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Roleplay : Redemption

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FIRST POST UNDER MAINTENANCE

Roleplay: Redemption
"A different approach to RACC Roleplay, mixed with some After Action Report"

Rules
  • Available Worlds : Terra, Jupradus, Astrarie and Underdark
  • No Specific Theme as of now. The theme and focus of the Roleplay will shift as the Roleplay progresses.
  • Specify a color and faction (or team/independent) name of your own to join (for new players).
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  • Each Player should be considerate and keep their number of characters under control, preferably four Major Player Characters (MPC) per faction. Recommended number of factions a player can own is TWO. Exceptions may be made in some circumstances. DM/AAR characters and "Dormant" characters don't count, but it's still encouraged to keep the number as low as possible.
    • DM(/AAR) Characters were special characters made by Dungeon Masters -- for DM (or in some special cases -- AAR) purposes
    • Dormant Characters are inactive characters that are currently not the main focus of the story -- no matter their past status, including characters who were dead or supposedly dead. If a Player is inactive, usually all of his characters are classified as Dormant Characters. Exceptions are characters who were seen continuing to live in the afterlife.
  • You don't have to make an entry about your characters. Though it is encouraged to do so.
  • You cannot kill others' characters or resurrect them, control their major characters without permission of the respective Owner.
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  • Refer to this Roleplay Guide for helps and guidelines.
  • As for Self-Roleplays and Background Roleplays in other worlds, they are allowed at a moderate frequency. Just don't shift the main focus of the roleplay, and don't do it too much and you're fine.
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  • Rules are subject to change anytime as the Cakemaster sees fit. Still, the Cakemaster may be democratic enough to hold meetings at Medivh's Graffiti and have us all fight in a flame war discuss stuffs in a civil tone.
  • Any future discussions and flame wars regarding Roleplay : Redemption should be posted over there at Medivh's Graffiti -- starting from 16 October 2016 CE (or 105 R.O.C.).
  • Dungeon Masters : @Directive255 (Dungeon and Terra), @WhiteFang (Underdark)

Story and Setting
Original Story (Later Diverged Away)

Your character(s) wake up, having no memory of how they got there. Though they do remember everything prior to a few days past. Around them, there are dozens of other beings, some already awake like you, while others still remain unconscious. All of you seem to be in a large room with multiple doors, and a large screen on one of the walls. It's certainly on, but right now it displays some sort of logo.

In search for answers you may converse with the others who ended up there, or perhaps wait for whoever owns the place to make an appearance.​

Phase Two

Some of you decided to make a difference and give zero fucks about the dungeon, and proceeded to bail outside, no I mean, deep down there -- the Underdark. A realm of darkness and horror, populated by a variety of terrors. Mind-sucking squids with a humanly shape known only as the Illithids, cruel and sadistic elves in dark named as the Drows...... ​

Phase Three

The dungeon was already stormed into pieces by a girl named Cuisidia (owner : @Edge45), and got trapped into a black hole sending the ruins to the Underdark. The Underdark is currently inactive at the moment, save for the occasional clash between the Abaddon's Fury (chaotic good demons led by Argoshar / player: @WhiteFang) and the Drows.

Ever since Deroc, the Cakemaster and Edge, the Rogue Reaper were murdered with their souls tossed into the Sixteen Hells of the Underdark, tensions are on the rise, especially on the planet of Jupradus. Courtesy to @Daffa the Mage, a new world of endless frost and ice is opened for all to escape and mine![/note]​

Player Data
Player NameMajor Player Characters (Active)Dormant CharactersMain ColorStatus

@Directive255
  • Deroc
  • Goh Yuet-yin
  • Lim Chee Wah
  • Wong Chih-kuo
  • Chen Yao-ming
  • Carl "CJ" Johnson
  • Sean "Sweet" Johnson
  • Cesar Vialpando
  • Su Xi Mu
  • Maiev Shadowsong
  • Yuri Prime
  • Jaina Proudmoore
  • Banehallow
  • Modera
  • Rahn Darwin
PaleGreenActive

@Chaosy
  • Cyborg #1
  • Cyborg #2
  • Cyborg #3
  • Nathan
  • Jackie
CyanPWNED!!!

