Ancient Heroes v1.02

[Moderator]

11:56, 2nd Apr 2011
-Kobas-:
Status: Rejected

 

[ksStr]

One word, BAD!!
Many things NEEDS to be IMPROVED, btw have you even tried this map YOURSELF??

 

[RelayeR]

Yes i tried the map...Could you advise me somehow?

 

[ksStr]

Okay...
-Please move your player screen at start to middle, since hero choosing is at middle, put it in middle rather then else where
-I can't see heroes when Im choosing and I just bumped into one of them@@
-Creeps are useless after level 5 since there are no shops around, I din't see any, tell me if there is, sry about that
-terrain is plain =D, it's just some walls to divide each section...

 

[light bolt30]

Please improve the description; tell us about the gameplay, heroes, items, screenshots, credits. Here's a list of BB Codes to help you. Judging from the preview image, the terrain is plain and boring. This map will not be approved anytime soon.

 

[RelayeR]

Ok im working on it. The shops are on bottom left and right. Thx for help Sory for my bad English !!

 

[ksStr]

-Ya, I just saw the shops there, but since creeps are giving so much money, improve your items please, not just normal melee items that won't help in battle
One more thing, Heroes skill aren't balanced..
-some get 4 hero skills + 1 unit skill
-some get 3 hero skills + 2 unit skills

 

[RelayeR]

Ok. Can someone help me? I dont know how to fix the map to allways visible.

 

[ksStr]

Triggers
event: map initialization
action: disable fog of war thn disable black mask

 

[RelayeR]

Ok THX!!

I will update it soon.

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-Kobas-

 

[Magnet199]

hey, if you need any help just send me a message im always glad to help you
i will test map the next update it quick,
judging from people's comments your map will get rejected, its harder then you think when creating your first map I'm always here to help you

 

[RelayeR]

ok thank you

 

[Magnet199]

ok map seems updated well, testing now

EDIT: ehe, ok here is what i got,

The Bad Stuff:
- too many nutrals running around, blocking and annoying
- yeah i noticed the creeps just like to stick their noses into other fights
- the stone golems, just wont stop stunning (hurl boulder), i dunno maybe the cd is 5-10 sec only -_-
- ^ that goes to the ice revanants
- you say that skills are custom, i know what you mean, but the real custom spells are the ones used by triggers/jass, learn or find someone who knows how to work on those things, will help map a lot
- the fountains heal very slowly
- the end game troll, is good for late game to end the game
- the granite golems give too many great items, i guess u went for that?
- items are Blizzard :S, create your own give something unique
- the hero names do not match

The Good Stuff:
- new idea for PvP (optional)
- the idea for abilities
- terrain not bad (imo)

Suggestions:
- create your own spells (not blizzard and change icon)
- create your own items (not blizzard)
- more hero ideas
- balance creeps
- try to make the creeps not to attack a fight that doesnt belong to them

Map can be better
Rate:2/5 (will change if it really got improved)
Rate 1+ (for trying and not giving up)

Keep it up, maybe you will have a good map after all
Just dont give up

 

[RelayeR]

Ok thank you very much already beginning to work on it.

 

[ironman47]

Hey kill the monster ain't no quest! Remove these quest dude until you actually come up with something. And don't put the map info under hidden tags nobody wants to go through clicking on every button to read micro sized text under hidden tags.

 

[Slayer14]

Map Description

Humans

Archmage
Mountain King
Blood Mage
Assassin


Orcs

Blademaster
Warrior
Shadow Hunter
Shaman NEW!


Undeads

Lich
Dreadlord
Crypt Lord
Dark Ranger


Night Elves

Demon Hunter
Warden

Looks to me like you have three new Heroes. Why is only the one say "NEW!" next to his name? In my opinion, I think using a lot of standard "melee" Heroes is boring.

Map Description

1.) 4 Players can play it.
1.) 14 Heroes.
2.) Custom abilities.
3.) Custom stores.
4.) Abilitie levels 3-9.
5.) Maximum level 25.
6.) Automatic respawn in 10 seconds.
7.) Three Questes
8.) One Boss
I will enlarge my map soon.

You have two number ones listed and I don't think that "4 Players can play it." should be on the list.

4.) Abilitie levels 3-9.

This should be "Ability levels 3-9" instead. (Do not include the quotes.)

7.) Three Questes

This should be "3 Quests". (Do not include the quotes.)


Like ironman47 said, "Kill the Monsters." isn't a much of a quest. And PvP would fall the category of Gameplay, it isn't a quest at all.

 

[RelayeR]

Sorry for the mistakes. I am not good in the English .

 

[ksStr]

Okay, seems a lot of improvements have been done
trying......@@
-My skills are too much and my level is n enough to learn all of them@@
-Max is 20, not 25....(I played v1.1)
-Use more tiles please, don't just use 1 out of 6 different tiles from Lodaeron Summer
-I noticed your revive triggers is, complicated
instead of using yours
You should use

event -a unit dies
cond - triggering unit==hero
actions -wait & revive dying unit

 

[RelayeR]

Ok thank you. I try it

 

[RelayeR]

The respawn system what you wrote works well, but I think it is almost the same.

 

[RelayeR]

Hi all I will not be here possible one week.. The reason is because I'm going to repair my computer. If you delete my map from the web, it does not matter. When I get here i will put here the updated version 1.2 whit fixed map and spells!! ))

 

[ksStr]

The respawn system what you wrote works well, but I think it is almost the same.

It highly different ><
You wrote like 10+ triggers for each heroes for their revive right, now you only need just one ..
It save lots of time

Try not to post so many times-.-
USE EDIT BUTTON

 

[RelayeR]

I uploaded the v1.02, with quite large changes! )

 

[Magnet199]

question bro, the updates goes from 1.2 to 1.02 to 1.01? lol
will take better look soon
good to see you still working on it

 

[RelayeR]

Whoops

 

[RelayeR]

ok done..

 

[Magnet199]

dude stop double posting lol
use the "Edit" button under your last comment,
use that if the last comment was from you, because some people get annoyed

 

[RelayeR]

oh ok I did not know it sory

 

[ksStr]

Yes, I am back =D
-Seems like you put a door to prevent creeps from coming out hit us @@
-Terrain still needs to be improved..
-Hotkeys problem, not a big deal, fix it if you can xD