Overlooking Kingdom

[Oziris]

Hear is my new terrain i spent much time on this.It's called Overlooking Kingdom...

 

[FamousPker49]

I very much like the idea, but the mountains in the background seem too small, and the tiles change too fast on them. And you cropped! Yay! You should add a fog to the terrain, it'll improve the atmosphere.

 

[~Void~]

The second one looks like Oblivion. Just for that, +rep.

 

[Gilles]

Not bad. Your still improving quickly.

The overlooking shot is cool, but I find the doodads used for the city do not match. In the second one, it looks like a bunch of archers. You didn't really make a building at all.

 

[Oziris]

Well the mountains are at the max.Yea i know the the bridge dosent match and i will terrain in the archers!

 

[Belgarath]

Looks reaaally nice, add in a fog and a bit of lighting, fill in the empty spots and it'll be even more awesome. +rep

 

[Gilles]

Ooo, just noticed the background mountains. I would take a page out of Voids book. Put those mountains waaayy back and make the fog cover them so you see no detail. They will look larger, and will improve your terrain.

 

[~Void~]

I just noticed the little tram thingy on the mountains.

 

[seruk]

Loving the idea but it looks a tad random. You really need to learn to mix doodads correctly. Oh, and grass doesn't grow underwater.

 

[TheSandWraith]

Looks good, but theres something I don't like about it, but I can't quite name it. But it does look like it was inspired by Oblivions Imperial city.

 

[Nudl9]

I think the first one is a bit confusing because i cant really see much except that annoying white terrain fog and theres to much special doodads catching attention from each other.

 

[Deathcom3s]

the first one is too cluttered.

If the second is supposed to look like the Imperial city, it's not a very good representation of it.

 

[<Offspring>]

The second one looks like the Imperial City from Oblivion

 

[HappyTauren]

The second one looks like Oblivion. Just for that, +rep.

rly xD yeah, its good

 

[ghenjis]

The second screen does somehow remind me of Oblivion. Anyway, I think you should use a light environmental fog instead of the ground fog.

 

[Troubadour]

The first one kind of looks like 2 terrains in one, I would get a closer camera angle, add a fog and maybe remove some of the doodads? The second one is much better.

 

[Craka_J]

First terrain is actually not that bad. I mean, it has its flaws, but I don't feel like pointing them out right this moment. The first terrain reminds me of an old cartoon I used to watch... don't remember its title though.

~Craka_J

 

[gavdaman88]

The angle used in the first one is real nice, but bringing the fog forward will help it greatly as said before. And despite the arches that others don't like, I think they work as a 'building sculpture' hybrid sort of tunnel that may exist in a city entrance.