[Cinematic] My Cinematic

[Mechmap]

My first cinematicand first part of these serie that i am going to continue on, It's mainly about an old evil wizard and its supposed to be funny but that is up to you.

https://www.hiveworkshop.com/resources_new/maps/5468/

 

[Parrothead]

Provide more info... Nobody just wants to see a random cinimatic about an evil wizard, you got to lure us .

 

[PurgeandFire]

Quite good for a first. Way better than my first. Gj.

 

[Mechmap]

Thx purgeandfire and parrothead, i started this thread because nobody would comment in the maps-sektion

 

[Sephiroth_VII]

Pretty good job on the cinematic.

 

[Em!]

Quite a grand fairy tale you got there and nicely made although the text went by to fast in some scenes and the water element scene was rather pointless and not funny at all but i see potential, would be nicer if you explained more details and lengthen the cinematic map, it was too short in my opinion. It was funny though especially the part about why furion was chasing the wizard but i´d recommend you´d use a different character for the druid.

 

[Bob27]

I am downloading the map now, and will post my comments once I have watched it.

 

[Mechmap]

Cannibal_Ninja thx for your comment but i won't change the model of Furion cause he is an important part of this serie, if you watched the begging of my cinematic you should see that i setted a "?" after furions name after he said something, now what do you think that means?

 

[Em!]

Oh darnit, did i say model, meant change the name...

 

[Mechmap]

Well, i will keep it

 

[Bob27]

Yea well like Purge said, this is very good for a first cinematic. The cameras looked decent, the terrain could of been better but good for a first go

 

[Mechmap]

Thx for the comments everybody!! i will post the part 2 when it is ready

 

[gavdaman88]

Just watched it then... and i have to say...



Awesome job! For a first that's pretty unbelievable seeming mine don't usually do anywhere near that good. The farting troll and the 'he will pay...' bit were great... but yer a shame about the water elemental scene. I was expecting a what is your quest scene fromt he Holy Grail

 

[Mechmap]

Yeah i kinda messed it up with the elemental scene but i will at least make part 2 of this thing.