@Edge45
  • Fenix Falchion
  • Cuisidia ("Cuisedia")
CrimsonActive

@Leo Akastenix
N/A
  • Callirus
YellowGreenSleeping

@WhiteFang
  • Argoshar
  • Fenrir
  • Aphrodite
  • Kim Jong Un
  • Soul Harvester
  • Draug
  • Aztor
DeepSkyBlueActive
@Paillan
  • Gabriel
N/A???Normal

@bear_369
  • Morj'zi
N/AGrayNew


 
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Or that.

Gonna post something then.

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"Ugh.." Nathan let out with a drawn out sigh.
After a few seconds of staring into the roof he slowly rose up.
He then blinked a few times as he looked around to check his surroundings.
"What kind of backstreet junkie gathering have I gotten into?.." he muttered as he tried to recall how the hell he ended up here. Making the conclusion based on the people laying around seemingly randomly. Weed being the only logical reason, according to Nathan.
But his memory was blank, he had no clue of what he was doing here.

"I was gonna deliver the merchandise, I drove along the 64 and arrived at the destination.. I think.." he thought to himself. A sudden realization struck him, sending a chill down his spine. He looked around himself in panic, letting out a sigh of relief after just a few seconds as he found what he was looking for.

A few meters behind him a person he recognized was lying on the floor.
He walked forward towards said person, bending down to push the person's cheek.
No reaction.
He did it again. "Ey, Jackie! wake up!"
"Mhm.." the woman slowly sat up, shaking her head to clear her head.
"Feelin' alright?" Nathan asked as he squatted.
"Mhm.. where are we?" Jackie asked in reply
"No idea." Nathan said a bit lowly, looking down towards the ground for a moment while slowly nodding. After a few seconds he leaned forward as if to kiss her, however not getting all too close, merely sniffing.
"What are you doing?" Jackie asked with an raised eyebrow
"Your breath seems normal. No weed or booze." he declared
"Some drug perhaps.. poison?.." Jackie asked, sounding a bit doubtful.
"Possible, perhaps.." Nathan said.
"Let's just call the boys and get them to pick us up. Should be able to track my phone." Jackie said while reaching down her jacket pocket. "Huh?" she exclaimed while checking her other pockets, including the ones on the inside of the jacket.
"Some bitch has stolen my things. Phone, wallet.. even my gun!"
Nathan muttered angrily as it was not really weird to be missing things after one pass out in public. "Knife as well." he said after checking his own pockets.
"Let's.. just ask around nicely. I wont brawl with these sons of bitches without a weapon, for all I know they may be armed." Nathan said with a pat on Jackie's thigh, standing up afterwards. Jackie doing the same after a brief delay. "Let's just ask for the exit, we can track the fucker when we restock."
"Mhm, let us." Nathan agreed
They then progressed forward to the closest nearby person, asking if the knew where the exit were.
 
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"Ow..." a young male adult opened his eyes, as he stands up yet blurry was his thoughts and mind. "Oh, my hat." He quickly looked on the ground and saw it, put it to his head and looked around. Apparently the first to awoken.

"Where am I?" He asked to hinself. He takes out from behind his coat a pocketwatch locked into a necklace. Named behind the watch, "Falchion".
"Right, it's still me, Fenix Falchion." He then realized, "Where's is Crowley and Cuisedia?" Fenix asked to himself again, and looked towards the recently awoken or unconscious people around, none of them matched what he looked for.

"Damn, I can't remember how I got here. My weapons are gone, my essence as well." Fenix left with no answer, then, he came close to the nearest awoke person and try to ask some questions.
 
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My character

Callirus woke up rubbing his head, he looked around the room. "The hell are those goddamned son'o'a curshing curse word putting me in some weird hospital". He then looked down and noticed his clothes. "What th-!?!? Where my uniform go?(Lookes at his hands) My gun?! Where my Enfield went!?!?" He jumped up, looked around the room and shouted "CAN SOMEbody tell me where the hell i am?!?!".
 
