Felwood Swamp. v2.0

[Moderator]

00:31, 30th Jul 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

Drops are no good (Doom Guard has a chance to drop 2 Crown of Kings, wtf?), random items on the map, cinematic doodads, underused environmental doodads, unbalanced starting locations, etc...

 

[Darkzealot_128]

Fix the improper grammar and spelling in description please.

 

[Wazzz]

I could write a whole list of things wrong with this map, but here's the main problem that a lot of people make when they're new to the hive:

-You uploaded the map

The Goal i had in mind for this map was to make the same general rules for WC3 and idea,
but with customized units skills and new looks, now i think ive pretty much accomplished that.

From the sounds of it, all you had in mind for this map was to import a shitload of models/skins and customize abilities at random.
Testing of the map confirmed these suspicions.
Not really much to say about how to 'fix' it, as this mod has gone nowhere and can only go as far as... well, it can't go anywhere.
Needless to say, I will be voting 1/5 and for Rejection.

 

[Creed345]

Your saying I Customized abilities at random because the abilities dont fit the heroes? have you tested all the races yourself? And i only downloaded a skin, model, or spell when i found one when i saw one that would fit into the criteria of the character i wanted to apply it to. im not some kind of retard if thats what your implying.

 

[Creed345]

Updated!

Oh and yes i fixed those grammar errors i believe thank you for pointing that out i was very tired yesterday

 

[MB Pop]

Try to make your description more eye catching! A good presentation is a must when you upload maps! It also won't hurt to include a changelog, some screenshots or even a map preview!

If you want me to test out the map and give more feedback just send me a PM

Use these BB Codes to help with your description!

 

[BlackKnightTGS]

I played as all races, and here's what I think:

Are You Looking for a normal WC3 game? Sick of the Boring old heroes, Units, and spells? You want a new feel to the game? If so the Goal of this map is to do just that! ))

I don't get it, I barely see any new spells, most units have been reskinned...and there are some things I'd like to point out:

• Some icons turn into Green Boxes.
• The Fire Elemental has the Water Elemental icon in the caster's spell list.
• There is a human marine in the Orc race...wtf?
• There are some grammar mistakes and messed up tool-tips.
• "Train Banshee" - A huge Void Lord pops up. And from a Slaughterhouse as well....weird actually.
• Some Naga and an Orc are with the Undead...wtf, again?
• "Terrorblade, Level 1 Illidan"...what? Fix the other name to be Illidan, not that one.

Also improve description and reduce filesize. It's a bit big for an Altered Melee map.

I'll rate this map 1/5 and Vote for Rejection.

 

[Creed345]

I played as all races, and here's what I think:



I don't get it, I barely see any new spells, most units have been reskinned...and there are some things I'd like to point out:

• Some icons turn into Green Boxes.
• The Fire Elemental has the Water Elemental icon in the caster's spell list.
• There is a human marine in the Orc race...wtf?
• There are some grammar mistakes and messed up tool-tips.
• "Train Banshee" - A huge Void Lord pops up. And from a Slaughterhouse as well....weird actually.
• Some Naga and an Orc are with the Undead...wtf, again?
• "Terrorblade, Level 1 Illidan"...what? Fix the other name to be Illidan, not that one.

Also improve description and reduce filesize. It's a bit big for an Altered Melee map.

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Okay ill get to editing those " Cosmetic" mistakes and the Naga's and UD formed an alliance to fight in the Battle,
and if you had read the tooltips properly it would have said he is an undead Orc Warlord, same with the Naga Lord "Hence the Alliance which ill add in the Quest Logs which i think alread explians all that which you might have neglected to read.

and the Icon youll just have to put up with for now but yes thank you for pointing those things out : )

Edit: all those changes have been done are (excluding Icon) and are accounted for.

 

[BlackKnightTGS]

Well, I meant the Void Lord's tooltip basically, it says "Train Banshee" and has the banshee's description o_o..or did you change its description?

 

[Creed345]

Im Changing it Right now and Im Scanning through every tool Tip looking for Errors and im going to put in a request for a red fire elemental Icon if i cant find one. ill post when i have the updated version

OH and did u notice any bad cooldowns because im trying to to make them more evened out right now.

Edit: The Space Marine Was hired by the Orcs to fight for them ( Read his tooltip)

 

[Darkzealot_128]

Ths map isn't ready. Don't upload to the HWS until it is complete. You can delete now before you get punishment.

 

[Darigan]

I have read the description and your map does infact fit the criteria.
however more effort should be put into this map if you want it to be accepted by the mods. and you did change the problems that were pointed out so..

i will Vote for Acception

 

[Creed345]

Ths map isn't ready. Don't upload to the HWS until it is complete. You can delete now before you get punishment.

You just said the map was good when i talked to you on your profile?

Well, the map has a huge memory but other then that it's good.

 

[MB Pop]

Ok so I have finished testing and wrote a review

Felwood Swamp Review

I'm new at this so this is the best I could do, I hope it helps.

General

[+] I like the idea of this kind of altered melee map.
[+] Storyline is good.
[-] I think the heroes are too overpowered (compared to the units)
[-] The edge of the map looks bad (in my opinion) when the map and camera bounds are the same.
[ ] I don’t rate terrains because I am a very bad terrainer. Lol.
[?] Only Red has a fixed starting position?
[?] Most upgrades are already researched?
[+] Fairly balanced drops.
[?] Are the heroes supposed to cost different food?
[-] I have reason to believe that many icons are out of place.

