Frozen Orb

[Panda]

[+] Please attach more screenshots too this.
[+] Half the map is unused I suggest creating that area with bounty tile or using It instead of leaving it out.
[+] All the doodads are just scattered and randomly placed around the map, would be nice too clean it up a bit and make it look decent. Don't get too carried away with doodads.

 

[Thing_I]

This map is extremely simplistic, and has quite a few flaws still. For example, you can walk outside of the map.
There is no goal, there is no victory. The gameplay is easy and boring. Nearly 1/3 of the map is inaccessible. The people in the 'bar' are needlessly aggressive, talking to them is worthless and killing them does nothing. It feels like you just wanted to include curse words into your map.

1/5

 

[Datnes]

You can victory by following the path which is by the building where the "bar" is.

 

[Paillan]

Your description is very poor. I suggest you follow one of the description templates I always attach when moderating.
I Don't even need to open the map so know that the map is simple and very lacking. For instance, why is half of the map empty? why is there a gold mine when it's an RPG?
I will open it later and probably find a lot of stuff to complain about, fix the map please.

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[Datnes]

Thanks for review.