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"Oh, my hat."
You really love your hats



Fenrir groaned as he opened his eyes.His eyes are struggling to adjust,and he has a terrible headache.That's not his only concern however.He has no idea where he is,what is going on or how he got here.He decides to try and backtrack,but the only thing he can remember is that he was taking a shortcut through the ally way with his younger sister,Aphrodite,on the way to their grandmother.

His eyes finally adjusts,and what he sees doesn't make things any easier.Around him there are dozens of other people,who he doesn't recognize.Then,he suddenly notices his sister lying on the opposite side of the strange room.He slowly starts to stand up in order to move to her
 
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So, I came out with a weird pair of characters. I don't know if this works effectively or not. A dominatrix and a soft boy.
By the way, I was struggling to choose between a Prestigious Preussese (Prussian) soldier or this BDSM couple.

"Argh!" the young lolita -- Chee Wah struggled to open his heavy eyes with all the might and effort he could muster. A boring moment of staring at the roof later, he lifted his head and scanned the surroundings. "Wait! Something's wrong-- no, someone's missing!" he let out grunts of confusing, as he quickly turned his head around to look for someone. "Where is Mistress? Where am I? What the fuck is this shitty place?!?!"

Rivers of tears slowly leaked from his eyes as he sobbed. "Oh~~~ noooooooo~~~ Where are you, mistress??? I miss you so much!"
A sudden realization struck his heart, shocking his spines greatly. Chee Wah lifted his heavy head and turned his face only to find people giving him weird looks. At this awkward moment, the boy quickly adjusted his spectacles and grabbed a storybook of histories to cover his burning red face full of tears.

A silent and dark giggle, seemingly coming from a lady, sneaked its way to the room, yet the boy was oblivious to it. He was too focused on hiding himself. But he stopped crying afterwards as he indulged himself in the tales of history.


"Ugh.." Nathan let out with a drawn out sigh.
"Huh?" Chee Wah rose up in alert, and immediately looked back. "N... Nathan?"
"It can't be... the One Troublemaker? Damn..." Chee Wah's heart begin to race as his body, full of sweat, shivered. "I must remain calm.... be brave, be strong, be calm..."

Chee Wah did nothing else besides observing Nathan in slight horror. As he was too busy observing people, he was totally unaware of what's behind his back. A finger. A finger glowing in darkness, with a shiny and majestic nail.
Suddenly, Chee Wah hopped great distances and let out an ear-shattering scream.
After a few seconds of flying around, he hit the floor. "Ouch!" He immediately got up and lifted his head. "M... Mistress?!?!"
His "cute" eyes were moistened with tears.

In front of Chee Wah was a slender lady of darkness. She wears revealing clothing tinted in shades of black. Her pair of stylish eyes, burning in shadows, gave him a stare. She would then let out a giggle of amusement, "How lovely... my little boy."
"Mistress?"
"Oh, nothi-- wait! Now, where the fuck are MY stuffs?" the Mistress screamed as she suddenly find out that most of her belongings have gone away all of a sudden.


"Let's.. just ask around nicely. I wont brawl with these sons of bitches without a weapon, for all I know they may be armed." Nathan said with a pat on Jackie's thigh, standing up afterwards. Jackie doing the same after a brief delay. "Let's just ask for the exit, we can track the fucker when we restock." Chee Wah begin to shiver in anxiety...
"Mhm, let us." Nathan and Jackie then progressed forward to the closest nearby person, asking if the knew where the exit were.
Mistress' pair of dark eyes shoot Nathan with a glare of coldness, and replied in a mocking tone, "Do you think I know? Man, are you stupid? If I and my little boy know the exit, we would've already leave you idiots here! But no! That's why I am here, fool!"


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Besides me, who's going to DM this dungeon, by the way?
 
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Good question.
Palian suggested to put someone on a trial, you should probably be the one to choose.

Loli dominatrix though? weird combination x)
Props for something unique.