Abilities

[+] Very Creative (At least the hero abilities)
[-] Tooltip fail:
Learn Tooltip - Gives a 35% to do 4x more damage.
Normal Tooltip- Gives a 35% Chance to do 3 times more damage
There are other tooltips like that.
[-] Bad learn descriptions - Learn Healing Ward, Extended - Learn Healing Ward
[-] It says in the learn tooltip that voodoo spirits has 2 levels but it really only has 1. Many other cases that are exactly the same problem (Wind Walk, Wards etc)
[-] You don’t have the disabled version for some icons. (Ex. One of the Arc Angel’s Abilities)

Humans

[+] Very creative units.
[?] Is the rifleman supposed to be an angel?
[?] Elite Angel uses “Animal War Training” Upgrade?
[-] When the Angel (And some other units with that model) dies, the body will only disappear after a long time.
[-] Your Child slave’s voice is the peasant’s voice.
[?] Call to arms turns Child Slaves into militia (They got older?!).
[-] The towers are way too weak in my opinion…
[-] The Angel’s Haven also trains Blood Elf Lieutenants; you left that out in the tooltip.
[-] The Arcane Observatory says that it also contains upgrades, but it doesn't.
[-] Fire of darkness requires barrage.
[-] Reincarnation tooltip for the Paladin: When killed, the Tauren Chieftain will come back to life. Etc…

Orcs

[+] Again very creative
[-] When Grom used the ability that transforms him, he becomes a Demon Hunter? (Grom the level 8 Demon Hunter)
[-] The Dragon workers are still called peons and have the peon icon.
[?] Worker has a very weird voice…
[?] Flying Workers!
[-] Raider Body also doesn't disappear after a long time. (This is probably due to the fact you used a model that was meant to be a hero for a regular unit, same with the human angel)

Undead

[+] Creative
[?] Void lord can be created from the slaughterhouse AND the temple of the damned?
[-] By far the worst hero ability learn tooltips.
[-] Banshee Queen - why does this hero have the ability “Ice Arrows?”
[-] The frost wyrm doesn’t look like an undead anymore.

Night Elves

[-] Very few changes made except re-skinned models and new models. (Not many new units)
[?] Main building is corrupted?
[?] Ariel Darkmoon the level 6 Sylvanas Night Archer?

[hidden="Mark]
Unfortunately I will have to rate this 1/5 and vote for rejection!
This map need some polishing and fixing up but I do believe that this can be a great map with some more hard work! If you have made any updates and want me to look at your map again just contact me via PM!

I dearly hope that this review has helped you!

[/hidden]

 

[Wazzz]

@MB Pop: If this is so 'creative', how come every noob and his dog submits a map just like this?

 

[Creed345]

jeez wazz your really not a good person are you?

 

[BlackKnightTGS]

Most bugs and typos have been fixed, good job But, there is a bug, and the message "A newly constructed unit has no room to be placed" randomly since the beginning, and I didn't even order them to train anything. And is it me, or does P1 have almost all upgrades researched? Anyway. 3/5.

 

[Creed345]

Most bugs and typos have been fixed, good job But, there is a bug, and the message "A newly constructed unit has no room to be placed" randomly since the beginning, and I didn't even order them to train anything. And is it me, or does P1 have almost all upgrades researched? Anyway. 3/5.

FIXED !

updated in v 1.5 i noticed that bug too when i was playtesting after v 1.4!

if u notice any more bugs give me a shout : D
thanks

 

[BlackKnightTGS]

Alright, I'll always retest the map when I see it's updated It's a fun altered melee

 

[Creed345]

I know !
even when id playtest for faults id just play the whole game while writing down the bugs rofl : D

 

[MogulKahn]

Nice map ! I love maps with custom models. ^^

 

[Creed345]

Thanks man ! : D yeah that pretty much half the game is admiring the new skins, spells and models too rofl

 

[MB Pop]

Dammit man you gotta stop updating so fast, everytime I check up on this map it's a new version!

When I'm in the middle of testing one version another one comes out lol.
But I'm glad that you are working hard on this project. I'll give another review once I finish trying out the current version...unless another one comes out.

 

[Creed345]

Dammit man you gotta stop updating so fast, everytime I check up on this map it's a new version!

When I'm in the middle of testing one version another one comes out lol.
But I'm glad that you are working hard on this project. I'll give another review once I finish trying out the current version...unless another one comes out.

lmfao im sorry im taking a break from the editor today, im always just looking for tiny things that need sprucing here and there and by the time im done its update worthy usually plus all the playtesting
so yeah there wont be any updates today so go ahead and do the review

 

[Sharingan]

Lower the model scale of dragon looking peons by 0.3 pls.
They are too big right now.
Also.Change the model of Great Hall to dragon nest because dragon flying in the ground is lame.

 

[Creed345]

Lower the model scale of dragon looking peons by 0.3 pls.
They are too big right now.
Also.Change the model of Great Hall to dragon nest because dragon flying in the ground is lame.

Done!!
except lowering the model scale by 0.3 was way too much so i only lowered it by 0.1!! : )

 

[pasqual]

patch

what patch did u use? because on my computer doesn't work

 

[Creed345]

what patch did u use? because on my computer doesn't work

uhm when i test the map i use my version of WC3 and its fully updated with the latest patch so try starting there if you dont have the latest one.

if not re-download the map (since i just updated anyways)

and IF that doesnt work then use the editor and try playing the game from there.

 

[Faith]

Well, seeing as this resource is no longer available...

...AWESOME MAP. I really enjoyed looking at nothing. Hehe, if you still have it, you could let me test it...

...Your choice.