Description:
The on-hive as well as in-game description are fair. They both contain several mistakes, grammatical as well as spelling mistakes. Fixing these mistakes should be a priority.
The on-hive description can be made better by addition of the story as well as the a brief intro of the quest. Adding a category to the map should also be considered.
The on-screen crediting is good but can use grammar correction.
The in-game quest tells to build a necropolis but there isn't any option for building a necropolis, at least as far as I could see there was none. Nor were there any in-game instructions explaining this thing.
In-game info about the various bases presented inside the game was also absent.
This link can help you in improving the description.
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...portance-of-a-description-127031/#post1117301
Abilities:
Only the standard Blizzard abilities were given to the Lich king with a little tinkering.
Frost Bolt & finger of death had same hotkeys.
Day of the living dead did not have any hotkey & its description was meant for the death knight instead of Lich King.
Crediting:
Proper crediting has been done. Good here.
Fun Factor:
Fun factor was low considering the fact that I was lost as to what has to be done in the map & lack of development. The hero was already at level 10 & much of the undead tech tree had been disabled which made my base completely useless.
Bug:
After a while the map ended giving an error.
Rating: 1/5 & vote for disapproval