Darcia

[Moderator]

Misha 13th Jul 2013

Moderator's Review: please consult my first post in the thread and consult my post here, about things that miff me, oke? ^^

lastly, add a growling or howling death sound

 

[Roland]

Very nice Model! I The polygons are kinda blocky, can you try to fix it?

 

[SpasMaster]

I might have nightmares if I don't stop looking at this... O_O

 

[Roland]

Then, Don't look at it! or you might be like them... :3

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Nice use of the troll headhunter texture!

 

[Misha]

mhm.. let's see.. that head could use better rewrapping (mainly snout top and back)
those teeth should be interlocking a bit and that jaw should be lill more up, as it looks really dislocated atm.. also, take a look at how canine teeth look and remake that, those spear-ish lower front teeth make little sense..

next, the forearms need rewrapping rather badly, same with hands.. details of the back and front of the torso don't connect at the sides. Lower legs could use lill more love too, the guy is having a hole in his pants in a certain place, and he's missing a tail (although that last might be on purpose?)

animations are... strange, but use-able, although you still need the 'decay flesh' and 'decay bone' anim. or.. just 'dissipate' if you want to turn it to a hero
'spell channel' looks unfinished, probably because it's meant to be just a lunge, controlled by triggers.. because of that i suggest you to rename it to, i dunno.. something with 'first' as suffix (after the word), and set the rarity of the anim to a higher number so it doesn't randomly play. same with 'spell puke'

in short, neat model, but it could use more tweaks, especially using a few more blue troll textures or so..

 

[Kyrbi0]

Wow, almost entirely out of the Troll Shadow Headhunter? Crazy.

Looks interesting. Look forward to improvements.

 

[Misha]

actually he made it out of troll shadowhunter

 

[Kyrbi0]

Duly noted.

Off-Topic, MAN this site is so slow recently. This is the only thing all day that has changed in my subscriptions... Let's get one of the many modelling contests up or something.

 

[UndeadImmortal]

This looks like from the Avatar movie.

 

[sonofjay]

Freaking 2.3k poly.

Looks fresh though.

 

[GreeN!X]

Awesome. But is that a hole near the crotch I see?

Anyway, cool model. +rep from me.

 

[stonneash]

Model is great, animations are Awesome but the rap is Awful.

 

[GreeN!X]

Model is great, animations are Awesome but the rap is Awful.

Rap is bad but it isn't the worst

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[onikaze]

great model^^
im your fan icewolf always epic hehe

 

[eubz]

IDK why ther are alternate animations when there is no MORPH ANIMATION. I think you can re-state those animations to walk - 1, walk - 2, attack - 1, attack - 2, etc. They can still be playable in-game.

I think alternate animations are played when the model has morphed.

 

[Misha]

IDK why ther are alternate animations when there is no MORPH ANIMATION. I think you can re-state those animations to walk - 1, walk - 2, attack - 1, attack - 2, etc. They can still be playable in-game.

I think alternate animations are played when the model has morphed.

I believe this is a Mortal-combat-like setup, where the chara just switches stance, no morphs needed

 

[icewolf055]

IDK why ther are alternate animations when there is no MORPH ANIMATION. I think you can re-state those animations to walk - 1, walk - 2, attack - 1, attack - 2, etc. They can still be playable in-game.

I think alternate animations are played when the model has morphed.

Hmm.. those are just types of animations that he will use after he rages (see the moon i think?) so i think he doesnt need morph animation then...

Very nice Model! I The polygons are kinda blocky, can you try to fix it?

Thanks , try again the newest one

Nice use of the troll headhunter texture!

Thanks hehe

mhm.. let's see.. that head could use better rewrapping (mainly snout top and back)
those teeth should be interlocking a bit and that jaw should be lill more up, as it looks really dislocated atm.. also, take a look at how canine teeth look and remake that, those spear-ish lower front teeth make little sense..

next, the forearms need rewrapping rather badly, same with hands.. details of the back and front of the torso don't connect at the sides. Lower legs could use lill more love too, the guy is having a hole in his pants in a certain place, and he's missing a tail (although that last might be on purpose?)

animations are... strange, but use-able, although you still need the 'decay flesh' and 'decay bone' anim. or.. just 'dissipate' if you want to turn it to a hero
'spell channel' looks unfinished, probably because it's meant to be just a lunge, controlled by triggers.. because of that i suggest you to rename it to, i dunno.. something with 'first' as suffix (after the word), and set the rarity of the anim to a higher number so it doesn't randomly play. same with 'spell puke'

in short, neat model, but it could use more tweaks, especially using a few more blue troll textures or so..

Thanks for the advices

Wow, almost entirely out of the Troll Shadow Headhunter? Crazy.

Looks interesting. Look forward to improvements.

Thanks

ooo a worgen, really usefull to put attachments and make a powerfull hero

Thanks, its updated.

This looks like from the Avatar movie.

Does it? What exactly it looks like? hehe

Model is great, animations are Awesome but the rap is Awful.

Thanks, what do you the the rap? :-?

Awesome. But is that a hole near the crotch I see?

Anyway, cool model. +rep from me.

Thanks

great model^^
im your fan icewolf always epic hehe

Thanks bro ^^

 

[Misha]

Okay, would you explain to me what you want to do with those 'spell channel' and spell puke' animations? They can be considered cut, unfinished in war3 terms, usable only by triggers, they shouldn't have 'spell' in them because the engine might play them instead the normal spell anims..
the hands are not really wrapped ok, they look kinda bland and not really bring the claws into view.. i suggest you tinker a bit more
and.. you might wanna connect that lower back better so it does not deform that much when he hunches to do some anims

 

[icewolf055]

Hmm.. i planned to make those animations for who wants to use them for Jumping a far distance to an area or a target's place (then pull them back just incase), via trigger ofc and why i named them like that, its because i heard that trigger cant work if the animation doesnt have a acceptable name (attack, spells... ), correct me if im wrong

 

[Misha]

Hmm.. i planned to make those animations for who wants to use them for Jumping a far distance to an area or a target's place (then pull them back just incase), via trigger ofc and why i named them like that, its because i heard that trigger cant work if the animation doesnt have a acceptable name (attack, spells... ), correct me if im wrong

hm that is kinda true, but suffixes like 'first, second' and such so work nicely

 

[icewolf055]

Okay i'll change them next time. Also, finally decided to re-wrap the hands, kinda lazy at this part tho

 

[Misha]

right, two more things that kinda miff me in the rig are his lower back and lower jaw..

for the lower back, it gets rather stretched or distorted in attack alternate anims, and maybe some more, haven't checked that thoroughly.. it really looks like something breaks there.. i can't really explain but maybe you can see of someone attempts to repeat those anims himself while you watch their lower back (lol)

as for lower jaw, well the whole pivot place for it and stuff near to it would be somewhere behind your current point near the ears, right now it looks like it's just hinged

 

[Jesus from Ukraine]

Not bad 4/5

 

[stonneash]

Nice, but hand look weird, but everything else is perfect
4.5/5

 

[HappyCockroach]

Wow, that's really big set of animations. And still, the filesize is nice. Did you make them by yourself? Or did you use some WoW anims as base?

 

[icewolf055]

Thanks : )

And yeah i made them, iirc i did not know how to do it in 3ds max back when i was making this model, i was using MDLvis or something lol.

 

[Kyrbi0]

Dang, I just noticed those punch/kick animations in the middle of the wolf-y howl/slice ones... I wonder if those could be ported into a sort of Pandaren Kickboxer unit...

 

[HandsOfficial]

this thing has so much potential
we need more werewolf/werebears (any werebears for that matter lol)
POTENTIAL/5