3 in 1

[Zenonoth]

442.76 MB, hope it's worth it, gonna download and give a review on this post ASAP.

 

[GreyGhost12]

For a map of this size I can't wait to test it.

 

[Verb8im]

This is just Threads of Fate with a different name

 

[nigromante2012]

play it please ... do not judge a book without reading it

 

[trebla ratilla]

Nescafe 3 in 1 gonna try this one..

Spoiler

 

[PhucTH]

So whut do we do we do in this campaign? You have nice background there, but we need more information, more detail about this map. What will we do, which timeline this map take place in, who is our main villain,.....
I haven't play your map yet, but I can't wait to play it and will give you a report later.

 

[The Tester]

pls share this campaigns gameplay video

 

[GreyGhost12]

Sadly, I was disappointed with this, Gameplay is good though, still ( language is bad , translations are bad , some of english Jaina's campagin descriptions are spanish chapter 2 is almost impossible since naga keeps attacking and you cant even build knights nor gryphons nor go to Castle
chapter 3 is kinda messy ( where i stopped) and finally WHY THE HELL CHEATS ARE NOT ALLOWED :\

 

[Anaxie]

Sadly, I was disappointed with this, Gameplay is good though, still ( language is bad , translations are bad , some of english Jaina's campagin descriptions are spanish chapter 2 is almost impossible since naga keeps attacking and you cant even build knights nor gryphons nor go to Castle
chapter 3 is kinda messy ( where i stopped) and finally WHY THE HELL CHEATS ARE NOT ALLOWED :\

I for one welcome localization of wc3 campaigns the more the better.

 

[thanhqui]

wow big camp.

 

[MnjauTheCat]

Just 1 thing.. please make the cut scenes be skip able :/

 

[MnjauTheCat]

Just 1 thing.. please make the cut scenes be skip able :/

Sorry but, I couldnt play this campaign... lvl 10 from the getgo.. mixed English/Spanish.. mostly spanish... even if ya pick English..
A lot of wasted spaces in the small thing hat I did notice.. and lack of enemies...
You have to redo a lot of it.. its not worth the 400mb+ dl :/

 

[kirbyfish]

^gud campaign ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° gana try it later

 

[Paillan]

oh yes, THIS thing... I remember this map from a facebook warcraft 3 spanish group... at that time the campaign was... lacking at best.
Gonna test it again I guess.

Also your description is broken.

EDIT

As back then, only the Jaina part of the campaign actually works, the rest is uncompleted. Why promise 3 campaigns in one to begin with? speaking of that, you may want to change the name of the campaign to something more fitting...

 

[deepstrasz]

Naming a campaign 3 in 1 is odd. Try thinking of a fitting name.
The description has problems.

Spoiler: Symphony of Frost and Flame

1. Moments later, after what, since when?
2. Totally random light show making little sense.
3. Starting the two end videos of the TfT, really!?
4. Words of the text in the transmissions do not match the audio.

Spoiler: Interlude

1. The weird video inside the map between cinematic borders lags. What does it even represent? How is it in any relation to the previous ones?
2. Then, a map without any text loads.
3. The Jaina interlude is just not explicit. What's going on there exactly? Where are they!?
4. The text about Thrall has c00FF etc. before it.
5. Jaina is a princess!?

Spoiler: conflicts

1. The dialogues overall are childish, I mean, they don't even seem like normal people talking to each other.
2. 3 of her spells have the same description when learned.
3. So, you've got a full time healer and what you get from the bandits is Healing Salve? Oh, so the courier does not heal himself.
4. First I had Flame Strike when I chose the first spell. Now I have Blizzard.
5. The main quest message came after I returned to the starting point from the bandit tent. OK, changed back when I got to the broken trees.
6. Some columns are improperly placed too close to cliffs which makes them levitate. Rocks too, possibly many other doodads.
7. "But ghosts will not damage you?" What? Ghosts were farther than the place she said that. Plus it makes little sense. Everything can damage the courier from murlocs to ghosts. Or maybe you were referring to possession?
8. I suggest a different model/skin for Footmen near ghosts, something like Possessed Footman. Ah, they were part of a renegade wizard group. Why did they barricade themselves?
9. Why not let the Captain have Defend available?
10. Units selected during cinematic mode (meeting Kelen).
11. Houses have no name but can attack at a melee range Units can get through the houses.
12. Open the Door did not complete after both switches were lowered.
13. The ability of the Divine Ray has no description.
14. Seriously that alarm is annoying. What's this World War?
15. The worm gets back to its place after beating almost half of the base.

