League Of Legends v7

[Moderator]

17:28, 17th Oct 2014
Orcnet: Needs more work, see my comment

 

[userid907]

i not knows how to post a screenshot sry

 

[IcemanBo]

i not knows how to post a screenshot sry

Here you are: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...w-add-screenshot-your-map-description-241054/

You also should look at this: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/miscellaneous-tutorials-456/map-description-templates-171659/

 

[JCarrill0]

Is this the original author? userid907?

 

[Shadow Fury]

Guys I can clearly see this is a humble copy of DotA. I mean, 3 lanes, the same shallow water in DotA, same position of creeps, Baron Nashor instead of Roshan, exactly the same position of towers etc...
You are just trying to remake DotA in your own style and it didn't even turn good. No new items, you just got the old ones and gave them to shops with difference only in gold cost and stock maximum. Some abilties are active and have passive icons like Nunu's "Frost Stone" and vice-versa for Annies' "increase additional defense" which is passive and has an active icon. Some abilties have tooltip missing as description to learn!!
Those things are enough to say that I vote for rejection. Sorry, but clear copies of DotA are not accepted by me

 

[userid907]

Guys I can clearly see this is a humble copy of DotA. I mean, 3 lanes, the same shallow water in DotA, same position of creeps, Baron Nashor instead of Roshan, exactly the same position of towers etc...
You are just trying to remake DotA in your own style and it didn't even turn good. No new items, you just got the old ones and gave them to shops with difference only in gold cost and stock maximum. Some abilties are active and have passive icons like Nunu's "Frost Stone" and vice-versa for Annies' "increase additional defense" which is passive and has an active icon. Some abilties have tooltip missing as description to learn!!
Those things are enough to say that I vote for rejection. Sorry, but clear copies of DotA are not accepted by me
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Im not copy DoTa , im copying League of legendshttp://na.leagueoflegends.com/
if you mad i can change the maps

 

[userid907]

Is this the original author? userid907?
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yeah its me....

 

[Shadow Fury]

Im not copy DoTa , im copying League of legendshttp://na.leagueoflegends.com/
if you mad i can change the maps

It might be a copy of League of Legends but still reminds me a lot of DotA. I'm not mad about that but you should make something to let this map seem different from all others.

 

[Vinz]

^Just because Warcraft reminds people of Dungeons and Dragons doesn't mean they are identical, nor that Warcraft has to be gutted for not being different from all others.

I suggest you be a bit more constructive to new members. Being harsh does not help. I hope you understand that these new members are core of the Hive. If you help a noob become a pro, you will do a great contribution to the community.

E: @OP, I played Lissandra, I find it weird that she uses the Lich model. Since there are no rips in this site, you will have to find some in chaosrealm or other sites. Also if you base the map on LoL, the ability casting types have to be identical. If it is a skillshot; linear or circular, though the targeting image is only circular, the skill function has to be the same.

I recommend this tutorial for GUI.

 

[Shadow Fury]

^Just because Warcraft reminds people of Dungeons and Dragons doesn't mean they are identical, nor that Warcraft has to be gutted for not being different from all others.

I suggest you be a bit more constructive to new members. Being harsh does not help. I hope you understand that these new members are core of the Hive. If you help a noob become a pro, you will do a great contribution to the community.

E: @OP, I played Lissandra, I find it weird that she uses the Lich model. Since there are no rips in this site, you will have to find some in chaosrealm or other sites. Also if you base the map on LoL, the ability casting types have to be identical. If it is a skillshot; linear or circular, though the targeting image is only circular, the skill function has to be the same.

I recommend this tutorial for GUI.

I didn't mean to be harsh. And if Warcraft itself reminds people of another game, this is one thing. But when a map reminds people of another one, that's another thing. Every map should be original and try as less as possible to copy other maps. That's what I want the creator to understand, I don't mean to discourage him at all.

 

[JCarrill0]

^Just because Warcraft reminds people of Dungeons and Dragons doesn't mean they are identical, nor that Warcraft has to be gutted for not being different from all others.

I suggest you be a bit more constructive to new members. Being harsh does not help. I hope you understand that these new members are core of the Hive. If you help a noob become a pro, you will do a great contribution to the community.

E: @OP, I played Lissandra, I find it weird that she uses the Lich model. Since there are no rips in this site, you will have to find some in chaosrealm or other sites. Also if you base the map on LoL, the ability casting types have to be identical. If it is a skillshot; linear or circular, though the targeting image is only circular, the skill function has to be the same.

I recommend this tutorial for GUI.

Everything I read showed it was constructive criticism, which was perfectly fine in which manner he typed it. I see nothing wrong or harsh in his words. Perhaps consider this is also a map critic/Map Reveiwer suggesting options that might help improve his map as well.

