Longing for home

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A lone Bloodmage stranded on a glacier longs for home as the sun rises.

Edit: I moved the bloodmage closer, changed the size of his igloo and added a ship in the distance. (thus his longing)

Edit 2: I have made the ship larger and moved the sun back as requested. I tried to get the shadows to be going back but they chose not to, so I left the shadows out. tell me what you think. Thanks!

Edit 3: I sank the sun (pun not intended) and replaced the spiky ice with rocks. Shifted his supplies over to the left and moved the ship further away.

Final Edit: I have moved it to my terrain gallery. Varsaigen's Terrain Gallery
 

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Nice, although I think you should move the sun a bit more back(if it's possible) and move the ship away from the sun because you can't really see it(I wouldn't have noticed if you didn't mention it). Looks good!
 
Ok. I will do that. but the reason i placed the ship there was because it hardly shows up anywhere else. And I wanted it in the distance. And for the sun, its on the border of the map :P but I can move the terrain back. Thx for the critique guys.

Edit: I have updated the pic. My changes are explained in Edit 2:

Check first post for Edit 3.
 
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