Dungeon Gods - Storyline/Lore

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Hello Hive-Community. This is the Storyline/Lore of my ORPG "Dungeon Gods"
I hope it´s okay, and the english is not too bad :S

Time: Year 832 after Dariol (a.D.)


Dungeon Gods:
The Dungeon Gods are the lands guardians. They have existed for 1000 generations. Their quest is to keep monsters, demons
and all manners of evil in their Dungeon, to save the world from them.
The 999th generation was killed by the Demon lord Immerasche, but 7 mighty warriors came to fend Immerasche off.
They are the 1000th generation. At the moment, their castle is under siege by an
army of demons. It´s impossible to help the rest of the country.


Dariol:
The capital city of the country part, where the demons are. Dariol has existed for 586 years, but it was destroyed 500 years ago
in a great war.After the war the people rebuilt it. Dariol was named after the demi-god Dariol, who died 832 years ago.
11 years ago the portal of the demon lord Immerasche was opened, at the Mountain Hold, Dariol was attacked and was severel wounded. The Lord of Dariol, Lord Feros, was killed after the first attack by Immerasche.
Feros´ wife, Lady Alyzia the high priestess, could ban away Immerasche back to his portal.
But both had fallen into a coma. Since that day Prince Xenio is the Lord of Dariol.


The damned Tower:
The damned Tower was once the home of Baron Amkal and his family, In a battle against the Demon Warlord
Troz´kamdral, the tower was mostly destroyed and Baron Amkal was killed. He and his guardians have
rested in the tower since then, waiting for visitors...


The castle of Dungeons:
The untakeable castle of the Dungeon Gods is the only way into the other country's of Erradar for the demons.
Defended by the Dungeon Gods, every day more and more demons die in front of this last stronghold.
But the mighty Dungeon gods can´t hold it forever...
The castle, a present of demigod Dariol for the second generation of Dungeon Gods, is going to fall...


Amastar:
This poor village was once a beautiful, peaceful village, Led by Domard the Wise. But Amastar
was also under attack by the demons, so this once beautiful village shall be peaceful no more.
Today, Amastar only a few houses big, is under siege by the monsters.


Lord Immerasche:
The Lord of a giant demon army, is over 300 years old and a high master of dark magic. The giant demon
could destroy full cities with the flick of a finger. He opened the portal into the world of Erradar, to earn more land,
reputation, and might.


Lord Talius Feros of Dariol
The dead Lord of Dariol who was killed in a battle against Immerasche. A mighty warrior at
just 56 years old, His wife Alyzia is the greatest Light Priestess in the world so great in fact that she
banished Immerasche from this world...


Prince Xenio Feros of Dariol
Son of the King & Queen of Dariol, he was corinated at the young age of 28. Xenio is wise and mighty for a man
of his age, He is a natural born leader and a true servant of the light.


Lady Alyzia Feros of Dariol
The High Priestess of Light, and Lady of Dariol, she is one of the mightiest people in Erradar. For 10 years she
has been stuck in a never ending slumber, like demon lord Immerasche ever since she banished him.
Alyzia´s sister Caria a high master of magic.


Fulborgs Valley and Desert Woodfall:
The Fulborgs once lived peacefuly in the Endless Forest. But eventually the demons went there too.
The Fulborg hid in their secret valley.
But the monsters destroyed a large part of the forest and burnt the earth.
The desert, Woodfall camp
In this desert many orc's & bandits are hiding. They want the desert for themselves, while the Fulborgs want
to rebuild it. So a war was started, After 5 years of war both sides are still fighting against each other.
Their leaders are Shaman Nurz´amanal and Sergeant Milen.


Shaman Nurz´amanal:
Leader of the Fulborg surivors, he is 162 years old and the wisest and mightyist leader of his small people.


Sergeant Milen:
Milen, an orc-rider, was Sergeant of the Orcish-Army. At 29 years of age he left and became a lawbreaking bandit
and thief. He is now leader of a big group of orc's in the Desert Woodfall.


Field of Honor:
The Field of Honor was an battlefield of a great war in 191 A.D., when the giant Redorc-Army fought against the
human troops. The war took 100.000 Lives, 60.000 of them Orcs & 40,000 of them human.
The leader of the humans fell in the battle.