 

[Vinz]

I might have overthought his words and what it implied. However, would still like to point out that he is trying to emulate LoL, whereas LoL considers itself as an upgrade of DotA and that is why the maps are similar. This map is closer to DotA than LoL, but I feel it's rushed.

 

[JCarrill0]

Testing the map myself, it reminds me a lot of LoL comparing it to the newest Dota map I just played.
Game mechanics wise its more to Dota, Map wise it looks more like LoL. I'm sure this will not be the final version. I hope to see more of this map in the future.

 

[Idaero Ace]

Havent test it.
The map reminds me with my first map

@ShadowFury
Yeah, I hate when someone say "Let's play DoTa" instead of say "Let's play Warcraft"

@userid907
You must improve your description. For some people, description is the first thing to see, not the map. They will say "The description is suck" and they will think "I believe the map is not good". No offense, bro. Try to check out some of Approved Map, and learn the description. And also you should learn BB Code

 

[userid907]

on going v2c
adding a bot!!!! (special)

 

[userid907]

Ooohh... sry forgot to change map name......

 

[perrosuper2]

Of all the maps that I created I learned a lesson. Never copy the same Design from another Map. In this Case, Dota.

If you create an Design Original 100% of your ideas, the map can be wonderful

 

[Vinz]

LoL =/= DotA but then again LoL is an 'upgrade' of DotA.

 

[jxtranghero]

You shold update this posted map instead of posting new same map ;-)

 

[JCarrill0]

This is updated...

 

[TheWhiteWolf]

No offense meant userid907, but I'm tired of the mass of bad dota copies.

 

[Alucard 1944]

Guys... It's not a copy of Dota! It is a League of Legends copy! There is a map in League of Legends, which is looking like a map in Dota. I saw some gameplays of Dota. I'll try this map later

 

[Shadow Fury]

Guys... It's not a copy of Dota! It is a League of Legends copy! There is a map in League of Legends, which is looking like a map in Dota. I saw some gameplays of Dota. I'll try this map later

Still it's a copy and this is the problem. The creator has not been original.

 

[Alucard 1944]

Updatet Terrain. Have a look at it

 

[Alucard 1944]

Still it's a copy and this is the problem. The creator has not been original.

Which Dota do you mean now? The Warcraft Dota? Or the other one?

 

[Shadow Fury]

Which Dota do you mean now? The Warcraft Dota? Or the other one?

The DotA of Warcraft. But in my previous comment, I meant that this map is anyway a copy of another one.
And please, avoid double posting, it's against the rules.

 

[Vinz]

Please use the

button.

 

[Gismo359]

The map exceeds the 8MB limit and thus cannot be hosted without a customized game.dll.
From the screenshot it looks really flat. I wouldn't suggest using blizzard cliffs.
Instead, have a look at Blood Raven's terraining tutorial , personally I found it really helpfull.
Also improve your description.

This is map where the champion fighting for demacian

Explain the map. Not all have played League of Legends, let alone heard of Demacia.
Also the grammer needs improving, in order for it to be understandable.
In the credits you should say the name of the resource creator, not just the name of the model.
You should also provide some gameplay screenshots.

 

[andreariona]

Actually, ripped models other than from Blizzard Entertainment aren't allowed on THW. As I noticed beside creeps, some hero like Master Yi, Annie, Rengar, Shen, etc using model from actual League of Legend itself.

As for an AoS, you need to reduce the size to below 8 mb as it is meant to be multiplayer.

Edit:
Also, enemy Town Hall still forever invulnerable even after all of the 9 towers destroyed.

 

[userid907]

ouhh how to reduce map size?
i dunno that

 

[Orcnet]

All of the heroes lacks huge amount of information regarding their statistics to be used on the game, also what really bugs me is why all of the players starts spawning on the Team 2's fountain region? I end up getting killed on such an early game for no reason giving Team 2 quick points.

Same goes with the heroes' spells, all of them lacks information and how to use, especially important skills for the hero.

The terrain is lacking a lot, although League of Legends(the original) lacks design yet was given a huge portion of detail to every degree of the map made such as the ground, trees and the huge space on the base is not so bad, however in warcraft 3's design output, giving it a similar feel is quite different, hence the look of our game's 3d and monotone look of all doodads must be given a strong polish.

And lastly, its lacking quest menu to explain more funded changes for the map such as updates, bugs, or contacts for the game's output. Overall the map needs some change.

 

[tanurog2]

i hope u can tell me how to export thier model...

 

[Idaero Ace]

So its been 3 years yet I still havent test this map -___-

 

[userid907]

*Laughed so hard