The Black Felbeasts - Trailer

[Moderator]

Next Review: [2016-05-24]
Rufus: As Aether said before me, the description needs to be improved before the map can be approved.

Status set to awaiting update.

 

[Aether]

You should add more information about your map, and put some life on it, like adding some colors, sizes, and so on. I suggest, you should check this. And adding some screenshots would make it more appealing.

Created by Unknown

Also, fix that.

 

[Rufus]

Next Review: [2016-05-24]
As Aether said before me, the description needs to be improved before the map can be approved.

Status set to awaiting update.

 

[Chaosy]

I watched the cinematic.

The terrain is very poor, and I mean really poor, it needs to be improved a whole lot.

There are also minor mistakes:

• The life drain's effect is not removed, you can still see green effects on the caster and the target.
• The "FOR KHAZ MODAN!" sound while using avatar should be removed
• When the units charage they are ordered to move to the same region which means they run in a weird direction when they should just run forward.
• The life drain spell does not play the animation for the caster, he just stands there.
• When the ambushing spiders appear you kill them all at the same time, this is highly unrealistic. Make them die at different times.
• I also suggest that you fade out and in when switching cameras.
• Using the same models over and over is boring use different models and textures for more variation.

The cinematic is also slightly confusing since all the fel hounds die.. and then one second later there are a million new ones at the same location.

Also.. why steal all the lines from SC2?

Anyway, music was pretty good.

 

[deepstrasz]

2/5.

They're fighting amongst themselves?
The Doom Guard was not even swinging the sword where he should. He was swinging it under the Voidwalker.

Anyways, makes little sense, it's mostly eye candy.

 

[Rufus]

Moved to substandard due to lack of development, discussion and interest from the author.

Contact me if an update is uploaded, and it will be moved back to the moderation queue.