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The Human Sin : Trailer

Submitted by Septimus
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Status


Forum - http://septimus.invisionplus.net
Map Status - Protected
Current Version - 1.03
Duration - 13 minutes



Description


Trailer of my upcoming project.



Screenshot
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Credit
Section Contributer

Model
  • General Frank
  • Buster

Terrainer
  • forzamoto
  • Revan(Rom)

Loading Screen & Images
  • Renendaru
  • the_ideal
  • Varine

Voice Actor
  • Battlemapsta
  • zombie2279
  • CMarket
  • Misha

Language, Spelling & Grammar
  • CMarket
  • Dr Super Good
  • Battlemapsta



Changelog
Version Status Update Information

1.00
  • Beta release.

1.01
  • Update detail no longer available.

1.02
  • Update detail no longer available.

1.03
  • Change description.



Septimus Map Resources


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[THREAD="106408"]Are You A Perfect Idiot ? (3)[/THREAD]
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[THREAD="117009"]Are You A Perfect Idiot ? (5)[/THREAD]
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[THREAD="85518"]Are You Intelligent ? (Time)[/THREAD]
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[THREAD="118665"]Memory Forever[/THREAD]
[THREAD="122211"]Hand of Justice[/THREAD]
[THREAD="128667"]The Confrontation[/THREAD]
[THREAD="168596"]Unknown Cinematic[/THREAD]



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The Human Sin : Trailer (Map)

  1. ModelTester

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    I liked the trailer, but the voices were kinda weird to me :\
     
  2. Aeroblyctos

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    Have you ever thought that you could do the campaign without voice acting? Just use some good music instead of voice acting. This is a good solution if you have a huge campaign or you don't find good voice actors. And you have both problems.
     
  3. Yearight

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    Voice of Doom Guard is good so is Hades, the camera went through a doodad, but a good cinematic.
     
  4. Epimeliad

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    there a part where the text said "we should see, we should see" where you actually meant "we shall see"
    camera moving too fast and often and many scenes could be shorten with faster sound.
    terrain seem too systermatic which kill the natural look
    other negative points are raised above ><
    but overall cool cinematic
     
  5. Septimus

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    The camera movement is either slow or fast based on the current situation. It been done at purpose to give a better effect.
     
  6. Callahan

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    Story seems promising.
     
  7. xxdingo93xx

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    One of the best cinematics I ever watched :D I can see much work went into this. 5/5
     
  8. Hiude

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    Indeed a grand work. There are just some things, minor things, that quirk me. 4.99/5. :ugly:
     
  9. Joe1260

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    OMFG !!!
    This would be much more better, if there would be no sounds.
    Because every sound sucked in this cinematic, sorry but this is true :(
    Narrator sucked mostly !!!
    But the terrain, and triggers were nice :) 4/5
     
  10. Aeroblyctos

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    And that's why I prefer cinematics to be without voice acting, but good music. :p
     
  11. Septimus

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    Having good music are kinda useless if people have to constantly read those text, they would be bored out of it. I add sound to give it a much fresh view, of course. The voice of narrator and baxter was created by using speakonia, I still finding a voice actor to replace it.
     
  12. Joe-black-5

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    22 Mb 0_0"
     
  13. Septimus

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    I currently still looking for voice actor for narrator character. Anybody who're interested might free to send me a pm of their voice sample.
     
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    The first beautiful shot at terrain,
    brought my mind thinking this is going to be good, than The narrator started talking.
    Sounds like you used a damn robot, My god. its horrible! Especially when it says There, those 3 times and it sounds the same each time.
    Kerberos sounds like a Asian robot or something, =/
    Which also reminds me, Leave the camera alone every now and than, I'm trying to focus on the guy talking, and your swinging the camera around like a mad man.

    Also,
    When he turns the nice forest into a dead land, you could at least have some dead trees up.
    I felt your terrain start to lack right there out of what I had seen so far. =/

    I Stopped watching after that, The narrator's voice made me want to kill myself. =/
     
  15. Septimus

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    It is not easy to find a good voice actor. What do you expect ? If you can make a better voice for it, I would be grateful to have it. If you read my post, you would notice I were still finding a voice actor for narrator.

    As for the Kerberos, I receive lot's of positive feedback from it. If you think it was bad, you should have told zombie2279 about it.

    Camera should be moving to give it a nice and prospective look. What else do you expect ? Who the hell would be interested to see a cinematic where the camera just stay at the same position all the time ?
     
  16. Aeroblyctos

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    Hah! :D

    +rep

    Yes, sometimes the camera should be in same spot. Especially when there's a cinematic where two men talk or something.
     
  17. Septimus

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    For me, swinging camera is better than inmovable camera.
     
  18. Aeroblyctos

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    Yes, that is very true and you are right. It is always better to move camera, than let it be in one spot. However, moving cameras is not always needed. Such as events where is a conversation. If a guy says like 4 second long speech, you can simply let the camera be in one spot. Give him few animations and the cinematic is still great, even if you don't move the camera for short of time.

    I hope I gave you some ideas.
     
  19. Septimus

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    I try to make the camera sway slowly when such a situation occur, but it seems to be inaccurate as it sometimes sway fast and sometimes slow just like the Anitarf statement about wait function at gui.

    Wait function at Gui are partically useless, that is why jass is require if precise timing is needed.. :=/
     
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    More like a Russian robot, kthxbai.