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Translation Request 11

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Hey there once again!

I have been making my campaign for over half year now. I have already released alpha tests from it. Some of the testers have said to me that the english is bad so here I am: translation request 11. I have couple of texts and if you even can translate one text I would be greateful(to "better english"). I will give you credits at the campaign and also some rep in here. Thank you beforehand.

This time the theme is spells. Here are the texts:
(And please don't remove "|n" or other color codes. It will be a lot easier for me to add texts to the campaign.)

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Increases Phodom's strengh by 40% and size by 30% for 10 second. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 30 second. |nEffect based on: Level.

Flame Shield
An aura that gives Phodom a magical flame shield, which deals damage to enemy unit that are attacking you. Also gives a 10% chance that an attack will deal X damage to nearby enemy units. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 10 second. |nEffect based on: Level and strenght.|r

War Cry
Gives nearby friendly units a X% bonus to attack damage for 10 second. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 30 second. |nEffect based on: Level.


Fire Attack
Adds X bonus fire damage to an attack against enemies, but drains mana with each attack. Orb effect. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: None. |nEffect based on: Level.

Fire Explode
Casts a fire explode around Phodom, dealing damage to nearby enemy units and stunning them for 2 seconds. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 15 second. |nEffect based on: Level, intelligence and magic balls.|r

Fire Shield
Heals a targeted friendly unit's hit points and gives X extra armor for 10 seconds. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 15 second. |nEffect based on: Level, intelligence and magic balls.

Fire Smash
A powerful fire smash to enemy unit that stuns a targeted enemy unit for 3 second and deals damage. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 15 second. |nEffect based on: Level and strenght.

Meltdown
Casts a fire blast that does damage and reduces enemy unit's defense rate by X for 10 seconds. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 15 second. |nEffect based on: Level, intelligence and magic balls.

Fire Chaos
Casts incredible big fire explode around Phodom to nearby enemy units dealing damage and reducing their attack damage by 50% for 15 second. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 120 second. |nEffect based on: Level, intelligence and magic balls.

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Sword Dance
Fradz starts to attack X% faster, but takes 33% more damage from enemy attacks for 5 second. |nEffect based on: Level.

Bless Of Lightning
Restores X hit points and X mana. Also increases armor by X, agility, intelligence and strenght by X for 15 seconds of all friendly heroes in an area around your Fradz. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 15 second. |nEffect based on: Level.

Flash Strike
Fradz becomes incredibly fast and slices 5 times nearby enemies. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 20 second. |nEffect based on: Level and agility.

Thunder
Casts a thunder to enemy unit dealing damage and slowing its attack and movement speed by 25% for 10 second. |nEffect based on: Level, intelligence and magic balls.

Invisible Strike
Turns Fradz invisible and increases his movement speed for 20 second. When Fradz attacks a unit to break invisibility, he will deal bonus damage. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 1 second. |nEffect based on: Level.

Teleport Strike
Fradz becomes invulnerable and slices 12 times nearby enemies. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 180 second. |nEffect based on: Level and agility.

Lightning Orb
Summons powerful lightning orb to attack the Fradz's enemies for 10 seconds. The lightning orb is immortal and has 50 attack damage. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 180 second. |nEffect based on: Level.

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Summon Ice Element
Summons a magical Ice Element with X hit point and X mana for 60 seconds. Has the Mana Shield, Frost Touch Mana Drain and Ice Explosion abilities. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 60 second. |nEffect based on: Level.

Ice Bolt
Hurls an icey bolt that damages the target for X damage, and slows its move speed by 10% for 6 seconds. If the target is slowed from another Ice Bolt, this will do 1.5x damage. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 4 second. |nEffect based on: Level, intelligence and magic balls.

Frozen
Freezes targeted enemy unit so it cannot do anything for X second. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 60 second. |nEffect based on: Level.

Frozen Cannon
Bombards an area with X ice balls, stunning enemy units for 1 second and damaging nearby enemy units. Every ice ball will do 30 damage. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 20 second. |nEffect based on: Level.

