Battle of Middle Kalimdor v1.0

[DwarfBoy]

So, I played it a bit. I have a few things I want to point out.
> Is english your first language? Because I've noticed a few errors. "You heroes cannot revivable" is one of them.
> The camera is so loose in this map. I don't know why, but it kinda slides whenever I press any of the arrow keys.
> Oh hai Garrosh. I guess this is what happens when you [insert lore stuff here]. Ignoring that, why is he so big? He's 2/3's as tall as the towers. His own units are so small compared to him.
> I ate Ancient Power, yet nothing happens. I think this might be broken.
> Why can't a Gold Deposit be closer to the mine? I feel it would be safer, and quicker, if the miners have a deposit as opposed to walking all the to and fro the main base.
> The unit production building and upgrade building needs a new location. One where they're more easily noticable.
> Why are the upgrades so fucking expensive? Their price should be cut by a 3rd.

Overall, I'd call this... mediocre. Not terrible, just kinda meh overall, I guess. I give it a 3 out of 5.

 

[fidigo123]

So, I played it a bit. I have a few things I want to point out.
> Is english your first language? Because I've noticed a few errors. "You heroes cannot revivable" is one of them.
> The camera is so loose in this map. I don't know why, but it kinda slides whenever I press any of the arrow keys.
> Oh hai Garrosh. I guess this is what happens when you [insert lore stuff here]. Ignoring that, why is he so big? He's 2/3's as tall as the towers. His own units are so small compared to him.
> I ate Ancient Power, yet nothing happens. I think this might be broken.
> Why can't a Gold Deposit be closer to the mine? I feel it would be safer, and quicker, if the miners have a deposit as opposed to walking all the to and fro the main base.
> The unit production building and upgrade building needs a new location. One where they're more easily noticable.
> Why are the upgrades so fucking expensive? Their price should be cut by a 3rd.

Overall, I'd call this... mediocre. Not terrible, just kinda meh overall, I guess. I give it a 3 out of 5.

Thank you for the experiences you conveyed to me. English not my first language, because my race turk. My map still developing and i am the only one person. I repair errors thanks.

 

[fidigo123]

So, I played it a bit. I have a few things I want to point out.
> Is english your first language? Because I've noticed a few errors. "You heroes cannot revivable" is one of them.
> The camera is so loose in this map. I don't know why, but it kinda slides whenever I press any of the arrow keys.
> Oh hai Garrosh. I guess this is what happens when you [insert lore stuff here]. Ignoring that, why is he so big? He's 2/3's as tall as the towers. His own units are so small compared to him.
> I ate Ancient Power, yet nothing happens. I think this might be broken.
> Why can't a Gold Deposit be closer to the mine? I feel it would be safer, and quicker, if the miners have a deposit as opposed to walking all the to and fro the main base.
> The unit production building and upgrade building needs a new location. One where they're more easily noticable.
> Why are the upgrades so fucking expensive? Their price should be cut by a 3rd.

Overall, I'd call this... mediocre. Not terrible, just kinda meh overall, I guess. I give it a 3 out of 5.

by the way you need consume ancient power from drop nzorh and need level 10. And go ancient temple and Kill Fallen Ancient.

 

[deepstrasz]

This is not a campaign i.e. a file ending with: .w3n. Please remove the campaign tag. This is not an RPG either.

Training buildings are somewhat hidden given the perspective. You could highlight them at the start of the game. Also, many of the trees block vision.
Although it says you can only train one hero type (demi-god or whatever), you can trick the game training more in the pending/waiting list.
Shouldn't the demi-god which is trained only once from a number of four (I think) be a hero? It doesn't really make sense otherwise when there are troops more powerful than those to be trained at least 2 times, especially when they don't even have armour and damage upgrades...
Many units have improper icons. Some abilities just have other icons and their buffs retain that of the original spell.
Warcraft III usual spells all over.

I've got cheater message a while after N'gam or whatever's death but I did not use any cheat. Played on easy...

Awaiting Update.

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[DUTY OF RS]

Very cool map, i love the idea and how you made it.
The terrain in this map is very smooth. BUT it have some few tree's that are way to big, also some pathing blocks are leaking (missing).

