A Naga Temple

[poffo]

This is a terrain that i made for a naga maps so this the Nagas Temple , any suggestion , idea or criticism will be welcome...MADE LOTS OF CHANGE, REMADE IT!
CHANGES:made cliffs and some more brushs and sun.

Nagas Temple(IMPROVED)

 

[Piwlady]

Pink box alert!

Ookay, so first... use In game vision or what ever it is, press "V" before you get that screenshot. Add sky. And... download UTM!!!

And then we can go to the terrain... it's pretty messy and flat.You could add shrubs and tile varitation. But I suggest you to remake it in UTM. Can't just suggest anything because there is no imports -> can't suggest adding sun or anything..

 

[Racziel]

1. no Sky and infoboxes are very baaad.
2. Blizzard trees are ugly as hell and the trees in the background are to big if u look at the trees in the front. normaly things get smaller if they're far away.
3. the models you used for the temple are to stretched, so they look unrealistic. Try to user more of them (so you can make them smaller) or better models (utm ftw!).

All in all: Pretty good idea but bad execution. Just try it again with utm-models and try to make it more realistic (cause that's what terraining is about).

 

[poffo]

Thanks and now i am reduing it with the UTM....
soon I will post the new one =D.

 

[Dr. House]

Ehm it needs a sky and i see pink boxes you should watch it in game view just press V on your keyboard and you see In game view. and maybe show somthing inside that temple maybe a naga unit or somthing. Also your terrain is very flat do somthing about that. Besides all this i do like the idea it could turn out great

 

[Piwlady]

Thanks and now i am reduing it with the UTM....
soon I will post the new one =D.

Good, looking forward to see it

 

[Archipelago]

It looks so much better now. Though you should use other trees to get a better ruin/exotic look... And try making some mountains in the back...

 

[Piwlady]

That's more like it!

Now I can give suggestions.
Add some varitation on scale of trees. It's still flat, fix it. And add bit more tile varitation.
And lastly, I suggest you to try to make sun, it's good practice and will make this good.

Good job after all.

 

[poffo]

I am going to put some mountains and more variation.
But I ll do that tomorrow.
Thanks for the ideas , totally forgot about the ground variation 0in

 

[Racziel]

Ah, that looks much better!
But i still would suggest you to use gras instead of sand on the ground.
I first thought that the trees stand in water because of the fog, so try to fix that (maybe just delete it).
It would also be better if u would choose another angle for the camera.
And maybe it would look better if you use other tree-models, cause i think that the trees you choose would be better in a Ashenvale/Lordaeron-terrain.

 

[Dr. House]

thats a big inprovement +rep

 

[poffo]

EDIT THE PICTURE
Changelog:Made some cliffs in the back , add some water , more shurbs and remade the sun for better view, hope u guys liked it.
BTW thanks i brg doom

 

[poffo]

Putted some more trees back , and made it more bright...