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Hurray! I can get on on my computer! :D I can't believe this is happenning! XD
This didn't update aas much as I thought. lol

*Rhiannon reached her throne. It was covered in gold and silver sheets of metal, with gold spikes prtuding from the sides and top. To her right, asat a large crystal plate. She put a paw on it, and started drwing a pattern with her claw. The plate warped around her claw, sending small ripples through it, and leaving a small cut on the surface of the path her claw had taken.
"Come, ancient spirits. Awake from your slumber, and walk the forests of old. Awake from your slumber, and make the forests cold. Rise, soldiers, those who served past kings. Come out, my Wraiths, and serve your queen again. We move to Zeos. Let no one survive." Rhiannon finised drawing the spell, and it began glowing a light blue. The pattern dissapeared and the plaste was back to normal.*
 
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((Continued))
*She then began drawing another spell. "Inamicus Partriscous. Verum demor. Sereem korat benaora denor. Mey the Wraiths protet the spirits and warriors of old, and allow them to complete their mission." The spell glowed red and dissapeared. Rhiannon got up and walked away from her throne, and began to wander her lair. "The Wraiths shall make their hearts cold, and bring panic to the populace. Afterall, my plan is only just begginning." She reached a large door and started speaking in an ancient dragon tongue. The door's pictures glowed a bright green and locks could be heard from the other side. The door slowly opened.*
Hope you guys enjoy what's going to happen soon. As I promised, it's getting a lot better. XD
 
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Well.. eh.. I can see that you mean no harm..
*Her dog came closer to Torin sniffing around.*
"What is this?!" Torin thought.. It was coming closer and closer?! the creature was big! much bigger than Torin. Torin jumped on Sonya's lap to stay away from the big creature.. now it stated making noise! Torin was afraid of it and was pushing hard against Sonya's stomach..
"Vangels, come here!" the girl shouted.. suddenly the creature stopped making noise and walked away.. Torin was relieved..
Sorry for my dog... He's a bit curious.. the girl said being a bit ashamed of him..
 
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hey guys i am back :D
Nick leaves the archons palace his training finally finished and on his first rounds, his orders were it to just walk around nexus and keep a presence to keep the peace stuff like that. " its not like much is gonna happen maybe a fight a most" Nick thinks to himself.
 
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*As the carraige flies through the forest, sounds could be heard outside. They had just started, getting slightly louder as time progressed. They weren't moans, the sounds of walking, they were silent sounds of the wind, except... it was everywhere. Upon opening the carraige's curtain, one could see bright blue figures going in the other direction. Something was happening outside, but the figures, aas many as there were, we too ar to tell what they were. But suddenly, more appeared, and one spirit appeared in the carraige. It dissapeared as fast as it came, following only the path.

Frost appeared on the windows as they started to freeze. The sky was clear, and large cloaked figures could be seen descending into the forest.*
 
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The dog sprang around feeling uncomfortable.. "I hoped that you could tell me..?" the girl asked a bit frightened.

*Torin sprang up standing on Sonyas lap looking around if it would come back again. It did not feel normal.* "Nirthy, what was that..?" Torin asked curious.
 
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*Torin pushed his snout against the window looking outside.. but the window was very cold. Torin did not expect this and quickly pulled back..* "Nirthy, something is not right. where are we going? do they have trees where we are going?" Torin asked being afraid and confused.*
 
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(are they near nexus , as in being able to be seen from the outer walls)
*Nick continues his rounds walking to his watch spot on the outer wall, when he arrives he leans forward against the edge of the wall with a 'huff' then lifts his head up and looks out on the countryside*
 
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*the girl grabed her dog tight as she was afraid of what was happening. a chill went down her spine and the dog let out high-pitched yelps and cries.*
*Torin looked at Sonya, looking how she reacted.. but she didn't seem conferable as well. Torin suddenly did not felt save.. "Normally Nirthy would say to me that it was alright.. but this time.. she did not.." he thought for himself*
(added :3 kinda btw.. i do not understand what just happened :p does not matter for my character but still :p)
 
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*Kalek was flying now, away from the ruins of the cart. He flew to gain distance, and get some sense of his location. But now, he flew over a vast forest. And he could see little into the forest's thick branches as he flew above the trees, his wings shaking them with every stroke.*
 
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*Eventually, the blue figures dissapeared. The Wraiths had flown into the forest, and the ice on the windows began to melt. The carriage was soon left alone, as it sped by the last of the spirits, their blue images fading away.

Within the hour, the spirits were in the city, surrounding civilians and freezing the water supply. The city's streets was filled with blue lights, as people ran and hid.*
 
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Torin felt very happy for a moment.. It reminded him of the time. He ran away from Nirthy.. and when he came back... Nirthy was very happy.. though.. this time does seem a bit different.. Torin suddenly felt a chill remembering the ghosts..

