Black Elf Sorceress.blp

[Moderator]

18:45, 22nd May 2009
Hawkwing: We've decided to approve your skin, but we want you to continue to make changes or we may consider returning it to pending. The eyes are a rather strange shape and they are oddly defined. Also, work on the shading in the face and distinguishing different parts of it. The shading on the bridge of the nose is a bit unorthodox too. You might want to look into that.

Edit: I'm almost inclined to reject the skin, because of those glowly things you put in the corners of the cape.

 

[Celaquil]

Making something from Dawn of Life is always teh win. You should make the eyes a bit more... life like though >.> They are, after all, mortals

 

[GAniksdal]

Making something from Dawn of Life is always teh win. You should make the eyes a bit more... life like though >.> They are, after all, mortals

Thx, man
I'll try to make the eyes more human like(or something like that) in next update.

 

[Misha]

~undefined
~lill recolor here and there
~lacks shading
~lacks highlights
~confusing
~bad eyes
~uneven colors

Rating: 2.46/5 Lacking

~Misha~

EDIT: freehand the ear.

 

[Aeroblyctos]

Oh noes. This is something new.

 

[matmat01]

~undefined
~lill recolor here and there
~lacks shading
~lacks highlights
~confusing
~bad eyes
~uneven colors

I agree with Misha. But prankly, I'll add mine:
- bad freehand.
- blurry.
- skin so rough. elves has flawless and smooth skins.
- If you mean dark elf, it isn't. It looks like an undead or a zombie elf.

 

[Kercyn]

She reminded me of Ironaya in a robe xD
She looks like a combination of a demonic being and a stone giant, not an elf

 

[Kuhneghetz]

The majority of this skin looks like scratched up metal and need some proper color blending.

 

[Misha]

I agree with Misha. But prankly, I'll add mine:
- bad freehand.
- blurry.
- skin so rough. elves has flawless and smooth skins.
- If you mean dark elf, it isn't. It looks like an undead or a zombie elf.

i agree.

I mean.. the only smooth and good thing are her boobs 83 and they too are not much, they rather look like spheres =S

the rest of the skin should be smooth as chest area....

well yeah yeah.. chest and boobs need some improvement too.. kinda like... in between them and a bit up should be somethin', they aren't perfect spheres

EDIT: wanna moar construcive/weird comments? x3

 

[GAniksdal]

i agree.

I mean.. the only smooth and good thing are her boobs 83 and they too are not much, they rather look like spheres =S

the rest of the skin should be smooth as chest area....

well yeah yeah.. chest and boobs need some improvement too.. kinda like... in between them and a bit up should be somethin', they aren't perfect spheres

EDIT: wanna moar construcive/weird comments? x3

Hehe, yeah

I'm working on that smooth thing now, I have taken the feet and the boobs... gonna update it soon

 

[Celaquil]

matmat, it isnt dark elf, its Black Elf, from my story >.>
And they quite have a little war-torn skin really.

 

[Misha]

matmat, it isnt dark elf, its Black Elf, from my story >.>
And they quite have a little war-torn skin really.

..... then there should be subtle scarrs, not shredded metal efect x3

also... her colarbone needs showing a bit... that area is... plain oO

hmm.. tip to fix the "orbs" is to smudge 'em a bit in the upper edge part. that should make 'em better. C:

 

[Celaquil]

Elves with steel skin... hmmmz... Why havnt I thought of that before?! Teh AWESOME

 

[GAniksdal]

So shall I make the skin smoother or shall I just leave it like it is?
Thx for commets all

 

[Celaquil]

Lol, I was joking around. Make it smoother with some scars here and there, small ones though >.>

 

[Misha]

Lol, I was joking around. Make it smoother with some scars here and there, small ones though >.>

...and certainly fix the boobies to i can end my fixation with 'em

 

[GAniksdal]

...and certainly fix the boobies to i can end my fixation with 'em

Yeah, yeah Misha i'm gonna fix them so... relax

 

[Leeroy]

Shadows and hightlights pl0x. And some more details.

 

[Misha]

Ah, now is much nicer

but the metal on the spaulders and boots needs reworking.

and also the hair is weird.... fix that too.

~Misha~

EDIT: moar shadows and highlights on the skin, reduce glow AROUND eyes and rework that cape to something better, it is just weird.

 

[GAniksdal]

Ah, now is much nicer

but the metal on the spaulders and boots needs reworking.

and also the hair is weird.... fix that too.

~Misha~

EDIT: moar shadows and highlights on the skin, reduce glow AROUND eyes and rework that cape to something better, it is just weird.

kk, thx Misha
I'll try to change those parts

 

[Overlord DM]

good skin ^^ keep it up
when your done with this one, plz make one for priest, spell thief and blood mage cuz then we got a hole race xD

 

[GAniksdal]

good skin ^^ keep it up
when your done with this one, plz make one for priest, spell thief and blood mage cuz then we got a hole race xD

Thx man^^ i'm allways happy when I read a comment like this
I can try make them

 

[Misha]

Thx man^^ i'm allways happy when I read a comment like this
I can try make them

Make 'em x3 And i'll be there, to critique 'em to shredds.

 

[Caeyra]

The skin could definitely do with more highlights/shadows; The boobs aren't the only place that light will hit. The feet could do with more definition, as it stands, I'm not sure if she's supposed to be barefoot or wearing shoes. The hair needs work, just because it's black doesn't mean it doesn't shine (unless it's exceptionally course I guess). One other tiny thing, it doesn't look like she has any eyebrows.

It is looking good though, I like the colourscheme, as well as the story behind it.

