Jaina.blp

[Moderator]

21:18, 20th Mar 2009
Dan van Ohllus:
I agree with what Denu said in the comments:

It looks like you went crazy with a red brush. The skin lacks definition and is just way to blurry. Right now it just looks like a red mess. But that is something to be expected of a first attempt. You should put in more colors like that orange you got going. You should also fully define your concept by looking at references and the like. I can't really think of much else to say other than to keep at it.

 

[zadelim]

Hope you all like it!

 

[StaberFire]

Rule of thumb: never upload your first skin.

This needs to be freehanded, it seems to be a recolour. You need to make your own design, not just draw over the one already in place.

 

[a7xpwns3]

Im pretty sure this is CnP. The end.

 

[Anachron]

Umm this is not only recoloured

 

[Coinblin]

I like this, its a very good start. Try doing you own hair, and maybe shade the blood lines some more, the ones on the face and on the armor. 3/5

 

[zadelim]

Thank for the comment. I will improve this skin on my way.

 

[zadelim]

Updated! Take a look and give some comment!

 

[killer1390]

very nice indeed. 5/5.

 

[Denu]

It looks like you went crazy with a red brush. The skin lacks definition and is just way to blurry. Right now it just looks like a red mess. But that is something to be expected of a first attempt. You should put in more colors like that orange you got going. You should also fully define your concept by looking at references and the like. I can't really think of much else to say other than to keep at it.

 

[SomeRandomDeleted Dr. Cabbage0]

Blurry

 

[zadelim]

I try to make it clearly. But which part should I fix?

 

[Anachron]

I would at first fix the cape, face seems to be ok.

 

[zadelim]

I would at first fix the cape, face seems to be ok.

What is the cape mess up? the textures?

 

[Anachron]

damn I meant the robe.. xD

 

[zadelim]

damn I meant the robe.. xD

Lolx, the cape keep blurring

 

[zadelim]

New update!! The cape now look better?

 

[Anachron]

Argh 135, the size increases.

Anyway, I think its better now.

 

[zadelim]

Argh 135, the size increases.

Anyway, I think its better now.

Thanks ya Anachron! It should be ok now.

 

[Coinblin]

The bloodied cloth needs to be more defined, organized, and less blurry. Basically, it needs more shading. This is getting better.

 

[zadelim]

The bloodied cloth needs to be more defined, organized, and less blurry. Basically, it needs more shading. This is getting better.

I will be continue working on this.

 

[Kwah]

It's nice, but awful blurry. Especially the torso.

 

[zadelim]

Thanks, but whatever i edit the torso always becoming blur.

 

[Anachron]

Nice, 65kb and looks good =) +rep

 

[zadelim]

Nice, 65kb and looks good =) +rep

Thanks, this skin is finished. I tested in game, is nice in game =)

 

[N.O]

Nice work on your first skin, 10/10 I think its almost perfect.
The legs do look a little blurry though but I don't know if thats just me or its the design.

 

[FrIkY]

Hm... lower part of the cloak looks somewhat like CnP... almost every part of the skin looks blurry, except that one. Actually, there are also other things that are suspicious, but I won't mention them now. I was gonna give you 3/5, but since everything is blurry (and some parts are suspicious), I give you 2/5. But keep working on the skin, something that might solve your bluriness in the future is "Sharpen Filter", feel free to use if you got that. Which tool are you using?

 

[SerenityInFire]

I try to make it clearly. But which part should I fix?

You should fix all of it.The skin is a very nice idea, but it is just too blurry and undefined. Add some more contrast to areas such as the chest, legs and hands and it should look good. As of right now, I give it a 3/5. With some more work, I could see this becoming a 5/5 skin.

 

[nielsjorgen]

to little change but good idea 3/5
(im new)

 

[The Final Sin]

this is a nice skin.... and to all those who said its just a recolor BAM!

TOTALLY DIFFERENT PATTERNS

 

[zadelim]

Hm... lower part of the cloak looks somewhat like CnP... almost every part of the skin looks blurry, except that one. Actually, there are also other things that are suspicious, but I won't mention them now. I was gonna give you 3/5, but since everything is blurry (and some parts are suspicious), I give you 2/5. But keep working on the skin, something that might solve your bluriness in the future is "Sharpen Filter", feel free to use if you got that. Which tool are you using?

To FrIkY:
I'm just using Photoshop CS4. All of this I can't edit it clearly but I got exam just now. I don't have time these days. So, wait until I finish the exam I will start the work.

To SerenityInFire:
I try to fix all of it. But, I need a tutorial of it. I'm just started all of this. I need trainer =D

To nielsjorgen:
Thanks, I will make it until the end =D

 

[zadelim]

this is a nice skin.... and to all those who said its just a recolor BAM!

TOTALLY DIFFERENT PATTERNS

Lol, is just A BIG IDEA IN MY MIND =D

 

[qqluqq]

Rule of thumb: never upload your first skin.

This needs to be freehanded, it seems to be a recolour. You need to make your own design, not just draw over the one already in place.

he says its his first skin he uploads on the Hive not his first skin

 

[zadelim]

Actually, this skin is my first skin projects. So, now i had stopped now. Now i busying creating map now. No time to update this projects. Apologize for this.

Also, the approvement from moderators accepted.
When that time I using the Photoshop to create this skin are a beginner. Now I had improved with some graphic design skill. So, now I had the skill of skinning now. But, I was no time do it since this few month. I know this projects is never update when rejected.

If got time I sure will update it to the best skin ever.