[GUI]Poison Orb requested![MUI]v1.2

[Moderator]

21:10, 22nd Sep 2009
Deuterium:

Review

Great spell and definitely worth using if you're searching for something like this. A well triggered MUI GUI spell with great effects.

Indexing is good and I don't mind it; however, I'd advice using a dynamic indexing method instead.

And just as a little snippet:

• Set PO_TempPoint[PO_Index[3]] = (PO_TargetPoint[PO_Index[3]] offset by (Random real number between 100.00 and 500.00) towards (Random angle) degrees)

• Set PO_MovePoint[PO_Index[3]] = (PO_TargetPoint[PO_Index[3]] offset by (Random real number between 100.00 and 500.00) towards (Random angle) degrees)

This leads to a more dense selection towards the center of the disc than at the edges. But it actually suits this spells so never mind it.

 

[Deuterium]

baassee's new spell let's start...


The Spell:


[+]

1. Well done tooltips and documentation on how to import.


2. I like the orb!


3. Nice idea; simple and creative. Can come in handy.


4. Triggers are very detailed! There's no way a person can't read such triggers. Thus, easy to adjust.


[-]

5. Adjust the orb's sound. An orb making "frog" sounds seems weird.


[..]

6. Maybe you can add some areal special effect on the area which the orb affects. You know DotA's Acid Spray? Something like that...



Very well done spell! Great job baassee!

 

[baassee]

baassee's new spell let's start...


The Spell:
[-]

5. Adjust the orb's sound. An orb making "frog" sounds seems weird.


[..]

6. Maybe you can add some areal special effect on the area which the orb affects. You know DotA's Acid Spray? Something like that...

hmm forgot the sound, thx

area effect eh? ... will see what I can do

ty for comment

 

[-Berz-]

Downloading...

Ok, this is a really nice spell, there is just one thing left to do, please make some bigger green special effect as msaeed said 8)

Good job with this one =)

 

[baassee]

Update inc so don't rate yet - Rate if ya want too

Downloading...

Ok, this is a really nice spell, there is just one thing left to do, please make some bigger green special effect as msaeed said 8)

Good job with this one =)

Will be in next update thanks for comment XD

-Updated!

 

[Kingz]

Has one flaw:
In the loop trigger you destroyed the group when the first unit is picked, just move the custom script after the unit group actions, don't put it in the unit group actions.

Also has imports, that is bad though it is a request so i guess it's okay

 

[baassee]

Has one flaw:
In the loop trigger you destroyed the group when the first unit is picked, just move the custom script after the unit group actions, don't put it in the unit group actions.

Also has imports, that is bad though it is a request so i guess it's okay

F*ck, fixing ...

Updated!

 

[Deuterium]

Nice although the image i had in mind was different, but works too..

 

[cl0s3dyy]

Thank you for doing that for my request +rep and credits

 

[baassee]

Thank you for doing that for my request +rep and credits

Your welcome, gladly makin any poison spells for ya in the future

Maasead what was on your mind then?

 

[Kingz]

I "looped" through your triggers and seen no more mistakes...

[offtop]
This is irrelevant to the spell itself but is good for triggers that you use in the test map(Preload,Level up,Start).
Adding this:

• Custom script: call DestroyTrigger(GetTriggeringTrigger())

As their last actions will destroy them and make the game run faster and it won't effect the spells due to the fact they are runed only once and never again.
Well hope you don't forget that for the future spells/maps you make

 

[baassee]

haha wont forget that one but still preload is the spell ! ^^

 

[Deuterium]

well what i had in mind, was a greenish & cloud-ish special effect over the area, but dont know if that's doable without imports... and second, what you did already seems great!
so i guess no need to change that

EDIT:
haha i found what you posted in the 1.3 version about the CloudOfFog model, that's EXACTLY what i had in mind!

 

[baassee]

EDIT:
haha i found what you posted in the 1.3 version about the CloudOfFog model, that's EXACTLY what i had in mind!

lols I really dont wanna import another import but it's simple if you want too

 

[Deuterium]

Yeah you have a point...

 

[Deuterium]

Ooo this was back when I was msaeed now you get Deuterium's review

Deuterium's Brief Review:

[GUI]Poison Orb requested![MUI]v1.2

Great spell and definitely worth using if you're searching for something like this. A well triggered MUI GUI spell with great effects.

Indexing is good and I don't mind it; however, I'd advice using a dynamic indexing method instead.

And just as a little snippet:

• Set PO_TempPoint[PO_Index[3]] = (PO_TargetPoint[PO_Index[3]] offset by (Random real number between 100.00 and 500.00) towards (Random angle) degrees)

• Set PO_MovePoint[PO_Index[3]] = (PO_TargetPoint[PO_Index[3]] offset by (Random real number between 100.00 and 500.00) towards (Random angle) degrees)

This leads to a more dense selection towards the center of the disc than at the edges. But it actually suits this spells so never mind it.

 

[baassee]

it will always be a seed review for me

 

[NoMoreChallenge]

Dummy unit for poison orb can be selected.