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[WolfFarkas]

I see your name in the 19 place for the:
Melee Mapping Contest - 1v1
[$100 Prize Pool] Melee Mapping Contest - 1v1

You should put in the description (edit bundle not upload again the same) that this map is your entry for the contest, I saw your profile and this is your only map so I imagine that is for the contest.

 

[Championfighter25]

Played the map, here is my review:

1. The red player starts with less trees around his gold mine which will make him more vulnerable to a blade master rush
2. Some of the weakest creeps drop strong items. A sea turtle hatchling dropped a tome of intelligence +2. People will exploit this, just kill one creep and run away. Give the better items to stronger creeps.
3. Terrain is flat and kind of empty. Not that it's a problem, but you can maybe add a few more doodads and increase height in certain areas.
4. The choke points are a good idea, but since the tree density near the expansions are so thin a player can just destroy them in a few seconds with an AOE spell or Glaive thrower/Meat wagon/Demolisher/Mortar team and completely outflank you which destroys the purpose of spending resources to defend them.
A ok map that needs improvements.
3/5 from me

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[deepstrasz]

1. Terrain is pretty much flat.
2. Tile and doodad variation not too visible.
3. It's not technically symmetrical. It also has many choke points mostly in the same map region.

Awaiting Update.

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[MysteryMaze]

Like I said earlier, this doesn't look like a finished map.

 

[deepstrasz]

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Awaiting Update.