The girl was breathing heavily as she still was afraid and tried to calm her dog at the same time.. it did not work that well. the dog jumped around a bit and barked..
"Hussss.." she said to the dog as she was calmed a bit herself.. she needed some distraction now.. "so.. you are a sorceress?" she asked looking at sonya..
 
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What's with the happiness? These aren't Dementors. happiness won't affect them. lol

*Rhiannon watched as the spirits and Wraiths gathered the populace. "Yes," She said, "Take their souls, and let them know the danger they are in." Rhiannon got up and a black portal opened in front of her. "Cleaher, I have a job for you." A small black creature floated out of the portal. "Yes, my Queen?"

"Send a message to the Archon and the two Void Lords. Tell them I would like to meet them. When you refer to me, say "my Queen", don't use my name. I'll talk to them in this order on these days." Rhiannon continued, getting a little quieter as she spoke.*
 
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I'm sorry, but carrying people? Seriously? They can gather the populace just by scaring them over there. If you need info, all you have to do is ask, okay?

*Already, people were dropping to the floor, their bodies instantly cold. Everyone screamed, trying to stay in the center, away from the beings. as soon as one group was finished off, they would move on to find more. It didn't matter if it was day or night, the light blue spirits surrounded people and drained them of their souls.

Meanwhile, the messenger appeared before a large throne. "I have a message for Hellion, Void Lord and ruler of the majority of this planet."*
 
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if details mater that much i will change it -_-
i have deleted it and will delete this in 1 day
 
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"Kind off? you are not?" the girl asked questioning and interested.*
*Torin was relieved that the big creature was calm again. he closed one eye half sleeping on Sonya's lap. listening to what the two girls were talking about, but not understanding a word of it..*
 
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"ohh I euhm understand.." *It was silent for a moment* "but.. why is it secret? it not like anything will happen to you if you tell it right?"
*Torin looked at his braids.. they really are nice.. he thought.. pushing a bit more against Sonya. then he rolled on his back looking at her..*
 
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"You are hiding? did you do something wrong?!" the girl asked pushy.. ""Or... I remember.. my grandmother used to tell me stories.. and the only thing that has such shockwave.. was.. the Archon?

*Torin still looked up.. hmm she seems to be ignoring me.. he thought .. as he rolled back and pushed his snout between his paws.*
 
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The girl giggled a bit too.. "My grandma used to tell story's about the Archon and also about Hellion and Devilak... So you know the Archon?" The girl asked with wide opened eyes..

*Torin thought she now did notice him as he laid still calmly.. it was comfortable.. and warm...*
 
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The girl yawned.. "I see..." I feel a bit sleepy." she said. looking at her dog who already slept... "I think I am going to sleep now." *she said as she closed her eyes and leaned against the side. slowly sliding down over the whole row of seats.*

*Torin still looked.. the conversation seemed to be over. He looked at Sonya. "..Nirthy..?" Torin laid his paw on Sonyas bracelet..*
 
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lol They're called fire sticks or boom sticks. They make scary noises. XD

*The messanger appeared in the Archon's throne room and Devilak's throne room. He repeated his message, telling them that his Queen would like to speak to them, giving the time and date, he left.To say the least, Devilak was not happy.*
 
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I wasn't even thinking about TNT. Boomstick can refer to the stick that makes a loud noise, as in a gun. Also, fire stick can refer to guns because the current guns in the RP (we're not modern yet!) has fire shoot out the end when the person pulls the trigger. Also, they would have to be using musket balls, and because that's as far as they've gotten, they'd be a little inaccurate. The wind would mess them up even more. XD
 
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The Mayans, when they were invaded by the Spanish, noted the strange booming sticks the Spanish carried. These were the spanish rifles, and were noted for their fire and loud noise. The olf rifles were known by those who didn't understand them, as boom-sticks. So no, not TNT, but guns, like sacrid said. Oh, what amazing things history can tell us :/
 
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"I was hidden near I saw everything.. then they came to our home.. you were still inside.. I saw the people screaming.. then one of them made our home give light.. you were still inside.. then suddenly our home dropped to the ground.. I ran towards you but... but.. the sand around me jumped up.. (bullets) you told me if that happened I should run.." Torin said in a sad tone.*
 
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Torin looked up again..* "I did come closer to you. Our whole building was giving light.. and it was warm! On of those humans came closer to me.. I ran away not looking back.. I ran to the water place.. and stayed there for a long time.. Listening.. I listened to the noise and after some time it stopped.. I came back again.. I ran towards our home.. but you were not there! I saw mother laying on the ground.. and father.. but they did not move.. they were covered in blood.. I tried to find you.. but you were gone.." Torin softly yelped..*
 
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