Hellhold:
When the portal was opened in 821 A.D. at the Mountain Hold, the demons took the mountain and built a castle out of it's hard stone.
They used dark magic as a defence, and so the Hellhold was built.


Church of the Holy Wood:
This church, located in the wilderness around Dariol hides another secret of the Amkal-Family.
Bishop Amkal, once leader of Light and Hope, is now a mighty servant of the doom.


RELIGIONS:

The Light:
The religion of Light has the most servants and is the favored religion for humans and some elven-races. They pray
to the holy might, which is used by priests, lightmages, and paladins. They say, if there were to be no light,
the world would live in shadows.


The Holy Sun:
This religion is somewhat like the religion of Light, and has thousands of servants.
The people pray to the holy fires of the Sun, which defeats the cold of their world.
The servants of Light belive this religion to be an evil cult.


The Shamans:
Shamans serve the nature, ghosts and the living world.


The Hammers of the Titans:
Most Dwarves pray to 5 holy Titans, Kumbra, Dorkam, Tiloz, Fitror and Slamt, which translated mean;
Water, Earth, Air, Fire and Light.
These 5 Titans are the creators of the world.
 
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Here's an update to the post for you (I revised the English to make it makes more sense)

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Dungeon Gods:
The Dungeon Gods are the lands guardians. They have existed for 1000 generations. Their quest is to keep monsters, demons
and all manners of evil in their Dungeon, to save the world from them.
The 999th generation was killed by the Demon lord Immerasche, but 7 mighty warriors came to fend Immerasche off.
They are the 1000th generation. At the moment, their castle is under siege by an
army of demons. It´s impossible to help the rest of the country.


Dariol:
The capital city of the country part, where the demons are. Dariol has existed for 586 years, but it was destroyed 500 years ago
in a great war.After the war the people rebuilt it. Dariol was named after the demi-god Dariol, who died 832 years ago.
11 years ago the portal of the demon lord Immerasche was opened, at the (Mountain Hold?) Mount Hold, Dariol was attacked and was severely
wounded. The Lord of Dariol, Lord Feros, was killed after the first attack by Immerasche.
Feros´ wife, Lady Alyzia the high priestess, could ban away Immerasche back to his portal. <----(Could have banned Immerasche back through the portal?)
But both had fallen into a coma. Since that day Prince Xenio is the Lord of Dariol.


The damned Tower:
The damned Tower was once the home of Baron Amkal and his family, In a battle against the Demon Warlord
Troz´kamdral, the tower was mostly destroyed and Baron Amkal was killed. He and his guardians have
rested in the tower since then, waiting for visitors...


The castle of Dungeons:
The untakeable castle of the Dungeon Gods is the only way into the other country's of Erradar for the demons.
Defended by the Dungeon Gods, every day more and more demons die in front of this last stronghold.
But the mighty Dungeon gods can´t hold it forever...
The castle, a present of demigod Dariol for the second generation of Dungeon Gods, is going to fall...


Amastar:
This poor village was once a beautiful, peaceful village, Led by Domard the Wise. But Amastar
was also under attack by the demons, so this once beautiful village shall be peaceful no more.
Today, Amastar only a few houses big, is under siege by the monsters (Demons?)
[I cut off the rest because it made no sense...]




Lord Immerasche:
The Lord of a giant demon army, is over 300 years old and a high master of dark magic. The giant demon
could destroy full cities with the flick of a finger. He opened the portal into the world of Erradar (Rip-off of WoW lore...), to earn more land,
reputation, and might.


Lord Talius Feros of Dariol
The dead Lord of Dariol who was killed in a battle against Immerasche. A mighty warrior at
just 56 years old, His wife Alyzia is the greatest Light Priestess in the world so great in fact that she
banished Immerasche from this world...


Prince Xenio Feros of Dariol
Son of the King & Queen of Dariol, he was corinated at the young age of 28. Xenio is wise and mighty for a man
of his age, He is a natural born leader and a true servant of the light.


