Marine Wars v1.01

[Moderator]

12:06, 26th Maj 2011
-Kobas-:
Status: Rejected
20:03, 4th Sep 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected (until updated)

 

[Icedrake]

At first glance, map seems to be kind of small, without many strategic locations. Two of the classes look the same, so maybe you should change the appearance of one of those marines. The dwarf sniper just doesn't fit in at all. I've played other maps with lots more marine units, including a marine sniper, so maybe you should look at those maps and see where you can find the same models.

You should also really improve the description. Your credits and your emphasis on this map being a beta is pretty much the whole description with a sentence that actually gives some info about the game. Maybe add some screenshots and give more info about the game, and remove the huge emphasis on this being a beta version?

I'm not sure if other people will disagree with me or not, but this is my opinion of the map.

Rating: 3/5. Needs improvements.

 

[matej]

At first glance, map seems to be kind of small, without many strategic locations. Two of the classes look the same, so maybe you should change the appearance of one of those marines. The dwarf sniper just doesn't fit in at all. I've played other maps with lots more marine units, including a marine sniper, so maybe you should look at those maps and see where you can find the same models.

You should also really improve the description. Your credits and your emphasis on this map being a beta is pretty much the whole description with a sentence that actually gives some info about the game. Maybe add some screenshots and give more info about the game, and remove the huge emphasis on this being a beta version?

I'm not sure if other people will disagree with me or not, but this is my opinion of the map.

Rating: 3/5. Needs improvements.

first thanks for downloading and playing.
seconds: thanks for your review and suggestins.
i will do my best to improve map. +rep

 

[Icedrake]

You're welcome. This is definitely seems like a promising map, just needs a bit of tweaking. I'm sure you'll probably get everything I noted in my post fixed over the next versions. And thanks for the rep point.

 

[matej]

You're welcome. This is definitely seems like a promising map, just needs a bit of tweaking. I'm sure you'll probably get everything I noted in my post fixed over the next versions. And thanks for the rep point.

your welcome, dude

 

[bounty hunter2]

Marine Wars v1.0 [BETA] Review

Marine Wars v1.0 [BETA] is a Survival map made by matej.

Well, this map isn't as bad as I thought it would be. Although it doesn't have anything new, original, groundbreaking, it still can be a bit fun at glances.

The terrain isn't bad. No blizzard cliffs, nice use of water, nice use of shrubs, nice use of the height tool. It looks quite okay. I can't complain a bit here.

Now, the heroes and the object editor. Everything works, the spells are okay, as well as the hotkeys. But the spells aren't much, some remind me of dota, some are just boring. But in overall it's okay.

Now the worst part is the gameplay. No game modes, only six heroes, only two shops, needs secrets, more things to vary the game and make it more interesting and competitive.

Also a very bad part of the map is your spelling. Ask someone to correct your spelling, since you have a lot of mistakes in spelling and grammar. That is quite bad and gives your map prejudice of being bad. Language is important.

You could also add some screenshots at the description here. Put them in hidden tags. Overall, not a bad map. I guess it could get a barely passing rating, and get approved to encourage you to work more on it.

 

[ap0calypse]

Basic map overview:

• Avarage terrain (random shrubs, bad tileset, misplaced doodads).
• Very poor spelling (an enormous amount of spelling- and grammatical mistakes).
• Low gameplay value (only one thing to do in the entire game, not a single option).
• Poor hero/spell editing.
• No originality.

Edit: bounty, I disliked those shrubs - he placed one shrub every X points away, shrubs don't belong on paths or rocky area's.

 

[bounty hunter2]

Ap0, I liked them since imo, they created some kind of a jungle atmosphere that I found fitting for this map.

 

[ap0calypse]

The sunken ruins vines would fit better for a jungle-like theme, I could only see a forest with random shrubs on the paths, not a jungle :/
That's only my opinion though...

 

[bounty hunter2]

Hey, that's why we have opinions, to make us different. Anyway, lets hope the author improves the map.

 

[light bolt30]

Fix the grammer mistakes in your description; chose is spelt choose. Add some screenshots to attract more people to this map. Here's a list of BB Codes incase you need them.

 

[matej]

Fix the grammer mistakes in your description; chose is spelt choose. Add some screenshots to attract more people to this map. Here's a list of BB Codes incase you need them.

ok, i will do my best to fix all mistakes. thanks for help.