Kalimdor Island

[Moderator]

16:43, 24th Jul 2013
Orcnet: lacking of description

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

This isnt altered melee.All you did is to add a custom model for the rcish grunt.....
Oh and Kalimdor is already populated by orges...How the can invade it then?They are mindless brutes...

Terrian needs hell more improvement but the idea is good.

 

[Lastmoh12]

Ok I am trying to make a good map -.-

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

Well i dont try to make you feel bad but to critisice your maps so you can improve them

 

[Lastmoh12]

How Can I Improve it ?

 

[Lastmoh12]

Is that is good pls ^_^

 

[Lastmoh12]

hello

 

[UndeadImmortal]

* Map is symmetry and the outline is pretty good.
* Terrain is too flat and empty, you could try adding doodads (but not that spammy) to fill those empty areas.
* Tile wise, you could make road using the dirt tile accordingly combine with the other tiles. Also be sure to raise it a little.
* Common melee maps uses random drop items not fixed (usually Permanent or Power-up).
* Credits are needed. Whenever you use an imported resource, of course you need to credit (mention) the author at your description and/or ingame.

Overall, I like the outline/shape of the map tho it has a lot of bad points.
1/5 till you update it. Also, you could try reading these tutorials, it will hope you a-lot, terraining and making a melee map. Good day!

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...ials-278/advanced-terraining-tutorial-203428/
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/general-mapping-tutorials-278/how-create-melee-maps-187652/
(Click the green text with underlines and it will redirect you to a page)

 

[Lastmoh12]

man I am trying -.- and how can I improve it

 

[Lastmoh12]

hmm I have updated the map

 

[Lastmoh12]

How can I put this screen shot ?

 

[Lastmoh12]

Any one answer me how can I improve my map -.- and screen shot

 

[UndeadImmortal]

We already told you what to add and improve about your map, please carefully read our comments. Also don't multi-posts, it is against the rule.

 

[Lastmoh12]

where ?

 

[Lastmoh12]

Then approve
and how to picture the map like u do

 

[Daffa]

UserCP > Networking > Photos and Albums.
Another Option for uploading images.

Also, Lasmoth12, please use EDIT button instead of double post.

 

[Legal_Ease]

Oh Man! This poor kid just can't win.

The name of this map is taken too.

Please change it...

Kalimdor Islands is one of my maps with actual islands and 5 races.

I know it was an accident. I'm not blaming you. Don't give up, its just a rough start.

To take a screen-shot hit [cntrl] + [PrntScrn]. The print screen button is usually about the numbers. If you do this a "screenshot" is saved to your clip board. Open Paint and go to edit and then -> Paste. You should have the image now. Save it! Now upload to the WWW or world wide web internet. Use your album here at the Hive or use facebook or photobucket or anything you want that will load a picture up online. Then right-click on the image and select "open image in image URL" then copy the image address. It should start out http/:www. Then update your description and add the [img]www.yup.jpg[/img] tags around your image address. then save the update and voi la! You now have your first screenie!!! Don't ask me to teach you to screencapture video and add to your description because I can't really ever get it to work great, but that's fun too.

good luck!

 

[Lastmoh12]

thx but what I can rename it -.-
And how can I approve my map

 

[Daffa]

thx but what I can rename it -.-
And how can I approve my map

There's many other names.
Only a Moderator can approve and reject Maps.