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Black Elf Sorceress.blp

Submitted by GAniksdal
This bundle is marked as approved. It works and satisfies the submission rules.
This is a skin I made cause of a contest... but it was over when I was finished. xD
So I decided to upload it here on THW.

Description: The Black Elves are a race in Keiji's Dawn of Life. Their skin is of an ash gray and their hair is black. Their eyes are of that of a demonic red glow, as they were once corrupted by a demon. The Black Elves tend to wear very spiky armors. Scaly, and mostly consists of dark iron or silver. Ravens are also a very fond theme, so they use much black feathers on their equipment. For clothing almost all dark colors are very attractive, and the lust of wearing the bones of slain Demon opponents is popular, in order to show the demons just how superior they are.

Update 1: Make the skin smoother + little more shading
Update 2: Maked some big changes and added a few stuff
Update 3: reworked her face, and her armour( shoulder, boots ) and added more Team color, made the glow much better.
Update 4: reworked her face + her eyes.
Update 5: added more contrast to the face + made the cape cleaner.
Update 6: Darkened the cape
Update 7: added more highlight's (fixed the face a bit) + lowered the eyes a little bit.
Update 8: Fixed the nose.
Update 9: lowered the eyebrow. and added some stuff.
Update 10: REMOVED those 'things' on the cape.. + some small changes.
Update 11: Fixed that weird highlight on the nose

Want to thank Misha (for help with the eyes)

So hope you like it ^^
plz give credits if you use it.

Keywords:
Black Elf, Sorceress, Black, Elf
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Black Elf Sorceress.blp (Texture)

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18:45, 22nd May 2009 Hawkwing: We've decided to approve your skin, but we want you to continue to make changes or we may consider returning it to pending. The eyes are a rather strange shape and they are oddly defined. Also, work on the shading in...
  1. 18:45, 22nd May 2009
    Hawkwing: We've decided to approve your skin, but we want you to continue to make changes or we may consider returning it to pending. The eyes are a rather strange shape and they are oddly defined. Also, work on the shading in the face and distinguishing different parts of it. The shading on the bridge of the nose is a bit unorthodox too. You might want to look into that.

    Edit: I'm almost inclined to reject the skin, because of those glowly things you put in the corners of the cape.
     
  2. Keiji

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    Making something from Dawn of Life is always teh win. You should make the eyes a bit more... life like though >.> They are, after all, mortals :p
     
  3. GAniksdal

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    Thx, man:grin:
    I'll try to make the eyes more human like(or something like that) in next update.
     
  4. Misha

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    ~undefined
    ~lill recolor here and there
    ~lacks shading
    ~lacks highlights
    ~confusing o_O
    ~bad eyes
    ~uneven colors

    Rating: 2.46/5 Lacking

    ~Misha~


    EDIT: freehand the ear.
     
    Last edited: May 10, 2009
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    Oh noes. This is something new.
     
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    I agree with Misha. But prankly, I'll add mine:
    - bad freehand.
    - blurry.
    - skin so rough. elves has flawless and smooth skins.
    - If you mean dark elf, it isn't. It looks like an undead or a zombie elf.
     
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    She reminded me of Ironaya in a robe xD
    She looks like a combination of a demonic being and a stone giant, not an elf :)
     
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    The majority of this skin looks like scratched up metal and need some proper color blending.
     
  9. Misha

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    i agree.

    I mean.. the only smooth and good thing are her boobs 83 and they too are not much, they rather look like spheres =S

    the rest of the skin should be smooth as chest area....

    well yeah yeah.. chest and boobs need some improvement too.. kinda like... in between them and a bit up should be somethin', they aren't perfect spheres

    EDIT: wanna moar construcive/weird comments? x3
     
  10. GAniksdal

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    Hehe, yeah:xxd:

    I'm working on that smooth thing now, I have taken the feet and the boobs... gonna update it soon
     
  11. Keiji

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    matmat, it isnt dark elf, its Black Elf, from my story >.>
    And they quite have a little war-torn skin really.
     
  12. Misha

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    ..... then there should be subtle scarrs, not shredded metal efect x3

    also... her colarbone needs showing a bit... that area is... plain oO

    hmm.. tip to fix the "orbs" is to smudge 'em a bit in the upper edge part. that should make 'em better. C:
     
  13. Keiji

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    Elves with steel skin... hmmmz... Why havnt I thought of that before?! Teh AWESOME :p
     
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    So shall I make the skin smoother or shall I just leave it like it is?
    Thx for commets all :)
     
  15. Keiji

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    Lol, I was joking around. Make it smoother with some scars here and there, small ones though >.>
     
  16. Misha

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    ...and certainly fix the boobies to i can end my fixation with 'em :cute:
     
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    Yeah, yeah Misha i'm gonna fix them so... relax:grin:
     
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    Shadows and hightlights pl0x. And some more details.
     
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    Ah, now is much nicer :)

    but the metal on the spaulders and boots needs reworking.

    and also the hair is weird.... fix that too.

    ~Misha~


    EDIT: moar shadows and highlights on the skin, reduce glow AROUND eyes and rework that cape to something better, it is just weird.