Nathan nodded slowly as he found her statement reasonable. Though not liking her tone, his eyes had narrowed slightly but kept true to his word of not acting against the others as they could be armed - or many against one.
"Right.." he mumbled "What's the last you remember, Jackie?" he asked after a second of tapping in foot impatiently.
"I was by the club house, keeping an eye out for blue-jackets. I was going to meet you up with the boys for escorting in a few hours.. I think.." Jackie replied
"Sounds familiar." Nathan agreed as they having a memory in common was a good sign. "H---" Nathan was interrupted be a light push from behind from Jackie.
"What?!" he muttered
"Let's just try all the damn doors, worst case we can probably kick it in. Hard to tell the material from here." Jackie explained
Nathan then moved his gaze between the somewhat rude woman and Jackie a few times, deciding to let it go.
"See you around, lassie, nice clothes by the way." Nathan said with a grin as he walked past the other two with Jackie in tow who somewhat discretely put the middle finger into the air as they progressssed towards the doors to take a closer look and try to open them as well.
 
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DM should also be a bit active once it begins, otherwise we'd be stuck with nothing to do.
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Fenix continued searching, and with one glimpse he noticed someone, "Cuisedia!" He rushed towards the dark-gray haired female not as old as him.
The young girl, Cuisedia, opened her eyes as Fenix tends to her. "Oh my, w-what happened? Fenix?" She weakly asked to Fenix.
"It's ok Cuis, your awake, though I don't know what happened as well." He holds her and try her to stand, which resulted with the young girl blushing.
"Um-mm, where are we, where's Crowley?" She again asked.
"I don't know, I didn't saw Crowley. And all my belongings are gone, so is yours." Fenix replied.
"My belongings?" Cuisedia searched herself. "Wew, my ring is still here. Um.. thanks Fen"
"I'm glad you're okay. Those people appeared to be moving on, come, we must find Crowley and get out of here."
Fenix and Cuisedia following, watched the four people move and they started following them. Apparently they also have no idea on what happened as they heard them.
 

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Indeed. That's the only drawback of this RP style.
<While walking to the door>
"What if they are of metal, and locked?" Jackie asked with a slightly bitter tone.
"Uh..."
"Great.." she said with a sigh
Seconds later a silent rumble could be heard from her stomach.
"Someone's hungry~" Nathan mocked her
"Fuck you." Jackie commented while rolling her eyes.

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Come back here slacker. @WhiteFang
 
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By the time he managed to stand up,Aphrodite has already awoken her self and is sitting up straight,clearly just as confused he is
"Hey,are you ok?" he called out to her as he slowly approached.
"Yeah,I guess.Where are we?" she replied
"No idea,the illuminati's underground base?"
She glared at him,clearly not in the mood for his jokes
 
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Yeah,and Fenrir is a giant wolf in Norse Mythology's name

Actually,she is my 'main character' 's sister,not lover,like I said in my first post

Edit:Where in the name of Anubis is Directive?He needs to DM,and add me to the player data
 
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Nathan then moved his gaze between the somewhat rude woman and Jackie a few times, deciding to let it go.
"See you around, lassie, nice clothes by the way." Nathan said with a grin as he walked past the other two...
Jackie somewhat discretely put the middle finger into the air. (if I am not mistaken, was Jackie aiming at Mistress? If so,) The Mistress returned the favor by shooting a cold glare of hostility at Jackie, likely piercing her heart with darkness.

The Mistress was feeling happy after being praised, her grin stretching from ear to ear. "Thanks so much."
But Chee Wah's face was all as black as coal, full of displeasure and jealously. "Mistress! I.. I, I don't know, but, but! I feel like my heart's being pierced!"

Mistress Goh simply let out a giggle of amusement, then proceeded to pinch her little boy's face. After a moment of waiting, she grew anxious and desparate. "Anyways, we're not going to waste the rest of our lives here, don't you think?"
"Yes, my Mistress. Whenever you go, I will always follow you."

Suddenly, the couple heard a conversation not far away.
"Yeah, I guess. Where are we?" Aphrodite replied to Fenrir
"No idea,the Illuminati's underground base?"
She glared at him,clearly not in the mood for his jokes

"Wait what?" the little lolita Chee Wah interrupted all of a sudden, "did you just mention the Illuminati???"

