BaraBura's Spell Review
Please note:
"I am not a Moderator or anything like that. I cannot approve this spell or order you to change anything. I can only give tips of improvements and show you leaks and other errors".
General Thoughts:
I cannot really find this that useful. Maybe some people can find this interesting and use it in they're maps. People maybe could use this as a spell for heroes, but there are several spells for that already.
The Good Stuff:
It works, it is leakless and MUI. Looks like you have good skills in GUI (triggering) so keep up making spells!
The Bad Stuff:
Your "map only" trigger leaks.
Orginal Trigger:
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spawn
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Events
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Time - Every 10.00 seconds of game time
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Conditions
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Actions
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Unit Group - "LEAKS" Pick every unit in (Units in (Playable map area) matching ((Unit-type of (Matching unit)) Equal to Control Point)) and do (Actions)
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Loop - Actions
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Unit - Create 1 Footman for (Owner of (Picked unit)) at "LEAKS" (Position of (Picked unit)) facing Default building facing degrees
See the leaks? Leaks location and unit group.
To fix this, edit your trigger to this:
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spawn
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Events
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Time - Every 10.00 seconds of game time
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Conditions
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Actions
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Set Review__Group = (Units in (Playable map area) matching ((Unit-type of (Matching unit)) Equal to Control Point))
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Unit Group - Pick every unit in Review__Group and do (Actions)
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Loop - Actions
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Set Review__Point = (Position of (Picked unit))
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Unit - Create 1 Footman for (Owner of (Picked unit)) at Review__Point facing Default building facing degrees
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Custom script: call RemoveLocation(udg_Review__Point)
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Custom script: call DestroyGroup(udg_Review__Group)
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The other bad thing I could notice, was that you do not have any triggers to reset the cooldown, mana or health.
If you need such system, PM me and I'll send you a "Spell Template", it's a map where you can build your spells.
The Ratings:
- Idea: 3/5
- There are spells like this or similar already so it's not really a original idea. However, it works so thats a 3.
- Look: 3.5/5
- Could have more effects.
One tip from me is that you make the unit get smaller when it uses the spell, this will make it look like it's flying really fast. Use a trigger that by ever 0.01 second, the size of the unit shrinks a bit, when he is done casting, it gets back to normal.
- Work: 4/5
- It is leakless and Multiplayer. It works. But, there are no reset abilities or such, making it hard to test if it works.
- Overall: 3.5/5
- Looks kinda cheap, not really original, but it works.
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As said, you do not HAVE TO to change the stuff, it's just recommendations from me.
Approved
