Halahk's Tale

[Moderator]

15:45, 1st Jan 2009
Rui: You had more than enough time to fix what I asked you to fix. [highlight]Rejected[/code].

 

[asjkshaf]

Please leave feedback! Thank you

 

[knight26]

Well first time i tried it gives me fatal error.. but i dl again and try
Edit: yeah Fatal error after trying second time...! Fix it please and Pm me

EDIT2: seems he prob. is with my pc.. ill fix it and comment

 

[sagi5533]

nice camping but i think you should change the end,
kill them in other way xb

 

[Rui]

I'm pretty sure I left a message asking you to fix it. I could search the deleted campaigns, but I won't just so you don't get neg-repped. Please fix the "Unknown" author.

 

[deathreaven]

Okay, it's not a bad campaign, but I can only play map 1. Can I go into world editor to make it so I can play the rest?

EDIT:
I fixed it. The end was funny. Although, that's kinda stupid to just blow them all up. And I know how halahk and Wolfe survived. Aisha must have cast 2 mana spells in the short time. I mean mana shields.

 

[asjkshaf]

Yeah sorry about the lvl 1 bug. The ending was a bit silly, but I couldnt think of a decent way to finish it. My next creation is going to be more plot heavy/serious, and better cinematics. May even include custom voice acting.
Thanks alot for the feedback.

 

[deathreaven]

Okay, well I think there should be a little less "put a hero and fight some insane guy, and a little more sidequests and exploration. And maybe more customization. The humans were n differnt. (omg my computer is laging right now). You'll get used to making betterr maps. But a little more terrain creativity would be a big jump.

I have an rpg called "when freedom slips away" It has a good story line that ony used a 128*96 map. It's terrain detail would be a good example of well done mapping.

 

[asjkshaf]

Thanks deathraven, I'll check it out.