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Next Review: [2016-05-23]
16:05, 6th Apr 2016
Ardenian:
The English is hardly understandable and there are as well many grammatical and also common sense mistakes.
A 'fleet', for example, does not refer to a single boat, but to many many ships.
Please improve the dialogs. They are not acceptable in their current state.
Why were the Highelves able to capture a Nightelves ship ?
They seem to just have it somehow.
Please also add yourself to the map author.
17:04, 7th Apr 2016
Ardenian: The map needs a descripiton.
Please change the points I mentioned and work on them, else the
map is going to be rejected next time.
16:05, 6th Apr 2016
Ardenian:
The English is hardly understandable and there are as well many grammatical and also common sense mistakes.
A 'fleet', for example, does not refer to a single boat, but to many many ships.
Please improve the dialogs. They are not acceptable in their current state.
Why were the Highelves able to capture a Nightelves ship ?
They seem to just have it somehow.
Please also add yourself to the map author.
17:04, 7th Apr 2016
Ardenian: The map needs a descripiton.
Please change the points I mentioned and work on them, else the
map is going to be rejected next time.