Finnall Goldensword (Kultiras Battlemage)

[JesusHipster]

Review: Needs Fix

Seems ok besides her shoulderpads scaling when she moves her arms (that's a noticeable bug) and her portrait being atrociously funny. Fix those two things and it will be approveable. Overhaul it's a nice little edit. Good job. Liked her bitch-face and cute ears. Sowrd wrap could be better, but it's ok.

 

[Sxar]

Review: Needs Fix

Seems ok besides her shoulderpads scaling when she moves her arms (that's a noticeable bug) and her portrait being atrociously funny. Fix those two things and it will be approveable. Overhaul it's a nice little edit. Good job. Liked her bitch-face and cute ears. Sowrd wrap could be better, but it's ok.

Indeed xD I did portrait fast at 3:00 am

I'll improve her today. I practiced attach bone for this model (jaina x proudmoore) so that explain why some moves still buggy. I'll keep working on shoulders.

As always thanks for the review! o7

 

[JesusHipster]

I'll improve her today. I practiced attach bone for this model (jaina x proudmoore) so that explain why some moves still buggy. I'll keep working on shoulders.

They should be attach to only one bone at a time to avoid scaling.

 

[Sxar]

They should be attach to only one bone at a time to avoid scaling.

Copyback! I'll take care about it comander! o7

 

[Aleister]

Woah, you're improving with the uvmapping, and yes, definitely her face (and her body) is so beautiful. Keep it up!

 

[Sxar]

Updated requested changes o7 new portrait with sexy (?) animations of Sorceress... I miss the wink of the archer anyway, but I'm not full skilled with animations of portrait to full customize my own from zero yet. orz

ty Aleister for your continuous support! o/

 

[Sxar]

I think I got my inspiration for her 'bitch-face' look for the Royal Guard Fiora from league of legends,

 

[Kyrbi0]

This is pretty neat. Simple, but an accurate rendition & yet still useful as a generic Battlemage (as you labelled it; maybe "Spellsword"). To really sell that, I'd throw some sparkly SFX on her sword during some of the anims.

3/5

 

[Sxar]

This is pretty neat. Simple, but an accurate rendition & yet still useful as a generic Battlemage (as you labelled it; maybe "Spellsword"). To really sell that, I'd throw some sparkly SFX on her sword during some of the anims.

3/5

There's some tutorial to add sparks to animations? I need that orz

 

[Kyrbi0]

There's some tutorial to add sparks to animations? I need that orz

Well, not so much 'animations' as 'parts of the mesh', but yeah, 'during certain animations' (e.g. Spell or Attack Slam). I """"kinda"""" know how it works/to do it, but really what I would do (literally) is just find another model that does what you want (in terms of the SFX) & then copy/paste them over to your model & make the necessary modifications.

Honestly I'd take a look at this baby; those exact 'sparkly colored star' SFX are what I was thinking of (though you could certainly do a lot of other things).

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Also, I know it could be a lot of work, but this lady could really excel as a Unit (i.e. with Death/Decay animations). I'm not entirely sold on her 'heroic-ness', but with the option to use her as a unit I'd be pretty stoked. : )

 

[Sxar]

Well, not so much 'animations' as 'parts of the mesh', but yeah, 'during certain animations' (e.g. Spell or Attack Slam). I """"kinda"""" know how it works/to do it, but really what I would do (literally) is just find another model that does what you want (in terms of the SFX) & then copy/paste them over to your model & make the necessary modifications.

Honestly I'd take a look at this baby; those exact 'sparkly colored star' SFX are what I was thinking of (though you could certainly do a lot of other things).

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Also, I know it could be a lot of work, but this lady could really excel as a Unit (i.e. with Death/Decay animations). I'm not entirely sold on her 'heroic-ness', but with the option to use her as a unit I'd be pretty stoked. : )

Tysm! I'll check it out! I didn't know I could geomerging particles too just like anyother geoset part

 

[JesusHipster]

Review: needs a (small) fix

Ok, two things. First - you forgot to change her death sound from paladin to something more femine, so right now she screams like a manly bearded dude when she dies. Dig event objects in Model Editor and change it to sorceress or jaina or something. Also move that weapon ref closer to her actual sword. Right now it's somewhere around her fist.

The model itself is indeed very nice. Very well done.


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Don't have time to test it, but I assume changes are made.

 

[Sxar]

Sword attachmed fixed. However I tryed to use Object editor but program crash everytime when it run (maybe due I have MS .NET in last version instead 4.5 required) so I can't edit her manly voice when she dies. If someone can hotfix this and share with me I'll update the file. tysm D:

 

[Kyrbi0]

Here ya go.

 

[CHFern]

This is quite nice.

 

[Kolossoni]

Wait, isn't her sword a "tad"-bit too bulky? Seems like a sword for orcs. A rapier might look better on her.

 

[ShadowMidas]

bases model produdmoore or jaina???

 

[Kyrbi0]

Wait, isn't her sword a "tad"-bit too bulky? Seems like a sword for orcs. A rapier might look better on her.

I don't know whether it is or isn't, but in Warcraft you have to watch out for making things too small/thin; a true rapier would be simply invisible in-game.

 

[Kolossoni]

I don't know whether it is or isn't, but in Warcraft you have to watch out for making things too small/thin; a true rapier would be simply invisible in-game.

Just thought that the width was a little bit big. If the sword's width was a little thinner, it would match the "female sword fighter" concept greatly.

 

[Mgeterno11]

Looks very nice, especially the textures. 5/5