Human Battle v0.2

[Moderator]

16:56, 29th Jan 2011
-Kobas-:
Map Status: Rejected
Broken Rules:
(Resource) Completion
Comment

 

[TheKurt009]

please add screenshots, thank you!
i'll be looking forward in the near future!

 

[light bolt30]

Please improve the description; tell us more about the map, heroes, items, screenshots, etc. Here's a list of BB Codes to help you. The terrain seems very plain from the preview image since there is only 2 tile sets being used. This map would be better off in the Map Development Forums.

 

[Adryel123]

I know i know but i need ideas and sometimes my laptop is broke because of my left mouse button...

 

[BlackKnightTGS]

Q: Some Heroes Kinda Imbalanced
A: that will be fix in the near future

Q: WTF! no items
A: Items will be added in the future

Q: No Loading Screen? Why?
A: That will be implemented too in the future

Imbalanced heroes? No items? No loading screen? No offense, but that won't really attract people to download your map o_o I'm downloading anyways, to test/review.

Edit: Umm....there is a loading screen (Blizz Loading Screen).


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Originality: Another 3-way AoS...AoS is kinda getting old imo...2/5
Concept: Pretty much like any other 3-way AoS I've seen. 2/5
Description [TWH]: At least it tells something about the map. So, it's good. Screenies would be nice. 3/5
Description [In-game]: Reminds me of DotA, but informative on what to do. 3/5
Grammar: Grammar's good. No typos, etc. 4/5
Triggering: Leaks! :S 2/5

Triggers

[trigger=Gold]Gold
Events
Time - Every 1.00 seconds of the game
Conditions
Actions
Player - Add 1 to Player 1 (Red) Current gold
Player - Add 1 to Player (Blue Current gold
etc, etc...[/trigger]

While it could be THIS, for example:

[trigger=Gold]Gold
Events
Time - Every 1.00 seconds of the game
Conditions
Actions
Player Group - Pick every player in (All Players)/(All Players controlled by a (User) player) and do (Actions)
Player - Add 1 to (Picked Player) Current gold[/trigger]

"Check Players - Deactivate this trigger if you dont want to loose from beginning" ...umm...people won't really bother, much. Plus, the trigger makes computer players victorious, which is unnecessary. Just use the "Player Group" function to prevent leaks.

That's all I can say. Oh, and your revive doesn't work...I stayed dead permanently o_o

Spells: Classic Blizzard spells. Nothing...unique, as the description says. 0/5
Tooltips: Classic Blizz tooltips. 0/5
Credits: No in-game credits. Only here. 2/5
Gameplay: Kinda like every AoS, only with melee-game heroes. Plus, the heroes don't even start with mana when they're picked -_- 2/5
Quality: Med-quality. 3/5
Replayability: So-so. There is already a 3-way-AoS map with melee heroes though, I've played one before...3/5
Balance: Blizz heroes are balanced, units are so-so. 3/5
Terrain: Kind of flat, if you ask me, and lacks some doodads/destructibles xP 3/5
Lag: I don't think so...3/5
Violates the Rules?: Well, a bit. 3/5

Overall Rating: 38/75 = 2/5 = Vote for Rejection :/

Rating System

Unrated: 0 – 9 = Vote for Rejection + Map Reported.
1/5: 10 - 20 = Vote for Rejection + Map maybe Reported.
2/5: 21 – 40 = Vote for Rejection or no vote + Maybe reported.
3/5: 41 – 55 = No vote, not reported, no rep.
4/5: 56 – 65 = Vote for Approval and maybe + Rep.
5/5: 66+ = Vote for Approval + Rep.

Suggestions:
- Fix the leaks
- Make unique heroes....literally now. >_>
- Add items? Else, gold is useless...
- Improve terrain a bit
- Put this on the Map Development instead xP

Notes:
I downrated "Spells/Tooltips" because you said the map has "unique" stuff in it. If it was melee/altered melee/AoS-with melee heroes only, I'd probably rate it sth else. It's not because I hate Blizz spells

 

[RaijinSpark]

I don't even think this map reached beta stage

 

[Magnet199]

ok, here is my feedback:

Bad stuff:
- Long time to re-spawn....
- Units get spam and over come the base, now, i have a hero and my hero creates minions, so why my enemy (no hero, no minion) and push more then me?? (last hits are perfect and non stop hitting)
- Please add items
- The dark ranger, whatever her name is, silence 20 sec? :O lvl up = small, medium, LARGE AWESOME (unbalance)
- ^ if this hero is blizzard , then they are all blizzard heroes, no custom hero, at least different (BALANCED) spells
- terrain.....plain :S, like not even a grass XD
- my creeps, went bot left side more then bot right side, in other words, creep system is crappy
- leaks :S
- discription didn't attract me, no idea i download this -_- (i don't mean use BB codes )
- don't you think archers should have more damage but low hp, and footmen low damage but nice armor and hp? :S turns out in game, archers no use
- I stopped at playing 5 min (after i went to kill myself to check how to respawn)
- gold for.......?

but in the good side....
- i like the three-way creeps
- nice 3 teams
- classic
- Balanced (melee) style

Please Fix these stuff, add some things, remove leaks.
You never know, maybe it will turn out awesome?

 

[-Kobas-]

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Human Battle v0.2
Created by Adryel ; Uploaded by: Adryel123

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Unfinished map!
Resources must be completed. For works in progress, post in the relevant forum, or the Pastebin.

Sorry buddy map isn't finished or even close to finished stage.
Map status: Rejected

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