Unstable Mind V2.00 [RMX]

Moderator · May 11, 2009

18:56, 8th Dec 2009
TriggerHappy:

Review for Spell

Coding was fine as far as I could see.
This review was long overdue, sorry for
the wait.

Status

Approved

PsychoNerdial · May 11, 2009

Seems kinda unoriginal

But who am i to judge

EDIT: First comment, WEEEEEEEEEE =)

Rmx · May 11, 2009

Well u didn't download it YET !!!

Also u didn't edit ur Post ..!!!

PsychoNerdial · May 11, 2009

But i read the description

Rmx · May 11, 2009

So what u could Download it and see it for urself .... then do comments like this.

U could not judje a spell by it's Description... BTW i'm very very poor at describing spells.

So u can download it and view it .... it has very much documentation .. also

PsychoNerdial · May 11, 2009

Yeah but a description is supposed to describe the spell right??
Too lazy to download xD

Deuterium · May 11, 2009

PsychoNerdial said:
Yeah but a description is supposed to describe the spell right??
Too lazy to download xD

Not everyone is fluent in English here. Even I, who's very fluent with English, face trouble righting descriptions.

Anyways, RMX, it's like you read my mind... I think of an idea, and BAM you do it

HAHA!

Can't check it now, hopefully tomorrow!

PsychoNerdial · May 11, 2009

Well OK, i guess you're right...
Sorry for being kinda rude...

-Berz- · May 11, 2009

Nice idea, and the spell works smooth. But i would change the war stomp special effect to something else, and try to convert real to integer and integer to real in one line that will remove those ugly 150.0000

Anyway nice spell

Kingz · May 11, 2009

Nice spell though the effects are lacking and may be a little imba.
As far as i see no leaks and is MUI.
No known bugs currently.
Poor documentation and chaotic too(remove useless comments, do not spam the # character,clear up the things you do, and i suggest putting comments under the actions you explain).

Well this is a 3/5 spell, add better effects and remove the lightning, add periodical effects on the unit instead.

-Berz- · May 11, 2009

Floating Text - Create floating text that reads (String((Integer((Real((String((Damage taken))))))))) at MapHostile with Z offset 0.00, using font size 10.00, color (100.00%, 0.00%, 100.00%), and 0.00% transparency

This is the line that will remove those annoying .0000 ;D

Septimus · May 11, 2009

I have a quick view at this spells. It have the necessary documentation (Need to be polish a bit) and leakless.

Seems like you are using dummy unit. I suggest you to set the death type to does not decay to have the corpse remove right away.

Rmx · May 11, 2009

Septimus @
Well i'm not using any dummy units Septimus but thnx for the TIP

+ Rep septimus,

Berzerker @
I will do that +Rep for the help .. Berzerker

....

Kingz @
I will do that no problem thnx for the help also +Rep.....

Lakai · May 12, 2009

Cool spell, but there is only one thing that i dislike, is that if the target is near to the caster, the target will stomp 2 times in just 0.01 seconds and that looks a little bit powerful.

baassee · May 12, 2009

Kingz said:
Poor documentation and chaotic too(remove useless comments, do not spam the # character,clear up the things you do, and i suggest putting comments under the actions you explain).

Kingz you should by this time know that I'm the master of documentation here

Downloading ...

Great spell thought I would like to add some suggestions and bugreport?!

Just thought when I cast teh units hmm maybe what will happen if I go over trees?

WTF when I stood close to the unit it didnt even lift up in the air. Maybe that's what the spells are about but yeah ...

Also what will happen if the target flew over trees? Stuck I guess?

Few thoughts

Set LEVEL_UM = (Level of Unstable Mind for UM_Caster[UM_Times])

~~Shouldnt that line be arrayed together with the index? Cause I think many caster can have this in several levels thought you only store one and overwrite the others.~~

EDIT 2: Didnt saw that you never used it in the loop. My bad

Set UM_Group[UM] = (Units within 305.00 of US_Point[5] matching (((Owner of (Matching unit)) Not equal to (Owner of UM_Caster[UM])) and (((Matching unit) is alive) Equal to True)))

So you can damage your own allies's units ?! You know I dont need to say more ... ^^

Also make the AoE stored into a variable there for better implent of the spell for others

Just one thought

Why null all unit variables and reals/integers?

-------- We null everything !!!! --------

An integer can store up to ~2000000 and more thought you only need 1 for each cast. You don't need that many casts into a game don't ya?!