Chain Heal
Calls fifth a wave of healing energy that bounces up to 5 times, healing X damage on the primary target. Each jump heals 25% greater damage. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 10 second. |nEffect based on: Level.

Frozen Paradise
Casts incredible big ice explode around Galeoth dealing X damage and freezing nearby enemy units for 10 second. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 180 second. |nEffect based on: Level, intelligence and magic balls.
 
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Increases Phodom's strength by 40% and size by 30% for 10 seconds. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 30 seconds. |nEffect based on: Level.


Instead of "Lasts: x second." use "seconds".


A powerful fire smash to an enemy unit that stuns a targeted enemy unit for 3 second and deals damage. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 15 second. |nEffect based on: Level and strength.
 
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Code:
Flame Shield
An aura that gives Phodom a magical flame shield, which deals damage to enemy units that are attacking you. Also gives a 10% chance that an attack will deal X damage to nearby enemy units. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 10 seconds. |nEffect based on: Level and strenght.|r

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War Cry
Gives nearby friendly units a X% bonus to attack damage for 10 seconds. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 30 seconds. |nEffect based on: Level.

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Fire Attack
Adds X bonus fire damage to an attack against enemies, but drains mana with each attack. Orb effect. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: None. |nEffect based on: Level.
(No changes to that one)

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Explosion of Fire
Causes an explosion of fire around Phodom, dealing damage to nearby enemy units and stunning them for 2 seconds. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 15 seconds. |nEffect based on: Level, intelligence and magic balls.|r
(balls to orbs maybe?)

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Fire Shield
Heals a targeted friendly unit's hit points and gives X extra armor for 10 seconds. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 15 seconds. |nEffect based on: Level, intelligence and magic balls.

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Fire Smash
A powerful fire to smash an enemy unit that stuns a targeted enemy unit for 3 seconds and deals damage. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 15 seconds. |nEffect based on: Level and strength.

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Meltdown
Creates a fire blast that deals damage and reduces enemy unit's defense rate by X for 10 seconds. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 15 seconds. |nEffect based on: Level, intelligence and magic balls.

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Fire Chaos
Casts incredibly big explosion of fire around Phodom. Dealing damage and reducing attack damage to nearby enemy units  by 50% for 15 seconds. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 120 seconds. |nEffect based on: Level, intelligence and magic balls.

Well thats the fire ones anyway.
 
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If I didn't have to go to work right now I would do this for you, so if it's still not done by the time I get home I will. Your english isn't that bad... it is easily understandable, for the most part a few words just need to be switched around. I'm surprised people complained about it
 
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Huurka said:
Increases Phodom's strength by 40% and size by 30% for 10 seconds. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 30 seconds. |nEffect based on: Level.


Instead of "Lasts: x second." use "seconds".


A powerful fire smash to an enemy unit that stuns a targeted enemy unit for 3 second and deals damage. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 15 second. |nEffect based on: Level and strength.
Hmmm.... ok!

Thanks, madcd for your effort. However, I will wait for Discipline if he founds some grammar errors from your texts. +rep
Discipline said:
If I didn't have to go to work right now I would do this for you, so if it's still not done by the time I get home I will. Your english isn't that bad... it is easily understandable, for the most part a few words just need to be switched around. I'm surprised people complained about it
Well, people are very accurate! :p

Ok, I wait for your translations. Thanks!
 
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Avatar
Phodom's strength is increased by 40% for 10 seconds, enlarging him by 30%. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 30 seconds. |nEffect increases with level.

Aura of Fire
An aura that gives Phodom a magical flame shield, dealing damage to enemy attackers. Also gives a 10% chance that an attack will deal X damage to nearby enemy units. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 10 seconds. |nEffect increases with level and strength.

War Cry
Gives nearby friendly units a X% bonus to attack damage for 10 seconds. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 30 seconds. |nEffect increases with level.

