Ampharos_222's Awesome gallery

[-Grendel]

Welcome to the Beastiary of skeletons

Brute force:
Skeleton Brute

Bone Sentinel

Angolmor the leader

Calcium Terror

Assassin and agile force:
Bone Assassin

Bone Cutter

Warlocks and Magician force:
Master Mage

Hominicle

Guitaricle

Deathweaver

more will be coming...

 

[-Peper-]

Decay animation display what you attach?
Easy, open Geoset Animation. Search the Decay animation in the Sequence Manager, look at the number at FROM. Copy, make new Geoset animation, click visiblity. Paste the number + : 0 (Example 33333: 0) And set the Geoset ID to your geoset.
Review coming soon.

EDIT:
My Review :
Animation, you used the Flesh golem anim. Good choice for skeleton.
but fix the Decay, or simply delete it.
Creativity, wow. You are so creative, even using non-attachment for attachment.
And finally, HOLY SHIT. Even this is your first model, you make it soooo creative! You finally deserves title of 2D-3D Artist!

 

[-Grendel]

thanks fixed my decay anim now ^_^

 

[Zealon]

You should upload it, its AWESOMESAUSE!!!

A suggestion, try to make the boots and waist a similar colour as the other parts of armour; it just gives the model a general colour theme, and makes it look better.

 

[-Peper-]

And.... make the boots material Twosided (Check the twosided box)
And you maybe want to add particles.

 

[-Grendel]

nah, no particles on this one. it's just meant to be a skeleton variation



EDIT: if anyone wishes to download the fixed version, here it is. model will soon be uploaded after some minor fixes:
View attachment Skull Brute.mdx

 

[-Peper-]

Okay, in my opinion it's ready to upload.

 

[-Grendel]

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/skeleton-brute-181968/?prev=r=20&page=198


leave a comment fellow hivers, it just happens that some pending models are on the last page of the models section.

 

[-Grendel]

skeletal assassin checking before uploading

well here's another crappy model by me, screenshot:




for anyone who wishes to check the model in world editor, here's the file
View attachment 92408


My world editor can't save maps so i want someone to check it for me

 

[-Peper-]

I'll check, review coming soon.
EDIT:
Hmm, the chest part looks scretched. Maybe make his chest lower.
Good idea on the team-colored....rope? And the scythe.
And the spikes looks unmatching, you can change it to more Assassin-ish items.

 

[-Grendel]

thanks for the review, the tc part is taken from the meatwagon. i'll think of something for the spines tho

 

[Zealon]

wow, dude its insane!! Very creative, i love this ;D

Also, its everything but crappy, its awesomesause!

 

[-Grendel]

so no more comments? come on i want to know if it has any bugs so i can fix it immediately

 

[Zealon]

Ok I tested it ingame. I don't have any knowledge of modeling so i'll just give you my basic, ingame, review.

There is a minor problem with the portrait, when he turns his head, you can clearly see his head isn't attached to his body, and you can notise the inside of his head, so you should probably cover up the back of his head. Other then that, the protrait looks very nice.

When he dies, he emmits greenish yellow blood, and makes the dreanei death sound. I'm sure its possible to change it to fit the model. Well I know its posible with the death sound anyway

And thats pretty much all. Btw is there supposed to be a team coloured buliding texture on his shoulder?

 

[-Grendel]

There is a minor problem with the portrait, when he turns his head, you can clearly see his head isn't attached to his body, and you can notise the inside of his head, so you should probably cover up the back of his head. Other then that, the protrait looks very nice.

well it is kinda odd with the portrait it's because i don't know how to make talking model portraits

When he dies, he emmits greenish yellow blood, and makes the dreanei death sound. I'm sure its possible to change it to fit the model. Well I know its posible with the death sound anyway

yes it is possible to change the sound(looks at tutorial section). not sure about the blood if its changeable, thanks

Btw is there supposed to be a team coloured buliding texture on his shoulder?

its from the meatwagon, yeah its supposed to have that ^_^


thanks for the review

 

[Zealon]

Oh yeah, I meant meatwagon

No problem, thank you for making such a cool model. Its pretty much ready to upload ^^

 

[-Grendel]

-bump-
no one is commenting, someone close this damn thread

 

[-Grendel]

Avernus Juggernaut - suggestions thread

Hi there fellow hive members!
i need suggestions on my model: Avernus Juggernaut

screenie:




model test:
View attachment Skeleton Juggernaut.mdx

PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS MODEL IS ONLY USED FOR HEROES AS I REMOVED THE PIT LORD'S DECAY BONE AND DECAY FLESH ANIMATIONS.

