Corrupted Lords of Ashenvale v1.2

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15:51, 8th Oct 2015
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[Magnet199]

map seems interesting, going to test a single player and give you gameplay feedback

EDIT: ok tested, here is what i got

The Bad Stuff:
- [High] there is somehow a leak that makes heavy lags, now i suck at triggers, so i didnt check which one, its the trigger or the many corps, please check that out
- [Minor] the buff for treants are not the same pic

The Good Stuff:
- the terrain BEAUTIFUL
- new idea
- system for killing units are good and new, never seen one like it
- and everything els i guess

Suggestions:
- different type of the currepted
- regrow tree system, i like to camp with my units, so make the trees come back please
- and reduce lag (remove leaks)

Map is awesome:
Rate: 5/5
Rep: 1+
Vote: -

 

[light bolt30]

Some screenshots will be nice. Also abbilitys should be abilities, difficultys should be difficulties, cereas should be series, i should always be in capitals unless not needed. The introduction could use some punctuation since you're just going to make everyone read it as it is, without any pauses. There may be other typo's or errors but you can contact me for a more closer check on grammar.

 

[XPQJ]

you should add items and more heros and such cause it gets kinda boring and lags really bad by the time you get to the last level cause there are so many units, like on the last level I was getting about 5 fps xD

Edit the lag might be caused by leaks on the spawn points, make sure you clear leaks, or just a lot of units idk how to fix it if its just a lot of units, besides making less units xD.

 

[Orcnet]

Map Review

Made by DeathChef. A Defense/Survival map were the Night Elves had found out your goal to drink the (holy? corrupted? = unholy) water and must terminate such a plan.

Map Review

Corrupted Lords of Ashenvale v1.0

Rating System

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	5/5	91-100	A

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	4/5	81-90%	B

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	3/5	75-80%	C

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	2/5	70-74%	D

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	1/5	50-69%	F

General:

Gameplay-[5/5]
Note: Were I pronounce your game challenging or a waste of time.

Playability-[5/5]
Note: This part tells me if the game is rather fun and can be played again and again.

Terrain-[5/5]
Note: Were I tell your game's environmental display is either great or terrible.

Managing-[5/5]
Note: This is were I explain the output or outcome quality of the game.

Bug/s
Note: No score, just to tell your map has bugs on it or simply bug-free.

Overall-[20/20]

About My Reputations:

My complements for the Maker/s of the map's game.

Were I explain your map needs to get fix or make an improvement of your work.

Overview

Gameplay

The game was good, but how come you don't have an ending? your game is on a loop and there is no goal for the players to win, mind if you could fix your game dude.

Playability

They just keep coming, and there is nothing in store for the players to survive, just hapless treants and useless channeling spells, please do add more cosmetics for both players and viewers can enjoy your game.

Terrain

So your terrain was the only best thing I had observed so far, but since you hero goal is KOTG, were this dude spams his important skills on trees, please add a tree revival system for players to coupe on such a massive wave of babes and old timers.

Managing

Overall, you still lack more knowledge about a survival map, you must at least make a safe house for players to fall back when all hell breaks loose, special techniques such as bombs, units, items, and the last and most important part of the game, the ending, I mean you must have something in mind to stop this game right? like a boss or a tower or something that can pause those annoying horde.

Bug/s

None

Total Score

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	7/20	67%	F

Fail!

Hope you can do better than before, Goodluck!
happy map-making!

 

[SA Dashie]

Thanks for the review i needed that . Haha didnt expect a 1/5 again but as know that most maps first vertion ever released with only the map maker testing it it is never gona be an instant hit. Thnx again i needed some ideas for the map of how these map types work and will be improved in the far future considering that this map needs alot of work. But thanks anyway

edit:Map has been updated to v1.1

Latest Changes

1. Added a vote at the start of the map for, Difficualty, Night elves sent at once, Trees revive, and Night Elves and Ashenvale Animals aliance.
2. Balanced out the Corrupted lords Abilitys and strengths.
3. Balanced out the amount of Night elves able to be sent.
4. Fixed the mas lag problem and is way more playable now.
5. You can now observe if you die.
6. Fixed the Score Board.
7. Added a proper ending.
8. Fixed many various minor things.

Remember that the map is still in its early stage;P

 

[Cweener]

Well, I like it.

Good triggering, and a pretty decent terrain.
Good job.

Approved.

 

[Great Chief Aeon]

Review

First of all, the map is pretty nice...

The Things that i liked:
- Nice Discription: +0,25
- Nice Game modes: (mainly the tree revive) +0,50 - 0,25 (I liked that, but the trees revive instantly, then some treants cannot get out of the trees)
- Terrain: Very common use, but i liked the placing of the trees +2,50

The Bad Things:
- Army Clog: If you play on single mode, the night elves begins to clog the entire map, so you can kill them all, and the map begins to lag, -2,00
- Nearly Useless Treants: The treants are far too weak, their life is very low, and attack is the same, that makes them nearly useless for the corrupted lord, -0,50
- Where is the Fountain?: If you dying you can use the pot, but if you mana ends, you are doomed! you could make the statue in the center restore the mana of the hero more faster, then after some time, disable it. -0,15
- Hyppogryf Riders: You could make something to have the treants attack air targets, that would be very helpfull -0,05

Extra Points:
- Terrain: +0,50
- Abilities: +0,25
- Gameplay: +0,05
- Creeps: +0,40
- Hero: +0,25
- No Bugs: +1,00

Total Points:
0,30 + Extra Points: 2,45

Ultimate Points! (Only for Maps with future )]

With some work on it, it will be trully AWESOME
and i liked the idea of the map, and the history,
this map has a beutifull future (+2,00)

Total: 2,75 + 2,00 = 4,75
Reached Awesome level (4/5) so you gain as well a rep point
i hope you liked that review...

Very Awesome Map you maked, keep it up!

 

[SA Dashie]

thanks for the review. And also thank for the rating nd the pointers of the bad stuff and suggestions. And also I recomend the faster modes for the more players you have(because of the clog problem) and is why I added it to the vote system. over all thx for the review much apreciated