I got this message when i captured the gold mine "Cheater"... I went into ur map and saw the trigger for it. And its the most idiotic thing i have ever seen. When you get your workers, and if you order them to start harvesting from a tree, then you will lose the game and it tells us that we cheated..???? First of all, remove that trigger, and go to the editor and change the ability to ONLY HARVEST GOLD! not both.
Also i had to restart the game 3-4 times before i manage to get the gold mine too.? Make the region for it bigger...
And 2 suggestions. Reduce the number of gold that the players get. It's way to much to get 400 from each peon.. The second is that make a max number of how many peons that can be trained too.

Well last time i played i manage to kill almost everything on the map, all that was left is the shadowmoon clan or whatever you called them. But i couldn't get to them and kill their boss or anything, so i was like "what have i cheated on now????"... I went to this thread and i saw ur post that i need to get my hero to level 10... i were 7. So how can i get my hero to 10 if there aint anything left to kill?????!

Overall a good map but some problems i mentioned is enough to get the map Rejected.
Still you said it aint a complete map. On this thread ONLY COMPLETED MAPS can be posted here.

So im voting for Rejection/Need Fix.

 

[deepstrasz]

When you get your workers, and if you order them to start harvesting from a tree, then you will lose the game and it tells us that we cheated..????

Ahhhh, so that's what happened to me then!

 

[fidigo123]

Very cool map, i love the idea and how you made it.
The terrain in this map is very smooth. BUT it have some few tree's that are way to big, also some pathing blocks are leaking (missing).

I got this message when i captured the gold mine "Cheater"... I went into ur map and saw the trigger for it. And its the most idiotic thing i have ever seen. When you get your workers, and if you order them to start harvesting from a tree, then you will lose the game and it tells us that we cheated..???? First of all, remove that trigger, and go to the editor and change the ability to ONLY HARVEST GOLD! not both.
Also i had to restart the game 3-4 times before i manage to get the gold mine too.? Make the region for it bigger...
And 2 suggestions. Reduce the number of gold that the players get. It's way to much to get 400 from each peon.. The second is that make a max number of how many peons that can be trained too.

Well last time i played i manage to kill almost everything on the map, all that was left is the shadowmoon clan or whatever you called them. But i couldn't get to them and kill their boss or anything, so i was like "what have i cheated on now????"... I went to this thread and i saw ur post that i need to get my hero to level 10... i were 7. So how can i get my hero to 10 if there aint anything left to kill?????!

Overall a good map but some problems i mentioned is enough to get the map Rejected.
Still you said it aint a complete map. On this thread ONLY COMPLETED MAPS can be posted here.

So im voting for Rejection/Need Fix.

Thanks for sharing your experiences. I am fix tje few bugs for tonight low exp rate missing blockers and cheat disabler.

 

[fidigo123]

I am only fixing the greedisgood cheat because there is nothing to buy with lumber

 

[DUTY OF RS]

After ur last update with the pathing blockers.
I can not reach the Obelisk for the 3 runes. I cannot walk to that point because of some pathing blockers are blocking my way to it. (Elf Village)
Dont rush when doing such things and always test your map before updating...

 

[fidigo123]

After ur last update with the pathing blockers.
I can not reach the Obelisk for the 3 runes. I cannot walk to that point because of some pathing blockers are blocking my way to it. (Elf Village)
Dont rush when doing such things and always test your map before updating...

sorry but i do not understand the your error I tried to read the comment I walking really easily walking all obelisks near please show me ss

 

[DUTY OF RS]

 

[Oraien]

So...
Map looks - very beautiful
Playthrough - English is more broken than a computer thrown from a 10-story building, units are nice, basic, limited, all that good stuff, though I don't understand their cost being like this yet you receive so much gold with every peon, the narrow areas are too narrow for a 200 food army
Errors - after the fiery ancient spawn, the ancients stopped sending units, the shadowmoon are invulnurable throughout the whole game, the peons change the prioritised fortress, making the walk many times longer, Caveclan leader hasn't got his W (rally the troops I believe?) on hotkey
Overall - really good and really nice, but fix the shadowmoon, they just make it unfinishable :\