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Cold Of Northern

This bundle is marked as useful / simple. Simplicity is bliss, low effort and/or may contain minor bugs.
HI GUYS I JUST RELEASEDNEW MAP THIS TIME IM NOT USING OFFICIAL MAP
IM USING MY OWN

PLEASE IF THERE ANYTHING WRONG WITH THIS MAP SENT ME MAIL AND ALSO SENT ME FEEDBACK ABOUT THIS MAP

SORRY FOR BAD ENGLISH BECAUSE IAM FROM INDONESIA

BYE HAVE A GREAT TIME
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Cold Of Northern (Map)

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deepstrasz
Username and map author difference. Also, this is not 2v2. Usually for melee maps we use the minimap as the preview image, not a random picture. The filename should be written like: (2)Cold of Northern.w3x. 1. There should be some green neutral camps...
Level 29
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Hello there, I really like the map you are creating, it has a lot of potential. Your english is quite good, you can always help you with an online translator (goolge, bing).
Read the submition rules, read tutorials and read the description of others maps to improve yours,

Your map has a lot of potential, I see you have experience with the editor, focus on improve the map. You can add more neutrals building to increase the game play. This are just sugestion, study them, and decide if you like them


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Try to add more neutral buildings, my image are just a sugestion of what you add, study melee maps and decide what to add. More neutral buildings well placed = to more game play. You have a lot of space to add things, also consider a tavern.


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You did a really nice waterfall, try to improve this areas they are very empty, try to improve them with terrain and doodads/ props (image 2)

The map has an interesting desing, push yourself foward to improve it. Study other maps to learn more knowledge, good luck
 

deepstrasz

Map Reviewer
Level 68
Joined
Jun 4, 2009
Messages
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Username and map author difference. Also, this is not 2v2.
Usually for melee maps we use the minimap as the preview image, not a random picture.
The filename should be written like: (2)Cold of Northern.w3x.

1. There should be some green neutral camps especially when there's so much empty space.
2. Terrain could be improved with height, tile and doodad variation since it's mostly snow.
3. The mine in the middle has a lot of gold but is not too protected.

A nice map however.

Awaiting Update.

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