EmeraldGardens V.1.29

[Moderator]

15:36, 31st Jul 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[ShiroiSenji]

well concept seems to be ok.

 

[Malcous]

sounds cool , will dl it

 

[Erader]

Sounds cool,but it's not,it's stupid!

 

[ap0calypse]

I'm not in the mood for a long text/review, so here I go:

Fix the leaks!
I must say I was pleasantly surprised when playing the map... for the first few minutes, after that the lag began.
When I had a look at your triggers, everything made sense: your triggers are crappy.

You didn't give credits as well... and your descritpion is very bad, improve it (and improve your English a little).
Some tooltips do not exist, others are wrong, the units haven't been really customized, the abilities are also normal abilities, you cannot choose a hero and I can go on like this for a while...

Hmm... if you fix the leaks, this map is playable, though.

 

[JoeSpectator]

Umm... How long did you make this... Please edit skill more please.. And edit your camera in entering cinematic please.

 

[maxyall]

I'm not in the mood for a long text/review, so here I go:

Fix the leaks!
I must say I was pleasantly surprised when playing the map... for the first few minutes, after that the lag began.
When I had a look at your triggers, everything made sense: your triggers are crappy.

You didn't give credits as well... and your descritpion is very bad, improve it (and improve your English a little).
Some tooltips do not exist, others are wrong, the units haven't been really customized, the abilities are also normal abilities, you cannot choose a hero and I can go on like this for a while...

Hmm... if you fix the leaks, this map is playable, though.

Thankyou for advice. I will lock my map to prevent other to see my crappy trigger.
i have gave credit and update my description.


ps: i'm 14 yearold

 

[ap0calypse]

No, don't do that! Please!

I wanted to edit my post to say "It's good that you didn't protect the map, though".

Really, DO NOT protect your map! Fix the leaks and I'll be happy ><

I've found another bug, though: When you cast "Mirror Image", those images will also drop items (e.g.: I had 1 'Heavenly Exterminator', when I cast Mirror Image, I had 7 of them, so I immeadiately had 5 Heavenly Exterminators and a Mask of Death, granting me immortality).

This is what you need to do:

• Fix all the leaks you can find (this is a tutorial I recently wrote: Leak Tutorial)
• Fix all tooltips (shockwave, mirrror image, some items, ....)
• Give credits to everyone (for the icons and the special effects).
• Customize the creeps a little, so they don't look like blizzard made them.

Do not protect the map

 

[maxyall]

I've found another bug, though: When you cast "Mirror Image", those images will also drop items (e.g.: I had 1 'Heavenly Exterminator', when I cast Mirror Image, I had 7 of them, so I immeadiately had 5 Heavenly Exterminators and a Mask of Death, granting me immortality)
Do not protect the map

I dunno how to fix this illusion bug. Please advice how to make hero drop without illusion. Oh. how can i get any rating? No one give me any rate for month

 

[ap0calypse]

I dunno how to fix this illusion bug. Please advice how to make hero drop without illusion. Oh. how can i get any rating? No one give me any rate for month

For the Illusion-bug:
Instead of using triggers to make the items drop, set the value "Stats - Dropped when carrier dies" (item-data) to "true".
Illusions aren't counted for that and will not drop the items.


Attractive maps get more ratings.
Change your description so people will notice your map, you should really update it a bit more as well, to make it up-to-date (and refresh it every now and then).

(Ohh, erm... maybe the map name sounds too much like the original Blizzard Melee-map, that could be another reason why not much people check this map).

 

[Cweener]

Mass Purging Template Version 3.0
Reject.

Reason for not approving:
Triggers are bad and terrain is meh. sorry mate.