,so you can call this the van Durce script!
