Lavalanche! 2.5d

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09:52, 3rd Feb 2011
-Kobas-:
Map Status: Rejected
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[WarManta]

A bit unfair don't you think?

Nobody has no idea where they're going to get hit as well it is a very very simple map.... I don't even know if it should be counted as completed since it lasts a few minutes, maybe you should of put this in the map development section like everyone tells me.

Though this idea/map has potential to become longer and better and a bit more fun.

 

[light bolt30]

You could improve the description; add screenshots, tell us more about the gameplay, etc. 23.85kb map? Pretty small..

 

[Evilwolf]

What do you expect? It's a minigame lol.

 

[light bolt30]

Question is, does it have the quality to be approved on the Hive.

 

[WarManta]

I suggest adding a restart option and something new.... I have a example shown below for you to download and see if you like the edit I made, I don't take any credit at all because that would be rude so of course it is still your map just with some modifications.

Oh, also if you don't make a seven paragraph description with colors and detail and screen shots or video's and explaining everything as well giving credits to anyone helped or tested, this won't be approved and I know its unfair to work so hard just on a description but this is what people have told me and do you see me having any approved maps? ( It is because I didn't listen and decided not to work so hard but I did somewhat though never mind this. ) Only trying to help you since what I did failed and I don't want anyone doing the same thing over because it just upsets everyone and nobody needs trolls now.

If you need some screen shots just ask me and I could provide them, not sure if I could with multiple people but I could single player since I can survive until the volcano thingy.

 

[Evilwolf]

I added some extra feature, enjoy.
Re: Im not a hardcore mapmaker, i like mapmaking because its fun.

 

[WarManta]

We posted at the same time.....


If you don't need any more help just tell me, also if you do want my help then tell me as well .

 

[Evilwolf]

It's ok, i don't need your help.
Thanks anyways.

 

[WarManta]

Did you like the edit at all?
Ok, well goodluck.

 

[Mumbis]

Review

Ok, I've tried the map for about.. half an hour, a little more, tested all the different pandas and below is my review:

Well, it was fun for about 5 minutes but well, I played alone tho, I think it'll be more fun if it's full house ^^
So, as a mini game I'll give it 3/5 in fun factor.

Hrm, I noticed some errors on all the heroes!

Earth

Well this is not a real error kinda, I'm just annoyed by it...
You see that the Model effect is kinda up around his head on the Anti-Magic Shield, you should attach it to the "Chest" instead, or origin if that doesn't solve it!

Also I thought like, wtf? I can use Anti-Magic Shield all the time, i'm invurnerable! But then I noticed it is destroyed if you take to much magic damage... So well, it's not as OP as I thought lol ^^

Warrior

Hrm, I noticed that the speedy panda here had some messed up Hotkeys on his spells; For example the "Teleport" spells hotkey does not work.
It says it is "T" but it is "B".
And that brins us to the next spell, Speed Burst, which is supposed to have the "B" hotkey, but it does not have any hotkey!

This might not be a real huge error, but it's an annoying one as hell!

Fire

Hrm, I've thought about this hero a little, his wind walk isn't very good, but sure it protects him against other fire heroes for a little while. Also I believe it's kind of Overpowered with his damage spells, decrease the damage they do, since you can almost kill off another hero with 2 spells... Though, the "Earth" panda can protect himself against this kinda attack, but the "Speed" panda is very screwed if the Fire one decides to kill him off, his divine shield does not last for very long :S

(tho, Hotkeys worked on this hero! Yay!)

So, on heroes i'll give you 2/5, but i'll raise it to 4/5 if you fix all the errors/annoying things i've found

I found some leaks, not major ones or anything but still, leaks.
For example, you do not use "Temp_Location" variables!

Also, the Volcanos does NOT show!
2/5 on triggers
Fix above and i'll raise it to 5/5!

(By the way, what's up with the pigs?)

Well, the terrain ain't the most beutiful, but it's because you need to move around alot so it's not bad for being a mini-game ^^

Terrain Overview

So the terrain will not be rated by me because it's a mini-game, which does not have very detailed terrain at most times

I'll give it totaly 3/5 for now, if you'll fix all above things i'll raise my rating to 5/5. Rating is based on this map being a mini-game.

Edit: Also I will approve when above things has been fixed.

Yours, Mumbis.

 

[kidsoulex]

If you dunno what to add to description you could:
-Tell us the spells of each panda and their stats(like hp since this a map which hp matters)
-Add screenshots(you need a bb code called img)
-For updates add a changelog(if you didnt updated then ignore this point)
-Credits(if you used someone else models or someone helped you)
I noticed some things need fix like mumbis posted so i wait until update, have a good day

 

[Evilwolf]

Re: Sorry I haven't made a map in a while so im not that good with triggers.
Fire is suppose to kill other heroes by the way.
The pigs shows where the lavalanches will land.

 

[Mumbis]

@Evilwolf
I knew so much about the fire hero, but fix the hotkeys and the other things, the pigs is just well.. I just was liek LOL when I saw them X)

But fix the things and i'll rate it 5/5
Let the fire hero be for now

 

[Evilwolf]

I updated the map.
Volcano now works...
Tooltips and Hotkeys fixed...
Lag has been reduced...

 

[Mumbis]

@Evilwolf
Rating changed 5/5

 

[-Kobas-]

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Lavalanche! 2.5d
Created by Evilwolf ; Uploaded by: Evilwolf

Review

Sorry buddy map is 2 simple, at least add modes, more pandas and create leaderboard or multiboard to show players current progress.
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