Wrath of the Sea Witch

[Moderator]

18:32, 15th Aug 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

1) Description
2) No proper credits
3) Not original
4) Low customization (most units are still very similar to the human ones).

 

[knight26]

Well for once, begging moderators to not reject your map, won't make it harder for them to reject your map.
on-topic:
U need a better description, and proper credit to each creator of the models which you used.

 

[Scarmaker]

You could use islands in this map. This map does not feel like Murloc map.

 

[-Kobas-]

Your description is really bad, no one will download your map if they don't know what to do or what to expect to find in your map!

Let me show ya something!

1st. Your Description Now

The Sea Witch has rerurned and now wants vengence against the Horde and anyone who appose her and her minions. The Murloc are more stonger and more powerful as ever! (More units have been added to the races. Choice of 5 Murloc Heroes and many more!)

I give GREAT Credit to all those who made the models. They are the best of the best.

Humans have been replaced with Murlocs.

Please don't Reject this map. Its not as big as the last one I made.

If you find any problems l'll be happy to fix them.

2nd. Improved Description

Wrath of the Sea Witch
Created by Thomas Diedrich

The Sea Witch has rerurned and now wants vengence against the Horde and anyone who appose her and her minions. The Murloc are more stonger and more powerful as ever! (More units have been added to the races. Choice of 5 Murloc Heroes and many more!)

I give GREAT Credit to all those who made the models. They are the best of the best.

Humans have been replaced with Murlocs.

Please don't Reject this map. Its not as big as the last one I made.

If you find any problems l'll be happy to fix them.

3th. Important Suggestions

Your description is poor even in improved form because you still miss:

Map Info:
Explain even more what is goal in your map!
How to play what to do!
Features:
Explain game modes if you created some!
Same for difficulties!
Post comment about each system that you use in your map
etc etc
Screenshots and Videos:
Post some pictures about epic terrain, gameplay, awesome spells etc etc
Change Log:
What is changed in this version!
What you want to add in incoming one etc etc
Credits:
Give nice credits to all people who helped you...
Author's Notes:
Post something more about your map, useful links etc etc...

4th. Map Description Tutorials and useful links

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Color List: Click
Need pictures for your map Description? - Come here!

Map Description Templates

Improve this description first, so I can review your map!

 

[NagaDudeLord]

if I make the description better. Will you unreject it?

 

[-Kobas-]

Nope, description is only small point of whole map!

Any map should have nice description at first place, then come gameplay!

 

[takakenji]

no, the map is still bad with a description.

 

[NagaDudeLord]

Ok then. Tell me whats the worst thing about this map and ill fix it.

 

[-Kobas-]

Moderator Comments (Not Rated)

18:32, 15th Aug 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

1) Description
2) No proper credits
3) Not original
4) Low customization (most units are still very similar to the human ones).

Well maybe this -.^?

 

[NagaDudeLord]

What do you mean by credits? There are no credits to a game after you win. Or do you mean "credit" to the people who made the models?

 

[-Kobas-]

Or do you mean "credit" to the people who made the models?

Models, textures, icons, maybe loading screen, give idea, helped ya in any other way!
People names should be listed ingame (usually one quest is reserved for them) and here!

 

[NagaDudeLord]

Ok then. I'll get right on it. Can you show me a few fonts i can use in the map description?

 

[NagaDudeLord]

You could use islands in this map. This map does not feel like Murloc map.

I seen a lot of Murloc Maps and they do not require Islands, have a look for yourself. Also there are 2 island in the corners.