Lost City

[Acvong]

Terrain i made of an ancient city

 

[Just_Spectating]

1. Too much glow on the left side
2. Background mountains do not seem far enough
3. Your rock texture is stretched too much and looks like crap
4. youve got trees popping out of rocks
5. small trees, Huge shrubs
6. water fall seems like a different color than the water
7. I dont know what those rays of light are doing there. they dont seem to fit as they are only coming from one section.


Overall, i see potential in this.

 

[Bob27]

Yes the trees are way to small compared to the rest of the picture, especially compared to the fences on the left side of the terrain. Also the fences look really strange, how you have tilted them, and they are probably a bit to big. It just doesn't look right to me.

Also a better sky would help a lot with the atmosphere of the terrain. At the moment its really just a dark blue sky with a couple of random clouds. Apart from those things though this is a good terrain though.

 

[Acvong]

Ok edited some stuff but how do i stop the rocks from being too stretched? stack them one by one? or is there an easier way...well thx for comments

 

[bounty hunter2]

The rock texture does look bad. The trees seem to be growing from the rocks. The grass was spammed to much, all the trees are of the same size. Why is the right size narrowed? The building. I like the bridge thou.

 

[Acvong]

Ok i fixed the trees but shud i stack rock after rock to make the texture unstretched or is there an easier way?The right building on the hill is tilted a little bit because i didnt like how it looked straight.

 

[Celaquil]

I didnt think I were ever going to say this, but those rocks look a bit too streched >.>

 

[Wraithwynd]

Snog/fog too dense for the mountains - Try setting the end z farther to get some terrain color back into your background hills.

Add variety of tree type and tree sizes. Think seedlings around the base of those trees - similar or same variety but much smaller.

Use something like rock chunks (if for a game convert to ramps) to break up the monotony of your rocks.

Those huge rocks you are using work better if you set them inside of the hillside and lower them - yes I know, most of it will be hidden by the terrain (hill slope) you go back in with smaller rocks to fill in. This way you will be able to disguise the hideous over sized texture of your rock models.

 

[Just_Spectating]

looks better, but either the grass or the trees arent the right size.

 

[Acvong]

Fixed rocks but does it look better than before?

 

[Just_Spectating]

Mmuchhh better.

but still, If you tryed to put a unit in there that would work with the shrubs and trees it wouldnt work.