Short RPG

[Moderator]

02:21, 29th Jul 2008
Septimus:

It is still at acceptable level, thus it is approve. Click at the bottom link for the review.

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/760934-post5.html

Edit : I just notice this map resources have violate the rules of THW by having invalid author name. Set it to rejection instead.

 

[TheReaper2017]

Please leave a rate and comment if possible.

 

[TheBlooddancer]

You need no Condition in your "-Cheat"
There is no triggers in your "Revive"
If you are a bit to slow in start, you miss the oportunity to play
If your fast in start, you can have 3 heroes
Talking system is to easy to mis-function
Not so many choices.

How to Fix:
Remove the Condition
Add some triggers or remove it all
Delete the current trigger and make following:
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A unit trains a unit.
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Unit type of (Trained unit) Equal to Ranger
Or
Warrior
Or Mage
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Remove triggering unit from game

Set gold cost on heroes, and add given ammount of gold to all players

Talking system:
A unit is within range of Paladin
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Create text -Find and Slay the Dragon

Make more choices/crossroads/Place where multiple actions can take place.

Eitherways a fine map.

 

[TheReaper2017]

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[Septimus]

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The bottom review is the list of positive stuff about this map. Positive review usually not only about how good the map is, but also if it follow the rules of thehiveworkshop.

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The bottom review is the list of suggestion/comment and opinion about the map. It usually contain an useful hint for the map author if the map author try to earn more merit point for their map.

[√] - You do not need condition for your cheat trigger.
[√] - If this is your first map, you should learn how to make the most basic map which is a melee type map instead of non-melee such as rpg map. Being a first timer is not a excuse, I had seen some first timer who develop a excellent map because he had the determination to do so.
[√] - You should had test your map before you post it here and if you are stuck at certain triggering, you should had go to forum and ask for help.

The bottom review is the list of negative stuff about this map. Negative review usually not only about how bad the map is, but also if it does follow the rules of thehiveworkshop or not.

[√] - There is a lot of empty space at your terrain, you should had use those space as well.
[√] - When select hero, you should not had set time limit for it.
[√] - When the player enter certain region constantly, it keep spamming the text.
[√] - I though a player only could had 1 hero each, you should had set the hero had food cost so player could only had 1 hero.
[√] - You do not even need to kill the dragon, just pick up the item and you could straight away go meet the paladin and end the quest.
[√] - Wisp should not be able to detonate.
[√] - The cinematic keep repeat it over and over again if you set the unit to patrol mode and order it to constantly enter the region.
[√] - When the dragon had been slain, the quest log should change as well.
[√] - The terrain doesn't look quite good. A lot of people doesn't like to play a RPG with bad layout.
[√] - There is almost no storyline at all, all I know is you need to kill the dragon. Make the storyline more specific.

Score - 30/100
Rating - 2/5
Condition - Average
Status - Approve
Review - 1

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[TheReaper2017]

This map was tested many times - i fixed the trigger leaks myself. But i do agree on your patrol thing
I'm going to make a better version of this and add a storyline

 

[TheBlooddancer]

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I got the original messege at my mail.-
I wasnt flaming you,, easy on, i just told you what could need change, and how you did. You should still remove unneccesary triggers.