War at the Great Mining Area

[Moderator]

17:46, 22nd Aug 2011
-Kobas-:
Status: Rejected

 

[Zion]

Please tell me everything which is wrong I will try to fix it and avoid it from my new maps I know the middle part of the map isn't at middle, but well sorry ^^"

 

[ksStr]

terrain seems plain...

Edited----------------------]
DUDE-.- this ain't melee map...
-You changed the gameplay constant
Please change the map type

 

[kevlamin]

This is an altered melee, not melee.
Also I see 4 player start locations but this is a one player map - is it meant to be only single player? Also sorry if I'm wrong but this doesn't have AI does it?

There is 3 enemy camps there, but they are without control.

So a single Player altered melee with no AI?? hmm

 

[ksStr]

He did not delete the triggers so AI will move on their own...

 

[kevlamin]

Ah okay

 

[Zion]

No...3 enemy camp in south, north and mid. They aren't moving, no AI (only if you set it to the other 3 starting localisation).You can kill them only if you want and it will gives you extra gold and items... However it's a 4 player map, and I said I will update the terrarian soon.

 

[Zion]

04.march Updated
Sorry I forgot to set the player number to 4 it's why only you was at the map, but I fixed it...
Redownload it, and sorry.

 

[ksStr]

@@ Can you please use "Quote" button ...
It's hard to see the "numbers" ...

 

[Zion]

5th march Update:
-Added a few effects to the water, I know it's still poor but I'm working on it. (the terrarian too)
-Added a new Mini-boss to the West and the East side of the river. (Giant Sea Elemental*)
*Of couse with a new item.
-I added a few upgrades to the soliders: I changed the upgrades at the Blacksmint, etc. for example: Forged Swords gives you a lot more damage, but the cost is a lot more...or Iron Planting gives +20% max health to your melee units. (costs more) I did it with every class.
-Each tree gives you 150 lumber (It was just 50 before)

I know I still have to upgrade the terrarian quality...I'm working with it but I don't have any idea but I will try it >< If anyone know how can I improve it please tell me

 

[light bolt30]

Please improve the description; colours, tables, screenshots, number of creep camps, storyline, etc. Here's a list of BB Codes to help you. It'd be better if you posted the changelogs in the description rather making a new post in the thread for it. Also change the map type to altered melee.

 

[Darth_Malak]

I don't even have to test the map. It's not Melee, just look at the map symbol.

The icon should look like this:

It would be Melee then.
This is altered melee

 

[Voltage_02]

only 148.7 KB map... ill try

 

[Orcnet]

Map Review

The "War at the Great Mining Area" - An "Altered Melee" map that has succumbed its way by adding miscellaneous doodles and desired Ideas to fit its game for everyone to use, this map was made by Zion.

Map Review

War at the Great Mining Area (no BETA and RELEASED versions)

Rating System

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	5/5	91-100	A

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	4/5	81-90%	B

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	3/5	75-80%	C

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	2/5	70-74%	D

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	1/5	50-69%	F

General:

Gameplay-[5/5]
Note: Were I pronounce your game challenging or a waste of time.

Playability-[5/5]
Note: This part tells me if the game is rather fun and can be played again and again.

Terrain-[5/5]
Note: Were I tell your game's environmental display is either great or terrible.

Managing-[5/5]
Note: This is were I explain the output or outcome quality of the game.

Bug/s
Note: No score, just to tell your map has bugs on it or simply bug-free.


About My Reputations:

My complements for the Maker/s of the map's game.

Were I explain your map needs to get fix or make an improvement of your work.

Overview

Gameplay

The Game was so hard! even adding team mates cannot stand such a force, if you only earn enough resources and more army you can only surpassed some creep camps, please decrease your outmatched difficulty to balance the game would you?

Playability

Repeating the game would only annoy gamers who would do a loop for this, and what the hell is with the "Bosses" in your game? its too hard man! and likewise with the unrealistic Naga Race camp in the north and south side of the map, it would be great if they are moving like an AI, please make some more changes.

Terrain

Your Terrain was Bad, like watching a really Bad Porn(no offense, its just awful!) okay back to the topic just to change the mood around here, again with the terrain, its so mixed and so random, please look at some of the melee maps made by Blizzard and Members here in the Hive. they made good and balanced maps, hope you can understand me loud and clear.

Managing

Your management for the map is inferior, even a beginner of all beginners can make an outstanding games that can out passed Legends if you ask me, please do some real work for others to appreciate including me.

Bug/s

No Bugs, just Need Work

Total Score

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	5/20	62%	F

Hope you can do better than before, Goodluck!
happy map-making!

 

[Zion]

Thanks for watching this map.Well I already knew that the map quality is bad I will try to improve it. I tried, and I could kill the Naga-s and their Mini-Boss,(not with footmans) and I tried to kill all of the others. Maybe the Bosses are too strong...and at the endgame with a powerful hero I could almost solo this water element boss =)...Well I decreased the monsters power.

 

[Vehster]

Official Basic Review of V3H -


Terrain 2/10 - Too plain...
Concept & Idea 3/10 - Not much changed.
Triggers -/10 - Altered Melee
Object Data 6/10 - You changed all the races I think and added bosses.
Overall Map Data 3/10 - Could use a different look and some more data.
Estimated effort spent into this 3/10 - Very very simple, don't give up however.
Playability & Improveable 2/10 - =(

Overall Mark - 19/60

Any questions about the review, just ask and I will answer.

Suggestions -
Not much to say.....
Try improving your terrain and balance the objects/units?

 

[Vengeancekael]

Hmm

*Completely plain terrain
*doodads which do not fit together:

Hidden

*Naga buildings next to an expansion?
*No creeps at starting points (so that they replace the town hall if the player isn't there)
*Not symmetric
*Still a work in progress -> May not be posted in the maps section