And reals can store even more so thought if you null integers, nulling reals are just blasting me

And also if I didn't knew the code as I do now it would have looked really weird with a loop that have 3 ways to shut itself OFF

else you have a great spell as always

regards

~baassee

Yearight · May 12, 2009

It is somehow chaotic but still very nice and smooth. I can see non need of explaining what has already been told. But again I am not a fan of spamming effects so judging by my point score you would get something like 3.50-3.75/5. However, many people seem to like it and I would not downrate a spell so you will get 4/5. All in all a fine spell.

Rmx · May 12, 2009

To Baasseee......

The Group will not damage my allies try it

.......

Also we null everything i just like to do that

...

And try it on a unit Behind a tree it will lift him above the tree and won't damage it.....
it's a mind SPELL

+rep For ur help....

To Yearight........
Thnx for the rating

Edit : Must spread rep first Baassee so sorry

..
Anyway i'l just give +Rep to Yearight ;P

Triax · May 12, 2009

Cast it with two mages at once on the same unit. x)

Make non-hero units explode if they die 'cause of that ability, that would give a nice effect. =D

Rmx · May 12, 2009

So the unit will Get REALLY F*** up and gets 600 damage that's all

baassee · May 12, 2009

Rmx said:
So the unit will Get REALLY F*** up and gets 600 damage that's all

Naaahh more funny swaying around in the air

PsychoNerdial · May 12, 2009

Decided to download anyway =) So will tell you what i think soon.

Well OK, you win

The spell was kinda nice. Nice triggering. The only thing that bugs me is that the
spell will be channeled a few seconds after finished, if the hero is not ordered to stop(i tried at maximum range).
All in all 4.5/5

Rmx · May 12, 2009

Thnx man i really appreciate it

PsychoNerdial · May 13, 2009

Well, i didn't want to seem like a cocky, rude guy... Felt kinda like that :S
From now on i won't judge based on screen and description

(Promise)

Deuterium · May 13, 2009

as usual... nicely done from RMX

BUT! ok when the target unit is close to the caster, and u cast the ability...
target unit stays in place and gets damaged twice, as to say, it doesnt raise into the air and bump, then once again... no that doesnt happen...

Rmx · May 13, 2009

Well i'm fixing it and i will post a new FIXED version soon were the speed is comed by the distance if 1000 then the speed is 15 then if 500 then the speed is 7.5 ....
So it will show u the Bump and lift off effect

baassee · May 13, 2009

Rmx said:
Well i'm fixing it and i will post a new FIXED version soon were the speed is comed by the distance if 1000 then the speed is 15 then if 500 then the speed is 7.5 ....
So it will show u the Bump and lift off effect

hopefully

Rmx · May 14, 2009

Upated the Spellpack ........... View the changelog ...............

Now ................................ it's BETTER !!!

-Berz- · May 14, 2009

Wow, looks better now, but still those explosions somehow don't fit really :S

Rmx · May 14, 2009

U can change them in UM_Sp3 ... u can make them anything u want

baassee · May 14, 2009

love it now, liked it before

will prob use this one, but will change maybe a thing or two ofc adding credits ^^

gj

Rmx · May 14, 2009

Thnxx Baassee BTW did u see ur name in the CREDITS list

...... i put it for no reason loooooooooooool ....... also Berzeker and massaaed and septimus and ext...

baassee · May 14, 2009

haha that was really weird!

well didnt deep scan the map totally, just looked what you changed on the triggers

Kingz · May 15, 2009

Looks better though i think effects could be better

Didn't you already made a simmilar spell(Fire Wheel)?
Also fix the documentation.

Rmx · May 15, 2009

Well it's not Simmilar at all ............ compare them

.....

I will fix the documentation thnx

Kingz · May 16, 2009

I meant the height changing and the lightning effects...

Rmx · May 16, 2009

Oh well it's a telekenetic ability i think they look the same

baassee · May 17, 2009

Kingz said:
I meant the height changing and the lightning effects...

That's kind of the point Kingz if you didn't get that?! ^^

Rmx · May 17, 2009

Thnx BASE

for defending me

P

Kingz · May 17, 2009

I didn't attack anybody just said that it reminded me of that spells

Rmx · May 17, 2009

Joking Kingz ,,,,,,,

......... i'm just playing with u

./

manstie · Dec 14, 2009

Deuterium said:
Not everyone is fluent in English here. Even I, who's very fluent with English, face trouble righting descriptions.

Anyways, RMX, it's like you read my mind... I think of an idea, and BAM you do it

HAHA!

Can't check it now, hopefully tomorrow!

LOL? You say your fluent in english yet you use "righting" instead of "writing". Roflmao.

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