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him/herself: use "themselves" in that case (at least until the English language decides on a single true gender-neutral pronoun).
Map 7
tally -> tarry
got stuck -> were trapped
just began -> just begun
Unless I missed something, Deathwing never identifies himself as Daval Prestor, which is the name the text gives him.
six klicks -> six kilometers. Does Warcraft use metric?
During the flight scene, the black mask sometimes shows up in a corner. Unless Deathwing is the one prophesied to sweep a third of the stars from the sky, in which case he's short six heads and eight horns.
Did Deathwing have a metal jaw back in WII?
Map 9
given how -> given that
his/her -> their
His grandfather was a panda? That explains so much and yet so little.
Perenolde's main room is... I dunno, too big and/or empty. Also you should use floor textures that don't keep jumping all over the place.
Deathwing should be visible if Perenolde can see him.
Needs more sounds of screaming, offscreen destruction and Deathwing plowing his way through the base.
Map 7
tally -> tarry
got stuck -> were trapped
just began -> just begun
Unless I missed something, Deathwing never identifies himself as Daval Prestor, which is the name the text gives him.
six klicks -> six kilometers. Does Warcraft use metric?
During the flight scene, the black mask sometimes shows up in a corner. Unless Deathwing is the one prophesied to sweep a third of the stars from the sky, in which case he's short six heads and eight horns.
Did Deathwing have a metal jaw back in WII?
Map 9
given how -> given that
his/her -> their
His grandfather was a panda? That explains so much and yet so little.
Perenolde's main room is... I dunno, too big and/or empty. Also you should use floor textures that don't keep jumping all over the place.
Deathwing should be visible if Perenolde can see him.
Needs more sounds of screaming, offscreen destruction and Deathwing plowing his way through the base.
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