Spoiler: encounter

1. I think the quest message appeared right during the intro.
2. Why would a knight have Unholy Aura?
3. The Priest and Sorceress do not start with full mana.
4. Quest messages are improperly shown. They're just one liners with no clue if they're main or optional quests unless you look in the Quest Log.
5. Defend ability, why not?
6. Spider eggs have no name.
7. What about another type of spells, arcane or something?
8. Hydromancers have three spells while the Priests and Sorceress can't even use the second.
9. The Fountain of Health is not invulnerable.
10. So there's a normal Knight too which is smaller and doesn't have the aura.
11. Doodads in the air again.
12. Why was there a Shield of Honour in the middle of the road?
13. The Gold Mine is also not invulnerable.
14. Meteor costs too low mana for 500 damage.
15. I suggest all spells follow the same rules: QWERTY; actually ALT+Q, then Q can get you out of the game.
16. Don't know if you're supposed to have a base and fight naga that come to your base but I did not destroy all of the naga buildings intentionally to see what happens.
17. That naga hero has a Mountain King name
18. If spells change, the cooldown of the ultimate is reset.
19. After you destroy Munin's base, your troops are replaced. Actually, their ownership has changed to teal and the worm fights them.

Spoiler: cave

1. Now, Jaina and co. are blue.
2. What were those troops doing ahead of Jaina so they could die? Why did they go into the cave anyway?
3. Why Atlanteans?
4. It might be getting colder as they progress deeper but what about oxygen?
5. I don't think I was given the option to choose the language this time. After I got past the bridge, Espnol started.
6. What the frozen hell are these people doing in this cave under locked gates?
7. Neutral Priests have the sleep sign over their head but come to heal my troops... They also heal the ghosts... The sleep sign does not disappear after they are rescued.
8. What's the orc... at least it's English again.
9. That blue effect blocks vision of units and hurts the eyes.
10. No quests in the Quest Log.
11. Where did the orc disappear after defeating the Infernal?
12. Some units have Espanol names like Cria Fria de Nerubian. Even some player names are in Spanish Los Salvadores. Hidra prequena de pantano. Hidra venenosa. Ziggurat moderado, helado. Wuruhi Sombrio.
13. Avoid naming things like Nerubian Ziggurat Simple.
14. What's the use of all those Gold Coins?
15. How do you get to that place with many items in the water? Is it possible?
16. Shouldn't the cold deal damage over time to units like some sort of Disease Cloud?
17. When reaching the northwestern part of the map almost at the top corner, the cinematic scene in Espanol which appeared earlier in the level started again and moved my hero to the zone where she met the troops right before the orc.
18. What's with those wolfmen?
19. The place after you use the Magic Key Chain needs a zoom out camera.
20. Entering the cave to the southeast opens up a map with a melee loading screen called Otro Mapa de Warcraft III. It looks like a test map... or not.

Spoiler: Otro mapa...

1. Player name: Sobrevivientes.
2. This map lags like hell after you meet the insane nerubian hero. It kills you in one shot... It takes forever to kill it with Time Stop...
3. Some of your units are not stopped by Jaina's ability.

The boat scene lasts too long with only one camera shot. Avoid camera clipping through terrain/doodads etc.
The first mission of Rexxar is named Otro Mapa de Warcraft III.
There are mixed English and Espanol transmissions in the first level.
Heroes start with level 10 and their spells aren't already set. Thrall's "ultimate" has no tooltip.

Cannot skip cinematic scenes.

Overall it is not finished and has issues. I'm not bothering trying the Maiev campaign since it says it's not in English.

Awaiting Update.

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[DarkSword123]

I actually have no idea what's happening in this campaign but i'll play it anyway

 

[Misha]

hm.. hive says this map is using two (or more) of my models, and i'm not in the credits on this page.. hm.. oO

 

[deepstrasz]

hm.. hive says this map is using two (or more) of my models, and i'm not in the credits on this page.. hm.. oO

Oh no, Misha's part of the credits list police.

 

[Misha]

Oi, i'm just curious xP

 

[deepstrasz]

Oi, i'm just curious xP

But, what were the chances for you to get into Substandard and find something which uses your stuff ?

 

[Misha]

But, what were the chances for you to get into Substandard and find something which uses your stuff ?

blame the boredom and hive's 'view usage' of a model or skin button/links xD

 

[deepstrasz]

hive's 'view usage'

Aah So that was it.