Undead Outbreak 1.00

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Next Review: [2016-06-03]

Rufus Moderation Note What you need to do: Add a decent description. As it is now, it is not very appealing and is pretty messy to read due to the massive amounts of hidden tags. You can do this so much better, by reducing the number of hidden tags and use some tables or boxes for example. In some cases, just a floating text can be better, and it might be the case here, as your description doesn't have a lot of text. The description doesn't state the goal of the map either, such as "find the source of the sickness" or "survive for 50 minutes". It hsould be included, so that people will know what to work against. I think you will attract few players with a description like this. With a nicer looking description it might just become more attractive for people to download and try it out. The description of your other map looks better. Get inspired by that one! If you need information on how to create a proper description, check this out. Until a better description is provided, this maps status is set to Awaiting Update.

 

[Ardenian]

Credits for the custom preview picture are missing.

You don't need hidden tags for most points, since the texts are very short.

 

[neven1]

Well first of all you said that survivors are on the southeast.That is not true!They are on the south west!

Second of all when i died it said that i can either spectate or quit the game.How can i spectate when i can't even see my team?

 

[KristovSukhoi]

Well first of all you said that survivors are on the southeast.That is not true!They are on the south west!

Second of all when i died it said that i can either spectate or quit the game.How can i spectate when i can't even see my team?

Forgot to add survivors camp on the south east and on the south west it should be market area.

Since you died I just add on the triggers like make player 1 ally player 2 with ally and share vision. I think its a bug I fix it on next update.

 

[Rufus]

Next Review: [2016-06-03]

Rufus Moderation Note What you need to do: Add a decent description. As it is now, it is not very appealing and is pretty messy to read due to the massive amounts of hidden tags. You can do this so much better, by reducing the number of hidden tags and use some tables or boxes for example. In some cases, just a floating text can be better, and it might be the case here, as your description doesn't have a lot of text. The description doesn't state the goal of the map either, such as "find the source of the sickness" or "survive for 50 minutes". It hsould be included, so that people will know what to work against. I think you will attract few players with a description like this. With a nicer looking description it might just become more attractive for people to download and try it out. The description of your other map looks better. Get inspired by that one! If you need information on how to create a proper description, check this out. Until a better description is provided, this maps status is set to Awaiting Update.

 

[Paillan]

No changes were made in more than 3 months which means that no changes are inteded to be made. Acording too rules, this implies that your map will now be classified as substandard. If you wish to revert this decision you can PM a map reviewer once you have updated the map.

Set to Substandard.

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