Lady Alyzia Feros of Dariol
The High Priestess of Light, and Lady of Dariol, she is one of the mightiest people in Erradar. For 10 years she
has been stuck in a never ending slumber, like demon lord Immerasche ever since she banished him.
Alyzia´s sister Caria a high master of magic,(I don't understand this part [just not the might of Light and Shadow.] )

Fulborgs Valley and Desert Woodfall:
The Fulborgs (Furblogs from wow?) once lived peacefuly in the Endless Forest. But eventually the demons went there too.
( I don't get what your saying here... [Trolls, Gnolls, and other monsters made the Fulborg's run away.] ) The Fulborg hid in their secret valley.
But the monsters destroyed a large part of the forest and burnt the earth.
The desert, Woodfall camp
In this desert many orc's & bandits are hiding. They want the desert for themselves, while the Fulborgs want
to rebuild it. So a war was started, After 5 years of war both sides are still fighting against each other.
Their leaders are Shaman Nurz´amanal and Sergeant Milen.


Shaman Nurz´amanal:
Leader of the Fulborg surivors, he is 162 years old and the wisest and mightyist leader of his small people.


Sergeant Milen:
Milen, an orc-rider, was Sergeant of the Orcish-Army. At 29 years of age he left and became a lawbreaking bandit
and thief. He is now leader of a big group of orc's in the Desert Woodfall.


Field of Honor:
The Field of Honor was an battlefield of a great war in 191 A.D., when the giant Redorc-Army fought against the
human troops. The war took 100.000 Lives, 60.000 of them Orcs & 40,000 of them human.
The leader of the humans fell in the battle. (Cut the rest off, couldent revise it)

Hellhold:
When the portal was opened in 821 A.D. at the (Mountian Hold?) Mount Hold, the demons took the mountain and built a castle out of it's hard stone.
They used dark magic as a defence, and so the Hellhold was built. (Sounds like Heliord from Tales of Vesparia, Xbox 360 game)


Church of the Holy Wood:
This church, located in the wilderness around Dariol hides another secret of the Amkal-Family.
Bishop Amkal, once leader of Light and Hope, is now a mighty servant of the doom. [Demons?]
(Laughed so hard at this name, not going to state why due to inapropreate words)






RELIGIONS:

The Light:
The religion of Light has the most servants and is the favored religion for humans and some elven-races. They pray
to the holy might, which is used by priests, lightmages, and paladins. They say, if there were to be no light,
the world would live in shadows. (TRUE!)


The Holy Sun:
This religion is somewhat like the religion of Light, and has thousands of servants.
The people pray to the holy fires of the Sun, which defeats the cold of their world.
The servants of Light belive this religion to be an evil cult.


The Shamans:
Shamans serve the nature, ghosts and the living world.


The Hammers of the Titans:
Most Dwarves pray to 5 holy Titans, Kumbra, Dorkam, Tiloz, Fitror and Slamt, which translated mean;
Water, Earth, Air, Fire and Light.
These 5 Titans are the creators of the world.

(Theres probably a few errors left but it sound's better when read now.)
 
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Ah, thank you ! Forgot to say someone may take a look at it^^

It was damn hard for me to translate all my crap from German to English :S

And: Erradar don´t mean Eredar (Race of Archimonde, Kil´jeaden etc) Didn´t know about the Eredar as i found the name Erradar :p (It´s the name of 2 of my first RPGs, sadly in german, if they are in English, i would send them to Hive to show ^^)

Well, anyway:

+REP for you, will correct it now :)
 
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Lord Immerasche:
The Lord of a giant demon army, is over 300 years old and a high master of dark magic. The giant demon
could destroy full cities with the flick of a finger. He opened the portal into the world of Erradar (Rip-off of WoW lore...), to earn more land,
reputation, and might.

What exactly is the wow rip-off here ? The name ? or ?
 
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There is a race named Eredar in Warcraft. (Archimonde, Kil´jeaden) so the name of the world Erradar saw like it. But it isn´t ^^ It´s just a name i though out.
 
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If Erradar is the world, than there is no problem since Eredar is a race in warcraft, not a world. In warcraft eredars come from the world of Argus.
 
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So, this is no theme anymore :p
(I´ve got 2 more Erradar Maps, Singleplayer RPG, but in german :p bad thing damnit)
 
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