 

[Jaret]

Nice. of course you should add some more armor to it. But, let me see... You could try to make the head a little "Bigger chin" because I imagine it it would be more awesome! Add some Giant orc teeth, so it would look like a pitlord in the face.
EDIT: I did whta i meant. Here it is: (BTW The chin on the model's a little prettier)

 

[ImperialShadow]

Put some helm in that skeleton head

 

[Jaret]

Put some helm in that skeleton head

I'm pretty sure you meant ON that skeleton head. But nevermind...

OH, and please make some boots instead of those bones, they look not good. Boots (or find some horse-dead-like legs and map the bones to that texture) will make it look better.

 

[-Grendel]

thanks! lemme work on it

 

[GIANT_CRAB]

just put lots of armor for him, make his chest lean forward due to the heavy armor.

 

[ubran]

Looks interesting. The plates on the back give it a certain "bug" vibe, which depending on the map would be really cool. I think the wings are a good idea if you want an undead pitlord, but the frost wyrm wings don't match the rest of the bones, imo. And again, like Jaret said, thicker legs?

 

[-Grendel]

yeah i'll do that when i get home

 

[Zealon]

Awesome, can't wait for you to upload this ^^

 

[-Grendel]

so, comments anyone?

 

[Wintermute]

Show us what you have at the moment?

 

[-Grendel]

still tweaking it, i'm adding armor. but does it still need anything atm?

 

[Jaret]

Ah, dammit! My internet connection got disabled because my parents forgot to pay the telephone! I'll be out of THW for a week or so.

BTW: 2 more posts.

 

[D a w n]

a few things(just from a quick view on it)

1. I think the proportions are quite off. The head should be bigger. Also counts for the wings
2. the use of the skeleton orc texture would make it look much better
3.unwrap needs work
4. you got some mesh issues, especially the arms
5. animated wings would be nice

but the concept is indeed nice.

 

[Tamerleine]

try improving It's foot
make It look more like a real foot made of bone

 

[-Grendel]

~bump~

 

[-Peper-]

Wow, you merged this thread?
ADD MORE SKELLY!

 

[-Grendel]

yep more will be added, i will focus more on assassins and mages

 

[Zealon]

Awesome gallery indeed ^^

How bout a skeletal dog next?

 

[-Grendel]

sure^_^ if i'm up to it

 

[supertoinkz]

The gallery would look better if all of the model screenshots have the same size and same theme.
Also add links to their names (which will link to the resource if it is downloadable).

 

[Tamerleine]

all you need now is a flying type skeleton...
there is already a frostwyrm( a skeletal dragon) so maybe a skeletal bird(a harpy of some sort or a gargoyle made up of bones

 

[-Grendel]

Added Nereid into the Beastiary. model will be uploaded soon after Guitaricle gets approved
Nereid, hero for the int type units:

Nereid

also, i made another model(just for my spare time) this time a human
errm, i have no name for him yet

Random Human

HE'S NOT A DWARF

 

[Zealon]

:O

The more I see your work, the more you improve. That Nereid guy is just unbelievable;
I'd say he's worthy of recomended

How did you get so good?

 

[-Grendel]

thanks

i dunno, i just want to try out new stuff^_^

 

[Zealon]

Well keep it up dude, at this rate you could be a pro modeler one day

 

[Cavman]

Freaking Nereid looks glorious.

 

[-Grendel]

thanks i really appreciate it

 

[PROXY]

Nereid is totally amazing boy.

 

[-Grendel]

thank you, thank you
so, what do you guys think about the human battlemaster? does it look good?

 

[Zealon]

Its very good, I like his axes ^^
but I guess because Nereid was just so awesome, he directed everyones attention.

The human battlemaster uses the Pandaren Brewmaster's animations, right?

 

[-Grendel]

yes

 

[Zealon]

Cool, he'll make a great hero. More variation to the human race
And it will be useful too, as I don't think we even have many human heros on the Hive.