Gravity Spells v2.0

[Moderator]

Bribe:

Nothing is MUI and everything leaks a lot.

The sight trigger should have "map initialization" as the event.

Please ask for help fixing your triggers in the Triggers and Scripts section: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/triggers-scripts-269/

 

[Archangel678]

Post triggers in [HIDDEN=""][/HIDDEN] Tags in you description, I hope its MUI, has minimal leaks, somewhat efficient...

 

[Nightmare Moon]

^^yeah triggers would be nice.
From screen shot looks MUI and need to be about 20% cooler. Also you should make on different levels
Idea is kinda original, but it's just the knockback i guess
Oh i smell JASS =)

 

[Archangel678]

Oh i smell JASS =)

Category: GUI / Triggers

Doubt it.

and need to be about 20% cooler

How are you measuring 'coolness'?

 

[Nightmare Moon]

Doubt it.

ooops

How are you measuring 'coolness'?

Magic my friend! Effects are to ... well how can i say that... mmm... boring!

 

[Archangel678]

Well, I felt like actually doing something so... here's the triggers:

Spell A

• Knockback01
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit Starts the effect of an ability
  • Conditions
    • (Ability being cast) Equal to Positive Gravity
  • Actions
    • Set Target = (Target unit of ability being cast)
    • Set Caster = (Triggering unit)
    • Set Location = (Position of Caster)
    • Trigger - Turn on Knockback02 <gen>
    • Wait 1.00 seconds
    • Trigger - Turn off Knockback02 <gen>

• Knockback02
  • Events
    • Time - Every 0.04 seconds of game time
  • Conditions
  • Actions
    • Unit - Move Target instantly to (Location offset by ((Distance between (Position of Target) and Location) + -15.00) towards (Angle from Location to (Position of Target)) degrees)
    • Special Effect - Create a special effect attached to the origin of Target using Abilities\Weapons\GryphonRiderMissile\GryphonRiderMissileTarget.mdl
    • Special Effect - Destroy (Last created special effect)

Spell B

• Knockback 1
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit Starts the effect of an ability
  • Conditions
    • (Ability being cast) Equal to Negative Gravity
  • Actions
    • Set Caster = (Triggering unit)
    • Set Target = (Target unit of ability being cast)
    • Set Location = (Position of Caster)
    • Trigger - Turn on Knockback 2 <gen>
    • Wait 1.00 seconds
    • Trigger - Turn off Knockback 2 <gen>

• Knockback 2
  • Events
    • Time - Every 0.04 seconds of game time
  • Conditions
  • Actions
    • Unit - Move Target instantly to (Location offset by ((Distance between Location and (Position of Target)) + 20.00) towards (Angle from Location to (Position of Target)) degrees)
    • Special Effect - Create a special effect attached to the origin of Target using Abilities\Weapons\GryphonRiderMissile\GryphonRiderMissileTarget.mdl
    • Special Effect - Destroy (Last created special effect)

Verdict

Your spells:
-Leak alot.
-Are too simple.
-Aren't Mui
-Use Waits
-Are simply knockbacks/hooks(?)
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Please refer to the tutorials.

 

[Nightmare Moon]

Then i'll post review, my time to shine

-yo!;
-you leak location;
-you use waits, makes spell non-MUI;
-to much triggers, could be done in two;
-could become a knockback and knockforward system ;
-use timer in event 0.03 nit 0.04 - more efficient

Edit: oh you also made a verdict - good.
Okay, @PiratE-OF-7-SeaS, you should read few tutorials here on hive: Hot to make spell MUI and How to clear leaks. Search such tutorials

 

[Archangel678]

Oh, this isn't his/her first time on making a spell that is non-mui and simply deleted it in retaliation, let's hope he/she fixes them instead this time around...

 

[Marcos DAB]

- Not MUI.
- Not leakless.
- Uses "Watings". (urrrgghh)

 

[PiratE-OF-7-SeaS]

Ok, I'll check some tutorials and tips ....... now the reason why it is less "cool" it is cause the gravity has no effect that the eye can see..... so i made it like that. Anyways, thanks for feedbacks!! )

 

[Archangel678]

Good to see your going to update it ^^