Black Arrow V1.0

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4 November 2015
Bribe: Rejecting due to the status of this resource being "needs fix" for years.

19:11, 20th Sep 2009
Deuterium:

Review

1. Spell is neither MUI nor MPI.


2. Well, both ways the kill is going to be for the triggering unit, so this:

• (Life of Unit[2]) Less than 5.00

Should be:

• (Life of Unit[2]) Less than 0.41

And don't damage it afterwards.


3. Although in my opinion the Wait isn't much of a problem here, avoiding using it.


4. In the Black Arrow Check trigger, add some as much adjustable globals as you can to make it possible for the user to adjust all he wants there.



One of my favorite spells! Idea is one of a kind and very useful. Just fix what I mentioned and I guess you're good to go.

 

[Dynasti]

meh, good enough

 

[baassee]

Lovely spell. Love the idea. Love it all. But

Isnt it better to make a variable for all speciall effects? like

• action
• create special efffect at ...
• set last created effect to ...
• call destroy effect udg...

because it's ALOT of destroy last created effect and ALOT of effects after each other thought but it works anyway ...

for now

 

[redscores]

Both ways would be the same, but your way needs 1 more variable, so his way, the usual way like everyone does it is better.

 

[-Berz-]

Thanks guys for the comments! =)

@baassee

As redscores said, it haves no difference, just one more variable and it works the same, i should do that if i would use Jass, but as far as i know destroying effect right away in Gui works just fine

 

[baassee]

oh, never knew that. Well knew that about the jass too but yours gui so

 

[xxdingo93xx]

Uhm, I would recommend to upload this spell just after the contest for now, this is kinda like a double submit and thats against the rules

 

[Kingz]

Nice spell, keep it on ^^

 

[Wizardum]

this spell isn't completely leakless and it isn't mui. But all in all good spell

[EDIT] I guess it's my mistake, it's leakless, but still not mui

 

[-Berz-]

@All

Thanks for the comments!

@Dingo

I think nothing is wrong

@Wizardum

I said it snot MUI...

 

[Wizardum]

oops I saw it now sorry.

Keep it up!

 

[-Berz-]

Np

I'm working on some new spell, it will be out soon =)

 

[Wizardum]

do you need help making it MUI? I'll gladly help you

 

[SrebrniLav]

This is awesome? Do you need custom icon for it?

 

[Rmx]

AWESOME idea the Trigering maybe Better but the idea is too Creative 4/5 for just coz it isn't MUI the -1 still i will put it 5/5 Try for MUI Wicked

 

[-Berz-]

@Rmx

Thanks! =)

Well, I'm waiting for Wizardum to help me with mui...

 

[Kni9ht]

Good spell, creative ideas, I give it 5/5

 

[whitecrusader13]

omg that a creative spell!!!i give 5/5 for it to!!!
is it autocast or?
~White

 

[-Berz-]

Thanks for the comments =)

No its not auto-cast

 

[TheHunterKiller]

Awesome. Just what i needed, awesome. Awesome.

 

[-Berz-]

To bad it's not MUI

And I'm to lazy to rework the whole thing :<

 

[baassee]

Still 1 of the best spells and most creative one on this site! Mui or not !!!

 

[-Berz-]

Hehe, thanks

 

[Deuterium]

Believe it or not BZK, this was one of the spells that inspired me into joining hive and becoming a spell maker =)

Deuterium's Brief Review

Black Arrow V1.0

1. Spell is neither MUI nor MPI.


2. Well, both ways the kill is going to be for the triggering unit, so this:

• (Life of Unit[2]) Less than 5.00

Should be:

• (Life of Unit[2]) Less than 0.41

And don't damage it afterwards.


3. Although in my opinion the Wait isn't much of a problem here, avoiding using it.


4. In the Black Arrow Check trigger, add some as much adjustable globals as you can to make it possible for the user to adjust all he wants there.



One of my favorite spells! Idea is one of a kind and very useful. Just fix what I mentioned and I guess you're good to go.

Deuterium​

 

[-Berz-]

Well, I can try to fix it, thou I'll need more practice with hashtables to make it MUI.

But first I'll finish that Frost spell.