 

[FrIkY]

To me, it looks ugly. As Dan said, majority of this skin looks like scratched up metal. Messy. Hmm... maybe this can help you. When I use PhotoImpact, and it's Paintbrush (normal brush tool) there's an option called Choose a painting mode, which consists of Freehand, Straight Lines and Connected Lines. I don't know if Photoshop, GIMP and other programs have that, but try to find it. Straight Lines will definately help you with straightness. You see how those white outlines on her cape are messy and un-straight? Straight Lines is the key to success! ^^
Second, maybe not so much helpful, Fade In and Fade Out! Also a Paintbrush's option, you just simply type how many steps to fade in or out.
I hope this helped you.

 

[GAniksdal]

To me, it looks ugly. As Dan said, majority of this skin looks like scratched up metal. Messy. Hmm... maybe this can help you. When I use PhotoImpact, and it's Paintbrush (normal brush tool) there's an option called Choose a painting mode, which consists of Freehand, Straight Lines and Connected Lines. I don't know if Photoshop, GIMP and other programs have that, but try to find it. Straight Lines will definately help you with straightness. You see how those white outlines on her cape are messy and un-straight? Straight Lines is the key to success! ^^
Second, maybe not so much helpful, Fade In and Fade Out! Also a Paintbrush's option, you just simply type how many steps to fade in or out.
I hope this helped you.

ok, Thx FrIkY
I'll try to fix that

 

[Misha]

~rejected~ (sorry hawk >.>;; )

what the heck did you do D=
return to your pevious skin. ASAP

... damn @.@;;

 

[RaijinSpark]

Very Very Very Nice!!

 

[Tha_Wc3_Map_Maker]

nice work there dude, but ehm... plz make the face better and what is with the boobs , looks like spikes hehe

 

[GAniksdal]

nice work there dude, but ehm... plz make the face better and what is with the boobs , looks like spikes hehe

If you wanna know, the model is like that
anyway.... thx

 

[Misha]

remove the n00b glow on eyes, paint 'em red and then, use photoshop\layer\inner glow option to create right kind of red glowing eyes >.>;;

and too rework the face skin and armor/robe... they're ruined >.>;;

 

[infrenus]

Humm... this cold be useful.

Rework in these eyes, for now they are strange, make like Misha said, I garantee will be heavily better. And for the robe thingie give one or another detail and be inspired by something...

If you work in these skin this can be very usefull guy!

 

[Misha]

Humm... this cold be useful.

Rework in these eyes, for now they are strange, make like Misha said, I garantee will be heavily better. And for the robe thingie give one or another detail and be inspired by something...

as i said in PM.... the eyes need to be lowered and made more intense, while keeping that shape i made ya.

If you work in these skin this can be very usefull guy!

You mean, Girl? XD


EDIT: i just drew the eyes.... so i didn't pay much atention to where they should be...

a lill chalenge for our skiner ^^

 

[GAniksdal]

as i said in PM.... the eyes need to be lowered and made more intense, while keeping that shape i made ya.


You mean, Girl? XD


EDIT: i just drew the eyes.... so i didn't pay much atention to where they should be...

a lill chalenge for our skiner ^^

Thx for the challenge
I'd took the eyes a little down... but i see now that it's something wrong with 'em I'll try to make it better in next update

 

[Misha]

..... i hope you don't ruin 'em again >.>;;

 

[infrenus]

Uh... my bad, sorry oAo"
But I am looking for this now

 

[Kercyn]

Now, that's a lot better than the previous 2! Good job on the eyes. I still think you should work on the skin. Change it from grey to something else, like dark blue, because it looks metallic, no matter how smooth it has become.

 

[Misha]

nice the eyes still sit a wee bit too high. and the cloths have absolytely no folds, fix that.

and yeah.... shading, highlights,shading,highlights,shading.......

 

[GrandApothecary]

Good skin buddy, but do a little work on the eyes they look like there.. I dont know off?

 

[GAniksdal]

Now, that's a lot better than the previous 2! Good job on the eyes. I still think you should work on the skin. Change it from grey to something else, like dark blue, because it looks metallic, no matter how smooth it has become.

Thx, Kercyn
You see that, Misha. someone like the eyes you made
But, i don't think I can make 'em dark blue, it's after all called 'Black Elf'.

UPDATED

 

[infrenus]

Oh, dont dark blue, but these light bluish gray

 

[Misha]

remove the nose ridge, which is conected with the eyebrow. it looks weird like that
lower eye a bit and give 'em more intense look.

also darken the skin and paint good highlights.

 

[GAniksdal]

remove the nose ridge, which is conected with the eyebrow. it looks weird like that
lower eye a bit and give 'em more intense look.

also darken the skin and paint good highlights.

Ok, Thx for the help guys
Isn't theese good highlight's?

 

[Misha]

noup.
mainly the face is the problem.
in fact the nose ridge and eyebrows are connected.
make a gap of skin between those two.

 

[Krarnal]

The eyes looks kinda weird. You should change the rotation of them

 

[Misha]

The eyes looks kinda weird. You should change the rotation of them

noup, just position, a lill lower that is.

and that nose ridge.

 

[GAniksdal]

Thank you so much, you guys
Very helpfull

---Updating---

---UPDATED---

 

[Misha]

fix the nose ridge quickly C: or i shall personally kill it

 

[Silverfish423]

yes, the face is the problem at the moment. it looks stretched and not very natural (to me). the nose looks long because their is lighting all the way up to the eyes. make it gray like the rest of the body (the part between the eyes) and it will fix that problem. also, make the eyes less slanted and make the shade of pink slightly less bright. if u fix those, i will give u a thumbs up and +rep =D