Meanwhile, the Mistress did not want to waste too much time on small talk. Besides taking care of her little boy, her only other concern is to escape this hellhole with her boy. So she went ahead and tried to blast the walls with her magic. As she closed her eyes and concentrated on her spell, her aura of darkness begin to escalate and shadows begin to gather at her palms. After the balls of her palms became big enough, she would then unleash the orbs and release a breath of shadows toward the walls, cracking a huge hole (and making a huge noise).

As the walls collapsed, a mild but strong enough earthquake hit the room and the roars of some unknown creatures were heard...

"Ah, finally... Oops, something bad is gonna happenin'! Brace yourselves!"
A huge creature emerged from the trembling earth... (reserved... I need time to describe this monster) oh, nothing. Just a giant Faceless One with four spider-like legs
 
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Fenrir looked at Chee Wah and replied "yeah,but it was just a joke."
As the walls collapsed, a mild but strong enough earthquake hit the room andthe roars of some unknown creatures were heard...
"Ah, finally... Oops, something bad is gonna happenin'! Brace yourselves!"
Oh shit,Aphrodite!Get behind me!
Aphrodite wastes no time to get behind her bigger brother and grab onto him in fear."What is that sound?I'm scared!" she whispered,the fear can be heard clearly in her voice
"I don't know" he said,while trying to hide his own fear."But I will protect you,don't be afraid"
 

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Jackie shuddered by the cold gaze.
"Did it get colder?" she mumbled to herself
Nathan only raised an eyebrow as he did not feel any change of warmth. Instead he aimed a kick towards one of the doors. "Shit.That aint gonna budge." he cursed.
"Let's---" Jackie began but interrupted herself as the loud sound of a cracked wall was heard.
"What. the. fuck."

Nathan went dead quiet for a few seconds. Seemingly stunned, his face being slightly paler than usual. However he eventually beckoned for Jackie to come closer. The two crouched down by the wall to make themselves a bit less visible. That hole is an exit. Wait for that.. thing.. to leave it behind and we just sneak by." he whispered to which Jackie simply nodded.
 
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.....and we are back to waiting xD


"Well,what are you going to do?" she inquired,looking up to him
"p-protect you" Fenrir muttered in response.In his mind however,he was face palming at his reply."Protect her?How do you plan on doing that you moron?"he thought."You have no weapons,and can barely fight.How are you going to protect her?.You only have a few seconds,and if you fail,your innocent little sister will most likely be slaughtered,along with you"
 
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I agree with the chaotic one.
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More people awoke and began to quarrel. Heard by the two, Fenix and Cuisidia...

"No idea,the Illuminati's underground base?"
"Wait what?" the little lolita Chee Wah interrupted all of a sudden, "did you just mention the Illuminati???"

"That word, oww.. tingles me greatly." Fenix said.
"Somethings coming, Fen careful!" Cuisidia shouted.

A huge creature emerged from the trembling earth... (reserved... I need time to describe this monster)

"What the hell is that thing! And we don't have weapons!" Fenix panicly shouted. Which resulted with Cuisidia bashing his head. "Ow ow ow!" Fenix painly stopped.
"Oh you, calm yourself, the creature is not revealed yet."
"Ah right, the best thing to do-"

Fenix rushed behind the a
big wolf's ass (Fenrir) with sweat in his head, leaving Cuisidia with a (-_-') expression.
"-is to hide behind this good dog." Fenix finished saying.
"F-Fenix! *sigh* Crowley would be in fire by now." Cuisidia disappointingly exclaimed.
 
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Fenrir gave Fenix a questioning look."r-really?" he said after a while."You don't have any better ideas?"
"Well,"he thought "I don't have any better ideas either"
 

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Nathan pointed towards Fenrir and Fenix. "People like them are the ones who will be targeted. They make a lot of noise and movement." he whispered to Jackie
"Still.. what kind of sick place is this?!" she replied, barely managing to keep her voice down
"Uhh.."
"who do you think I am, Fortune Tellah?

Obviously void the uncolored part.
 