Fire Attack
Adds X bonus fire damage to an attack against enemies, draining mana with each attack. Orb effect. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: None. |n|c00FEBA0EPassive Ability. |nEffect increases with level.

Flame Explosion
An erruption of flame bursts around Phodom, dealing damage to nearby enemy units and stunning them for 2 seconds. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 15 seconds. |nEffect increased by level, intelligence and magic balls.|r

Shield of Fire
Heals a targeted friendly unit's hit points and gives X extra armor for 10 seconds. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 15 seconds. |nEffect increased by level, intelligence and magic balls.

Impact Flare
A powerful flame strikes a targeted enemy unit and stuns it for 3 seconds, dealing damage. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 15 seconds. |nEffect increased by level and strength.

Meltdown
Fires out a blast of flame, dealing damage and reducing enemy unit's defense rate by X for 10 seconds. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 15 seconds. |nEffect increased by level, intelligence and magic balls.

Chaotic Rift
A large explosion encapsulates Phodom, which deals damage to nearby enemy units and reduces their attack damage by 50% for 15 seconds. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 120 seconds. |nEffect increased by level, intelligence and magic balls.

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Sword Dance
Fradz' attack speed increases by X%, but takes 33% more damage from enemy attacks for 5 seconds. |nEffect increases with level.

Lightning's Grace
Restores X hit points and X mana. Also increases armor by X, agility, intelligence and strenght by X for 15 seconds of all friendly heroes in an area around Fradz. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 15 seconds. |nEffect increases with level.

Flash Strike
Fradz becomes incredibly fast and slices nearby enemies 5 times. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 20 seconds. |nEffect increases with Level and agility.

Thunder
Fires a bolt of lightening at a targeted enemy unit, dealing damage and slowing both its attack and movement speed by 25% for 10 seconds. |nEffect increased by level, intelligence and magic balls.

Invisible Strike
Turns Fradz invisible and increases his movement speed for 20 seconds. When Fradz attacks a unit bonus damage is dealt and invisibility is broken. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 1 seconds. |nEffect increases with level.

Teleport Strike
Fradz becomes invulnerable and slices at nearby enemies 12 times. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 180 seconds. |nEffect increases with level and agility.

Lightning Orb
Summons powerful lightning orb to attack the Fradz's enemies for 10 seconds. The lightning orb is immortal and has 50 attack damage. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 180 seconds. |nEffect increases with level.

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Summon Ice Elemental
Summons a magical Ice Elemental with X hit point and X mana for 60 seconds. Has the Mana Shield, Frost Touch Mana Drain and Ice Explosion abilities. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 60 seconds. |nEffect increases with level.

Ice Bolt
Hurls an icey bolt that damages the target for X damage, and slows its movement speed by 10% for 6 seconds. If the target is hit by a second ice bolt while still under effect it will do 1.5x damage. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 4 seconds. |nEffect increased by level, intelligence and magic balls.

Freeze
Freezes a targeted enemy unit, completely disabling it for X seconds. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 60 seconds. |nEffect increases with level.

Frost Cannon
Bombards an area with X ice balls, damaging enemy units and stunning them for 1 second. Each ice ball does 30 damage. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 20 seconds. |nEffect increased with level.

Chain Heal
Calls forth a wave of healing energy that bounces up to 5 times, healing X damage on the primary target. Each jump heals 25% greater damage. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 10 seconds. |nEffect increases with level.

Frozen Paradise
An ice explosion errupts around Galeoth dealing X damage and freezing nearby enemy units for 10 seconds. |n|c00FEBA0ECooldown: 180 seconds. |nEffect increased by level, intelligence and magic balls.

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Well that should have it covered. Most of it was a pretty good effort Aeroblyctos, considering english isn't your primary language. I know people who only speak english that wouldn't have done any better. :grin: There might be an odd typo or two left in it (it's 1am here... I didn't get home until late) but it should keep the critics off your back.

No map credit is necessary mate, it's your map not mine. Good luck with it!
 
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