Darnassus, Part 2:
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Now that his mind was more clear, he could heard that strange tongue being spoken by multiple beings around him;
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A very cat; large enough to be a mount.
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... and a long ways from Ashenvale."
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A long way would be better, perhaps?
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he was sure they would at least throw him in prison for awhile.
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'At most' would be more appropriate, no? "At least" implies that the punishment will likely be worse than just being thrown in prison, with prison being the least bad punishment possible.
Darnassus, Part 3:
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Pass the archway were some large, living trees.
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Past?
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though Kul'thran did not what they were called.
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Kul'thran could a statue of a female night elf holding up a bowl
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"You're joking," he heard Lady Whisperleaf said.
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