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Fenrir looked at Fenix once again
"Can you run fast?I'm decently fast,I've come first place in our schools athletics a few times.In case you are faster,just promise me you will grab my sister and take her with you.She doesn't weigh much.Take this as a last wish,in case I'm going to die"
He knelt down,embraced his sister and gave her a quick kiss on the forehead.Then he turned towards the hole,gave a long sigh and awaited whatever giant monster is beyond it to show itself
 
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"Eh?" Fenix was left confused. "I don't know this what you call school or athletics or whatever but what are you saying?" Fenix replied to Fenrir.
"And how come a wolf even join school athletics"
Fenix voidly said.
Cuisidia rushed there, and pulled Fenix's ear and dragged him away. "Sorry, but my companion goes crazy when he panicks."
She then continued dragging Fenix away from the people.
 

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"Buuuut mom~"
Nathan simply shook his head from afar. "Are they retarded?" he thought to himself. "At least that woman seems to have some sense." he continued in his mind as her gaze followed the two. His thoughts were interrupted by an elbow to the stomach. He let out a short series of coughs. "What the fuck are you doing?!" he said with a dampened hoaxing voice. "Bringing you back to reality." Jackie simply responded.
Nathan muttered a few well chosen curses while he stared back towards the monster, wishing for it to move before his hair got grey. Or when he died of hunger, whatever comes first.
 
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Fenrir grew more and more anxious."Why isn't it coming?" he thought."Did it simply attempt to scare us and cause panic?.If so it did a damn good job.Still,if I'm to die,I'd prefer not to delay it by waiting in panic"
He started moving towards to hole,leaving his sister behind.He ignored her cries,he ignored everything.That is,until he was almost right in front of the hole."What are you doing?!"he thought."There is still a chance of survival,don't give up so soon you pathetic coward!"
After coming to this realization,he quickly scattered back to his sister."The hell was I thinking?What's wrong with me?I can't think straight."
He simply sat down and continued to stare at the hole"


@Directive255 ,it can't go on like this.Hurry back will ya
edit:I just noticed that Directive edited his post,the creature has actually been described and is there...stupid me.Apologies Directive255
 

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Know what? fuck it.
I will just do some DMing, going along with my original script. However I will be rather vague with the hints to not screw Directive's potential plans over completely

DM color: white

The vaguely visible being moved a bit back and fourth in the dark, no light would originate from within the crushed wall.
A few deep growls were let out, what seemed to be an arm reached forward as if grabbing something in the air.
Apparently wanting human flesh, but for some reason it did not move out of the darkness.

The large screen on the wall would let out a loud beeping sound. (built in speakers)
The voice that could be hard had been modified to not sound human, not even determining the gender.
"Is it on? yes. Good."
"This is a recording."
"The doors of the room you're currently in will soon open. Above each door there will be a number, this is the number of people who will be allowed to pass. If you're too late.. you're left behind to starve - or kill yourselves."
"End of recording."

"Well.." Nathan stood still for a few moments. "The further I can get from that thing - the better. AND it may be an exit."
Jackie pointed towards another door. "That one, it's the one with the lowest number, let's take that one."
"Bu--" Nathan began to protest
"No time to talk!" Jackie said as she started to run somewhat quickly
"Why that one?! the other ones allow more to pass though!" he said while rushing after her
"Because everyone will do that. It's probably safer to take one with the low numbers."
"Right.." Nathan resigned as he picked up the pace
 
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Fenrir stood up and picked up his sister.
"Come on,we are getting out of this hell hole.No matter what."
She simply nodded,and they started moving towards the door with the highest number
 

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Most people would indeed choose the doors with the higher numbers, thus making it quite the race. It was not uncommon to see people tackling one-another just to try to get ahead. Women (including Fenrir's sissy) would have a hard time to not getting their face ran into the ground by the stampede of rushing people. This did not apply as much by the lower numbered doors as there were not enough people for a stampede.
However, it got more personal and turned into brawls. Overall chaos.

