Maze of Shortness #2

[Magicon92]

do we die of grass?

 

[All_Time_Pro]

do we die of grass?

If you touch the grass you die

 

[Magicon92]

If you touch the grass you die

Will test the mao soon, ty for answer =)

 

[Deleted member 247165]

Awesome concept Gonna test it soon

 

[All_Time_Pro]

Awesome concept Gonna test it soon

Thanks Alxen345 let me know what you think

 

[deepstrasz]

1. The cinematic scene should start right at the beginning not after a few seconds while user control is still available.
2. You could make the Wagons shoot a (temporary) disease cloud to make things more interesting.
3. If you don't want creatures to be selected add the Locust ability to them.
4. Change the unit name of the heroes to something else than Paladin or the one in the Wind Walk description not to be Baldemaster?
5. I don't think it's necessary to have cinematic mode on-off in a matter of 0-1 seconds when transmissions come in.
6. Give up right before the end?
7. Changing the camera back to normal right after returning from the Abomination zone is not funny, it can get you click somewhere (grass) where your hero will die.
8. I think you should make the last part (ending) as a checkpoint.

It's a nice mini-game. You could create difficulties, a way for the level to restart via triggers and each time the game would get harder.

Approved.

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[All_Time_Pro]

1. The cinematic scene should start right at the beginning not after a few seconds while user control is still available.
2. You could make the Wagons shoot a (temporary) disease cloud to make things more interesting.

I added the disease cloud and it looks a lot more aesthetically pleasing. Also I edited the movie scenes and changed that.

3. If you don't want creatures to be selected add the Locust ability to them.

I couldn't change this without making the collision death not able to function (unless I did immolation but didn't want to change that)

4. Change the unit name of the heroes to something else than Paladin or the one in the Wind Walk description not to be Baldemaster?
5. I don't think it's necessary to have cinematic mode on-off in a matter of 0-1 seconds when transmissions come in.
6. Give up right before the end?
7. Changing the camera back to normal right after returning from the Abomination zone is not funny, it can get you click somewhere (grass) where your hero will die.
8. I think you should make the last part (ending) as a checkpoint.

All of these suggestions are great and I applied all of them to make the game more fun.

It's a nice mini-game. You could create difficulties, a way for the level to restart via triggers and each time the game would get harder.

I made it that every time you die the movement speed will be subtracted to create more difficulty.

Thanks for all of the suggestions and also I don't believe I have any leaks because I already removed them all previously. Thanks.

 

[MrFrichyBoy]

Wow what an awesome concept for a maze, making it so the players movement speed decreases after each death is super cool and unique!
This map has a definite challenge to it that makes you come back and back to try and beat it, great replay value!