DarkShadows ORPG V1.4b

[Moderator]

20:34, 31st Jul 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

Bad terrain, leaks, typo's, incorrect tooltips etc...

 

[ultmatmaster]

subscribing

 

[dead-man-walking]

Vote for Rejection. No description. 'Nuff said.

 

[Evilz]

its on w3m ?

sorry I don't think w3m maps will be good

 

[hases94]

Dark Shadows? did you see Light Shadows? I never saw light shadows( i mean irl )... gonna look on map.

 

[Etzer]

Left part of map looks empty, description is bad, i vote for rejection

 

[ultmatmaster]

Light Shadows

whats that iv never herd of that

Left part of map looks empty

im going to add more terrain in leighter virsions it would be finished but i cant add any more trees in so thats why its blank for now

description is bad

how could i improve there is no constructive critisem in it so i cant improve if i dont know how

its on w3m

its on TFT its just protected

 

[ap0calypse]

Everything about a description, hope that helps...

 

[ultmatmaster]

what need fixing on it apart from the discription?
i Have change the discription how is it now

 

[Aesthetics]

Description is still bad. Go check out other maps' descriptions for an example. (preferably an approved map)

 

[ultmatmaster]

I have changed the discription again how is it now?

 

[ap0calypse]

I have changed the discription again how is it now?

Well, my description for a melee-map was a lot longer, but I guess it meets the minimum requirements now =D
You can still add quite a lot, try to check the description from other maps regularly and keep improving the description with each update.

Description of my melee-map

General Info:

This is my first actual melee-map, so I don't really know about the drop-rates nowadays and how I would test this (I have tested it, but just by playing a game... I don't really know for what I should pay attention).

• 4 players, every player has 2 goldmines + 2 other goldmines
• Not symmetric
• Ashenvale terrain
• Trees haven't been 'massively stacked'
• Fog and weather effect

Little Story:

Back in the days humanity couldn't settle, because of the roaming creatures, a few dare to flee to a thick forest, creating an entire civilization within a few years.
Yet, they did not know this was the territory of an ancient dragon, an eternally sleeping dragon, which would cause the whole forest to tremble if awoken.
A villager, who was lost in the fog, encountered a huge claw, after a few days of struggling through the forest he reached the town, since then, a statue as been created, pointing in the direction of the Dragon.

Unfortunately, the civilization became too big, the hunters didn't have anything to shoot around the town, so they moved further and further away, until the day the dragon awoke and destroyed the city with tremendous power.
Since then, nobody dares to enter the forest again, rumour goes that not all mysteries have been discovered yet...

Screenshots:

Screenshots

Beneath the Arch

A statue in the forest

The Dragon's Lair

The Dragon's Paw

Changelog

First Update:

• Changed the Dragon's loot.
• Changed the Dragon Roost's position (the screenshots aren't exactly correct now, but should suffice).
• Fixed the camp-mode.

Second Update:

• Fixed some loots.
• Changed the terrain, added more doodads (kept to a minimum inside bases).

Third Update:

• Added more doodads.
• Stacked the trees.
• New screenshots available

Created by ap0calypse_DaM ('ap0calypse' on the hive).

 

[CradleKing]

Decided to test your map, figured it wouldnt be that good seeing how it was not anywhere near completion. and i was right. the character system is nice with the upgrade "ranks" but its disappointing how thename never changes through ranking system. Archer is still archer at rank 4. Swordsmen Still Swordsmen... also terrain is horrible, many monsters are blocked from access, especially the spider boss and centaur boss. a range unit can kill centar boss but he never revives aswell. also where the demon gaurds and fel hounds are located you can easily pick them off from the centaurs aswell those likewise do not respawn. in the graveyard any1 can enter it, that and when you kill the gate it keeps regenerating and destroying itself. and if they are elvel 30 creeps then add more hp or something. there should be no reason why my level 2 rank 2 archer should be able to 2 shot them. also what is the point of poison archer and frost archer... are they alternative characters to the ranger family... if so where is fire ranger... also having the bandit lords with divine shield is a waste, you have to run around and trigger them all to get shield then run back and kill them. woudl probably be a better idea to either remove the spells or replace it with another creep. also you need to make the walls around the main town (where you tier up) invulnerable. i was able to destroy a wall and go directly into fel gaurds in that little dungeon by (hell spawn or whatever it is called where you transport into your boss) also why is that boss so dam strong he will oneshot any1 to make it more effective i would reduce his damage significantly. his health is fine but the damage is about 1000000+ with 100% armor reduction. anyway i playd for about hour and a half and got up to level 200+ on a rank 3 ranger. no items implemented aside from the pots and the basic staff sword armor and arrows. the upgraded items do not work they are just scroll of beast and anime dead. implement some items from bosses get them to respawn fix the terrain and it might be a popular map, "MIGHT" Also might be good to add more spells to the chars. at rank one you get 4 spells rank 2,3 and 4 you get only 3 spells that never change. kinda repetative and wasteful.

 

[darkpyro36]

terrain needs alot of work do some spell and grammer checking also mosters will mob u as u fight try more monster control