Nathan tackled a middle-aged man from behind, making him fall to the ground face first. He aimed a quick bash to the side of the head which made the target pass out.
He quickly got on his feet as he continued to run to catch up with Jackie.
Jackie would seem like an easy target to tackle from a man's perspective - thus why one tried to.
However, Jackie launched herself to the side with a slightly clumsy tumble attempt, however, not quick enough.
The attacker hit her legs mid air which made for a rough landing. She quickly stood up cursing with a bleeding lip and a few minor scratches on her arms.
She lunged forward to retaliate and hit with her knee to his chin while he was getting up. She glared angrily towards the knocked out man but left him behind to resume the rush towards the door.
 
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@Chaosy. She's not on the ground,he's carrying her.
btw,I'm a little confused .Are the doors open yet or not?

Fenrir grunted and pushed as many people away from him as he could.It was not easy however,especially with Aphrodite on his back.At times,he nearly felt over but managed to stay up."Finally all that athletic training paid off!" he thought.
Suddenly,a man grabbed onto his leg and tried to take him down.Fenrir shook his leg and attempted to kick the man in his face.Eventually he managed to break lose and stomp on the man's head.He charged ahead,pushing and shoving through the people until he was at the front.As soon as he reached the front,he broke out into a sprint and did not stop until he was through the doors,we he leaned forward and gasped for air.
 
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This will be the last reply for me today to allow the others to catch up, once everyone has entered doors we can split the hyper active ones with the less active ones.
So this is a one-time thing, no need to hold back after this.
(I also don't wanna make important decisions and take it away from Directive xd)

A few punches later both Nathan and Jackie made it into their target door. Making it 6 in total.
"Nothing like a good 'workout'.." he smiled slightly, while looking downwards. Chuckling silently at his own behavior as he recalled the brawls.
"Mhm.." she agreed, stroking the back of her hand over the bleeding lip.
"Jesus Christ, what happened ya, Jackie?" Nathan asked when he eventually raised his head after recovering some energy.
"I got a car door slammed into my face." she said, somehow managing to keep a serious tone.
"Right, right.. stupid question." Nathan sighed "Was it one of those?" he asked while pointing at the other four in the room.
"Nope. I knocked him out, he's gonna die painfully. Unless they were lying and go and feed those left behind." she declared with a snort.
"Good. All the brawling made me hungry though.."


Among those in Fenrir's room, most were keeping an eye on him - or rather, his sister. As it seemed quite odd that she had made it through the rush. Not quite with hateful eyes, but rather suspicion, anger and perhaps a bit of fear which was not weird due the odd circumstances. Other than glaring, they did not do much, there was no point in fighting now.
A few of them talked lowly with a nearby person, seemed like idle chatting but it would be impossible to tell as most were - as said - very suspicious of others.
 
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@Paillan
Please don't control my character without my permission.

And last reply until Directive's

"Da fack?" Fenix rushed away from the object... then suddenly, the monitors sounded.
"It has begun, play time's over." (Serious mode) Fenix said as the large monitor sounded.

"Let's pick that door with the lower number." Fenix said to Cuisidia. "But.. these people..." she replied.
"These people have no care for us or any other, as your protector, I'll do what it takes to let you live." He said and holds Cuisidia's right hand and carries her in front of him.
"Umm... w-wait- Fen-..
"Ghost Walk!" Fenix and Cuisidia disappeared or if looked closely, looked less visible and moved very fast.
Easily passing through the brawling people leaving with a sheer chill of coldness. As Fenix ran carrying Cuis, they approach their targeted door and got in, then deactivates Ghost Walk.

"Whew..." Fenix sigh in relief. "Fen... you can put me down." Cuis said while blushed. "Oh, sorry." Fenix without a pause put her down.
"Those people..." Cuisidia sadly looked as the people fought themselves.
"Cuis, look at me, this place is a dungeon, we don't know where is the way out, so we must survive. I feel Crowley is not here, so wherever he is, he's waiting."
"You're right, but we must atleast help some of them."
"We cannot step out of this door, but it looks like some are coming here, stay here and I'll help the rest." Fenix then helped those who didn't fought and entered the door, he did not move too far from door so if ever closed, he'll be in very quick.
 
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"Well so much for that" the voice said "now what door to pick?..."
The shade walked towards the door with a 1 which apparently nobody wanted
"If you survive see you at the other side" the figure screamed to the mob fighting. Them it opened the door and dissapeared
 
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